YOU MUST BE KIDDING ME

MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

*Narrator's POV *

Today is the day of your engagement.

You really hate your father because he has settings to your

engagement with the man who you didn’t know before.
Sulli and Krystal, your best friend, has come to your house to

help you dress up.
"yahh ~ Lee Jie Eun, how can you not tell us in advance if you want to

 get engaged? Instead your mother who let us about

 your engagement. "Sulli ask you while straightening your hair.

You did not respond and remained silent.
"yahh ~ Lee Jie Eun! Hello! I talked to you."

Sulli said and shook her hand in front of your face,

demanding your attention. But you do not respond.
"Jie Eun, exactly what happened to you? And who's the man

who will get engaged with you? "asked Krystal to you.
Yet  you remain silent and not respond. Slowly the tears fall because

you're sad already in Match with another man. And that means you

can not get along with the person you love.

"Jie-Jie Eun? Why are you crying?" Krystal and Sulli hugged you.

Surprised to see you cry. You still did not answer and continued

 to cry. You're very sad because after you fight with Onew oppa,

you did not see him again and you're never to talk to him again.

As if he had lost swallow the earth. You sobbed so make your two

friends are very worried.
"Jie Eun, what's wrong? Why are you crying?

Did ~ Did  he was not the man your choice?"

Ask Krystal, wiping your tears. You then nodded your  head weakly.

 And continued to cry.
"Geez, sorry Jie Eun, I do not know." Sulli hug you again immediately

felt guilty because she had been to push you to answer questions from her.
"Are you sure you want to continue ~" Krystal ask you, and you just nod.

They then proceed to help you dressing. After about thirty minutes,

finally you're ready to go to the engagement. You're wearing a long black

dress matching with your  high heels.

 

"Aigoo ~ my daughter's so  beautiful." Appa said when saw you out of your room.

You did not respond and do not look at him because you're still very angry with him.
"Jie Eun, we know you'll really hate us.  But, we are sure once you find out who he was,

you'd be happy."  Said  your mother and your hair. You did not respond.
Secretly you look  around the room, trying to find  Onew

oppa’s figure.  But, you didn’t see him

Then you and your two friends and both your parents went to the

Hotel  where the engagement is held.

30 Minutes later ...
 

Finally you get to the hotel.

The ball room was decorated very beautifully

and in such away. The room is white with gold color on the pillars.

On the side of the ballroom has been in good white roses.

Adding elegance of the ballroom.

 And when you enter  the ballroom,

the room was already  filled by the guests  in attendance.

They  came to congratulatory  your engagement.

But even if you do not smile to them  and provide a flat expression.
"Noona, I do not know if  you will be engaged  as  soon  as ~"

Taemin ran at you but suddenly stopped when he saw Sulli.
"Annyeong haseyo, oppa."  Sulli said,  gave  greetings  on Taemin.

However  Taemin not  return  greeting  to  her.
"Where  your  boyfriend?  Are you not with him? " Said Taemin  to Sulli.

From  his eyes, could  be seen  a deep feeling  of  jealousy and sadness that

He  tried  to  cover  it with  cold attitude  to  Sulli.


'Aish ~  Amber!  This  is  all  because of  your  stupied  idea!

Where is your promise  That  says  that  Taemin oppa would  

confess his love to me?  Now  he is thinks  if  you are  a man and

you were my boyfriend, because you're pretending to be my

boyfriend at that time!  Aish!'  Sulli grumbled to herself.

"Jie Eun,  congratulations.  I hope youwill be happy with your fiance."

Said  Kyuhyun oppa,  who had just arrived.  You  did not say anything

And  do  not  respond.  Kyuhyun,  Seohyun,  Yonghwa,  Jjong,  

and other guests who had arrived  a  little confused  by  your  attitude.

"Aish, Jie  Eun!  How can you be  engaged to  another  man?!

Are  you  dumped me now?  Aish~ You made  me heartbroken  Jie Eun."

Kang  In oppa crying in the  arms of Leeteuk  oppa.

Then  Leeteuk oppa  calm  him  down.
"Relax,  yeobbo.  Still there  is me  who is  always there  for  you."

Leeteuk oppa  said and  Kang In  oppa’s  cheek.
"Gomawo, yeoboo.  Saranghae~"  said Kang In oppa.

Then the others see the  behavior  Kang  In and  Leeteuk oppa  in disgust.

"Jie  Eun! How  could you~" You  hear  the very  familiar  voice  to you half  shouted.

