my savior, please help us!

MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

 

*ONEW POV*

 

 

"fish ... Fish .... Come buy fish, only five hundred won ..."

Okay, you guys must have wondered why more people are selling fish 

on the first day of my date with Jie Eun. 

* sigh * 

Well, I think this is the worst first date and I just have it. 

The first reason, I and Jie Eun went to our first date together with our beloved mother. 

Well, our mother that we loved so since morning to evening to follow

wherever we go without leaving us just for  a second. 

Oops ...

 Precisely we are  who follow our mother  wherever she go. 

Because after our umma decided to come with us, 

the plans I've made to date with Jie Eun has failed miserably. 

I planned to take her to playing ski in the mountains,

but because our mother to come along, the plan failed miserably.

The second reason, I'm sure only me and Jie Eun who spend time out in the fish market.

 Yess, FISH MARKET. 

Please you guys laughing at me as much as you want.

 I have no objection.

And third, I'm sure only me who felt this. 

The third reason is for our date, 

Aish...

 I mean during our trip with our beloved mother, 

et alone to speak one sentence to Jie Eun, 

to stand beside her I could not. 

My mother today as if turned into a wall of separation for us.

If compared, I am a West German, 

Jie Eun was East Germany,

and our umma is become the berlin’s wall. 

During our walk, she always stood in the middle of both of us. 

Well, laugh ...

 Laugh as much as you want. 

I absolutely will not be angry with you.

Back to reality. 

Now OUR BELOVED UMMA, 

was offered an octopus to the seller in the market. 

Yess, octopus. 

Aish .... 

For what my mom bought an octopus?

"yahh ... Ahjussi. Why is this octopus was so expensive?" 

My mother said to the seller octopus. 

Poor him. 

Had been my mother's only the price bid without buying. 

Believe it or not, my mother had bought almost all kinds of sea fish. 

Start from stingrays (for what my mother bought stingrays?), 

eels, salmons, tuna, shrimp, crab, lobster, 

and many more variants of sea fish 

 in buying by my mother. 

And more incredibly,

 I and Jie Eun who bring all plastics containing these fish. 

Aish ....
"yahh, madam, this is the cheapest price that I gave you. 

Lately octopus prices are expensive indeed." 

Answer these sellers octopus, 

began to lose patience to my mother.

"umma. Anyway, we've bought too much. 

So would you do with these groceries?" 

Jie Eun asked, half-whispered to my mother.

 Poor her. 

She must be very tired following our mother in the fish market.

"Aish ... Sweetheart, don't you  know that the fish was very goodfor health? 

Fish contains proteins that are very high for our bodies."

Said umma.

"yahh, umma! But we've bought too much. 

I think these fish is enough to supply our meal a month." 

I said, holding up a plastic fish that I brought before umma. 

Umma did not answer  and just grinned at me. 

Then she began to bargain again with ahjussi who I believe

 really has lost his patience limit with my mother.

As we are still waiting umma who continued to argue to the fish sellers 

about what should be the price that he sold octopus, 

my phone rang. 

With some difficulty I move the plastics that I was carrying groceries

 into my left hand which was also carrying groceries plastics. 

Before I took my cell phone that I put it in a pants pocket, 

I sniffed my hand.

yuck ... My hand really smell of fish.

 Really stinky.


When I took my phone and saw the name on the screen,

 I immediately picked it up.


"Yeobboseyo, neh? me, umma,

 and Jie Eun is now being shopped in the fish market

 where is located in Inju. 

Well, I do not know why  umma led me all the way around. 

Bwoh?!  Oh, neh,arraseo.”

 After I hung up from my savior, 

-wellI must say that because he's really going to be a savior this time-

 I put my phone in pants pockets.

 (a / n: as i know, inju is a small village in Korea that sells a lot of fish. 

And located quite far from Seoul.

 But, sorry if I'm wrong. Keke ^ ^)


"Uhm ... Umma, may I  go for a while?" 

I asked  umma that *sigh * 

thankfully finished bargain prices octopus,

and eventually did not buy it.

