FIRST DATE- PART 1

MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

*Y0UR POV*

 

I'm very confused by Onew oppa’s behaviour.

 He was acting very weird these days to me.

When we were in the car for our first date

-which ultimately made possible through

the help of Appa-

he just keep quiet and not speak a word to me.

And more strangely,  he always stole a glance toward me

 with a weird  expression again.

Like there was something he hid from me.
And when I ask what's going on with him,

he said if nothing happened and just gave me a fake smile.

 

Finally we arrived at our destination.

 Initially, Onew oppa wants to take me skiing in the mountains.

However, due to extreme weather outside,

then we cancel it and prefer to see a view of Seoul at night Namsan tower.

Onew oppa then parked his car in the parking lot.

As usual, he then untied the belt and straighten my seat belt.

Giving his beautiful smile.
"Jakiya, kajja ..." Said Onew oppa went out of his car and

walked toward the door passenger car,

where I sat down and opened the door for me.
"Oppa, whether it's okay if we go out here?

What if one of our friends to see?"

I asked when exiting the car.

 

"Do not worry, sweetheart, I'm sure no one will ever see us.

 Jjong not possibly bring  Sekyung to the streets at night

because she was pregnant.

Minho and Krystal, as you told me, they're trying wedding dress.

And Taemin also Sulli, I'm sure they are busy with their job.

Kajja ... I do not want you to chill out." Onew oppa said,

holding my right hand and put my hand into his left coat pocket

as he did not release his grip on the palm of my hand.

Make my face blush.
"Op-oppa, what are you doing?" I asked to Onew oppa when

i realized my hand was in his coat pocket.

 

"Honey, you're not wearing gloves. I do not want to lose you in a fast time

just because you're freezing to death." Onew oppa said softly

as he pinched my cheek with his other hand. Make my cheeks grew red.


"Aigoo ~ Jakiya. Why are your cheeks blush easily like that?

How cute my girlfriend ~ " He said again,

but now it does not pinch my cheeks,

but a kiss on the cheek, making me more embarrassed.


"Kajja ~" Then Onew oppa take me away. One hand was still in his pocket,

holding my hand, arm around my shoulder and one hand came towards him.

Makes me feel the warmth of her body.

 

After we bought tickets, we boarded a cable car

to get on top of  Namsan tower.

Onew oppa and I can not select a seat in it

because it has been occupied

by other couples who seem like we're dating.

With very forced, finally we had to stand in the left corner.

As I look towards the outside of the transparent glass’s cable car,

I noticed right below us the lights in the city of Seoul is

 lit with sparkling.

Creating a more beautiful view of Seoul from the top.

And when we were growing up, the lights were smaller but did not

 reduce the brightness, makes me feel to see starlight beneath me,

 and imagine that I was in the highest heaven, along with my Prince,

enjoy starlight under this sky.

 

I realize Onew oppa  more held me tightly,

trying to make my body getting warm.

"I do not want to saw you sick tomorrow after our date.

Appa would have killed me, " he said as he held me.

I stared at the awe of this beautiful view of
Seoul from cable car

which we ride without even a wink.
"Do you like it?" said Onew oppa whispered in my ear,

gives a tingling sensation due to gusts of  his breath that blew my ear.
"Neh, oppa. I loved it. Thank you oppa already invited me here.

 Been a long time since i did not go to Namsan Tower. "

I said, give him my best smile.

 

 

 

"* Sigh * But we can not spend more time for our date today.

See, now 9 pm. We only had a few more hours to spend time together."

He said with a sad face, but adorable.

Makes me want to pinch his chubby cheeks.

"Haha ~ that's okay, oppa. We still have another day to go out, right?"

I said pinching his cheeks using my left hand

– my right hand still in his pocket

sofly to Onew oppa. For a moment I saw his face change

when I pinched his cheeks. Hi is flushed, made me giggle.

 

 

 

Finally we arrived at the Namsan Tower.

Namsan tower has four observation balcony.

And we decided to go to the balcony observing the 4th,

where there are revolving restaurant that rotates once

for 48 minutes. Revolving restaurant is named N Grill.

We chose a seat near the window, which allowed us to enjoy our food,

looking at the four directions of  Seoul from our dinner table.

Onew oppa summon a servant to us ordering our food.
"Jakiya ~ you wanna to eat what?" Ask Onew oppa while looking

 at the menu book he held.

"Hmm ~ I want to eat Pecorino Agnolitti

(a / n: a type of Italian cuisine. While agnolitti is one type of pasta.),

oppa. You yourself want to eat what? "

I asked to Onew oppa after selecting My order.
"Hmm ~ I want to eat Tagliatelle." Onew oppa said.

(a / n: Tagliatelle is the classic Italian pasta is in flush with Bolognese sauce.)

 

 

 

After we had ordered our food, Onew oppa again summon a waitress.
"~ Jie Jie Eun?" Onew oppa call me with my eyes staring deeply and holding hands.
"Neh, oppa?" I stared back at him.
"Hmm ~ do ~" He speaks hesitantly, and his voice quivering slightly.

 

 

 

*END OF YOUR POV*

 

 

 

 

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Littlemrsmalfoy
#1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129
#3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14
#6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie
#7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129
#10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.