When  you look  back,  you see Joon and Jessica.
"Jessica,  are  you  crazy?!  Joon’s  condition  is  still very weak.

 Why  did you bring  him to  here?  And  for what you came  here

Together   with  Joon? " You  said  panic and upset  to Jessica.
"Your  father  invited my  father   to come to  your  engagement,

but  because he was  unable to  attend,  so I was a substitute him.

And  about Joon  oppa, I had told him.  And hetold me if  he wanted

To  come  here."  Said  Jessica,  with  her  annoying   face   and without  guilt.
"Are   you've  lost your  mind?!  See Joon’s  conditions!  He was  not healthy!"

said  Jjong oppa, shouted to Jessica.  Jessica does  not  respond and  want  to

draw Joon’s  hand,  but he  let  go  his  grip of Jessica's  hand.
"You ~I've told it to  you, if  Ican not have you, no one  will be able  to  have you."

Joon said, and leave you then follow  the  steps  of  Jessica.

"They, they really are not sane."  Yonghwa said,  shaking his head.
 

 

"All right, thank you all for coming to engagement our daughter.

 We  really appreciate it." Your  father said, to all the invitations that come.
"Well, to shorten the time, now I'll call my beautiful’s daughter." said your dad.

With the weaker you come forward and stand beside your father.

You glanced around the room, but you do not see Onew oppa.
"I bet you guys are very curious about who the lucky guy who

actually get this angel, right? Okay then. I would call Jie Eun’s fiance."

He then whispered something to someone. He then nodded and went toward the back.

Your heart is beating faster because you really wondering who exactly the man

who would become your future husband.
You hear footsteps behind you. You see the face of all people are surprised

because look at the figure of the man. You immediately think,

if my father chose an old man for me? Or, if he's ugly?
And when you looked, you saw a handsome man wearing a black tuxedo

 standing behind you, bowed his head, but tried to smile to you.
 

 

"On-Onew oppa?!" You cried out in surprise,

seeing a figure that appears in front of you.

 

"Maybe you're all surprised to see my daughter's fiance, but,

 that's reality. My son is my daughter's  future husband. And their  wedding~"

Appa tries to explain everything to all th einvitations, but you cut him off.

"Are you kidding? What do you mean? You Want me marrying my blood brother?! "

Ask you to your father.
"Jie Eun, before Appa would like to apologize to you first. I know I

was wrong not to tell it to you from far-away days,

but this is for your best. Actually, in fact you two were not blood related,  JieEun. "

Appa said. You Heard everyone gasped. Surprised by the words of your father.

"He, he's not my blood  brother?! What do you mean?! Are you

now been playing with me?! "You started to cry and even less understood

by all that had happened.
"We are not siblings, Jie Eun. I'm sorry, I did not tell you in advance. I~"

Onew oppa who had been silent, began to speak, but did not dare look at you.
"What?! So you already know it all before?! Appa, you're joking, right? "

You still do not believe what he has been said.

"You ~Actually you're not~" Before Appa finished explaininge verything to you,

there is an elderly man who came.
"You are my biological daughter, Jie Eun." said the old man, toward you.
"Jong-woon! You bastard! What are you doing here?! "Appa directly

forward  toward the old man and strangle his  neck  who he called Jongwoon.
"Aish ~Jin Min, you still have not changed though. Ij ust want to

 pick up my daughter." said the old man quietly releasing appa’s stranglehold.
"Appa, what are you doing here?" You hear a man yelling at the man who

 claims to be your bioligical father.

"Son?" He immediately was stunned when he saw aguy in front of him.
"Bwoh?! He's your son?!" Your dad said, well, a father who had been raising you

asking to your biological  father, or well, a man who claiming to

be your bioligical father.

You suddenly felt dizzy, too shocked by everything that happened suddenly.

You then see all of them shaded in your eyes, until finally all became dark and

You hear the faint all the people screaming panic to you.

 

 

*END OF NARRATOR'S POV

 

 

 

Hei Guys... I'm updated agaian (yeay)

And... Almost of you guessing she was adopted,

and.... You're right! They're not siblings.

If u all asked, why i make them not siblings

but make a title: marrying my blood brother?!

So, i'll explaining to you. I put question marks (?)

and exclamation marks (!) after words marrying my blood brother.

So, the sentences more like question, not an affirmation.

And, hmm~ most all of you wondering who's park hae ri, right?

Hmm~ u'll know soon.

Thank's 4 all your comment guys :)

and, please still leave a comment :)

i really appreciated it :)

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Littlemrsmalfoy
#1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129
#3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14
#6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie
#7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129
#10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.