 I have to breathe relieved, 

at least that I tote the groceries will not increase.

"Indeed, where are yougoing Jinki?" 

Umma asked me as we walked toward the counter sales of squid. 

Yahh! Does my mother have not finished shopping for fish?

 

 God ...


"I-i ... Want to take a walk for a while umma." I said. 

After leaving  umma and Jie Eun, 

I immediately rushed to the front of the market. 

Waiting for 'my savior' to come.
 

After waiting about 30 minutes,

 finally 'my savior' come. 

Wow .. He really fast . 

At least if he traveled by car from Seoul to Inju,

 he could spend at least 3 hours. 

But, he came to here in only 30 minutes? Awesome!

 

*END OF ONEW POV*

 

*YOUR POV*

 

Aish ... Actually where Onew oppa go? 

Why until now he had not yet returned? 

God ... My mom is really trying to kill me.

 Just imagine, we had a day of shopping at the fish market, 

but she has not finished shopping. 

My legs were really sore. 

If I knew I would go to the market, 

I do not have to wear high heels.

 And if I know today I would fail dating with Onew oppa, 

I will not bother to choose best clothes I wear today.

 

 

*END OF YOUR POV*

 

 

*NARATOR POV*

 

 

"Oh, Appa, why did you get here so quickly?" 

Ask Onew to his father.


"Actually, when you just left home I follow you from behind.

But because of my stomach pains and wanted to defecate,

I finally had to go to the toilet first,

 and I lost track of you. 

Aish .... 

Actually, why did your mother take you all the way here?"

Appa said and sat on stool next to Onew.


"* Sigh * I do not know Appa. Today umma was acting weird.

Just imagine,

 she asked me and Jie Eun day around the market and buy all types of fish. 

See, my hands and my body smells like fish."

Onew said complained to his father with a sad face.


"tsk ... tsk ... tsk ... I've thought that would be like this.

Do not worry son, I will help you to dating  with Jie Eun. 

Problems about your mother, I'll handle alone. 

All you need now is the sooner you call Jie Eun and tell her to come here."

Appa said,

touching his son's shoulder with a face full of sympathy.


"Jinjja Appa? Gomawo Appa.

Now I'll ~ wait, dating? w-what do you mean by dating, Appa?"

Onew delighted to know that he finallycould go with Jie Eun. 

But when his mind had digested every wordspoken by his father, 

he immediately realized that his father talkedabout dating.

whether Appa know that now I'm date with Jie Eun?

But ... But why he was not angry and instead allow us to date?

And how did he know me and Jie Eun going out day in?

And also ...

Was not he supposed to be angry with us when he knew

his son would be dating his daughter,

which means his daughter and son have a forbidden relationship.

But, why did he even eager to help me?

 

*END OF NARATOR POV*

 

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Sorry guys, I should end it here.

I really was not feeling well.

But I promise you that I will update the next chapter as soon as I could.

And, thank you very much for all the comments from you guys. That's very meaningful to me.

And sorry if in this chapter a bit boring.

I promise I'll make the next chapter more interesting. A

nd .... Tadda .... Appa allow Onew for dating Jie Eun,

and Onew  confusion with his appa's behavior. Hmm ... What will happen next? Did they run away from Their umma and go out?  Would Appa will notify Onew for  reason why he allowed Onew and Jie Eun dating?

and whether it has to do with a big secret that he keep?
Keke ^ ^ Stay leave comments guys ...
And I want to thank to
bigbangtopforever because she was willing to become co-author in my story My Brother Who Love me to edit spelling and grammatical errors in there. But do not worry guys, she just edit my spelling and grammatical errors, and does not change the story. And for the sequel, I was the only author. So the story will not change ...

I'm sorry i can't replying all of your comments now because my head really dizzy.

And 4 my new reader and new subscriber, welcome 2 my story and hope u like it..

and please leave a comment guys, but, no bashing, please...

Keke^^

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Littlemrsmalfoy
#1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129
#3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14
#6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie
#7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129
#10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.