I CAN'T ADMIT IT

MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

 

 

 * Joon'S POV *

I was very surprised when Appa  comes to Jie Eun’s  engagement

and he said that Jie Eun was his daughter. I really can not trust what he says.

How could this be? No ... He certainly did not really talk like that.

He must be kidding.  All invited guests immediately surprised to see Jie Eun fainted.

Then they took her to the floor above; to a hotel room.

I can not move my legs and could only stare. Unable to utter a word.

What ~ is it true that I and Jie Eun siblings? I felt my tears falling. How can this happen?

The only girl I love is my sister?
"What's all this mean? So that means Jie Eun and Onew hyung is not ?

Why did their parents do not say this to Jie Eun and Onew hyung?"

I heard Jonghun’s voice right in front of me. Talking with someone.
"Neh. If their parents say this in advance, I'm sure Onew hyung is no need to go to

America to forget his love for Jie Eun." I'm sure now Minho who is speaking.

My emotions immediately peaked when I heard what they say.
"What do you mean?!
Onew love Jie Eun?!" I shouted to them.

Make them look back and be surprised when they saw me right in behind.
"J-joon?" That's all I hear out of Jonghun’s mouth. Because after that I

ran toward the elevator. Go to the top floor where they took Jie Eun.
I'm still kept running through the hallways. Finding the room where they bring Jie Eun.

I hear the faint sound Jie Eun's umma, crying from inside a room. Secretly,

I close my ears to close the door to eavesdrop on their conversation.

I just want to make sure that what my father told you is wrong.

After all the conversation I overheard them, I was stunned. 

All this seemed to have become tangled yarn difficult for me to digest

I make up in my brain.
"What does all this mean, Appa?!" I immediately opened the unlocked door and

shouted to my father. Spilling my emotions to him.
"J-joon?" My father was surprised to see me standing in the doorway. Likewise,

Jie Eun. She was very surprised to see me.
"What do you mean me and Jie Eun are siblings! What do you mean to say

I and Jie Eun are twins?!" I kept shouting to my Appa and approached him with great anger.
"Jong-jongwoon, whether Joon is Shin woon?" I heard Jie Eun's Appa,

or more precisely Onew's Appa said to my father. My father nodded weakly.
"So, Joon and Jie Eun are twins?" Now Onew's umma who spoke.
"What?! So it’s true Jie Eun my twin sister?! You must be kidding! This is impossible!

I love Jie Eun ~ "
"Maybe because you were twins, so you have the feeling that you can not lose

to Jie Eun. But since you do not know that you're twins, you consider feelings

to Jie Eun your love is a feeling among the men to a woman." My Appa directly

approached me. But I just  stepped back.
"No! My feelings for Jie Eun is not a feeling between the twins! I love Jie Eun!

And I do not care if we were twins or not, I would still get her and make her mine!"

I started screaming like crazy and ran out leaving them.

I began to recall the events that happen to me odd.
During this time the father had never told anyone my real mom and I

also never see their wedding photos. My father just told me that my mother was a

very beautiful woman and has a good heart. But he never told anyone the name

of my mother and how my mother's life during her life. And dad was never told

how my mother died.

I really love Jie Eun with all my soul. I'm willing to do anything so that I could be with her.

And I really do not care that me and her have a blood related! I do not care!

I kept running and running ... ..

Until finally ...

 

"watch out!" I heard someone yelling at me.
As I turned toward that person, and turned to glare at my left, I was late ....

I felt my whole body hurt when the vehicle was hit by very fast. I felt my

eyes became blurred vision and felt the fresh blood flowing from my head.
Until all that is before me became blurred ...

And become dark ...

 


* END OF Joon'S POV *

 

* Onew'S POV *

I've figured it all from the beginning. My father’s plan would have failed.

And Jie Eun, as expected, she now hates me. I keep crying when I saw her eyes

looking at me full of  hatred. I really do not want to Jie Eun hate me.

I do not want to leave her.
"Jie Eun, I'm sorry. I know ~" I started approached her when my parents

 and Jie Eun's Appa left us alone in the room to talk.
"There is nothing to talk about anymore! Now get out of here! I hate you, oppa!

I really hate you! Now go!" Jie Eun starts to close both ears with the palms

of her hands and closes her eyes, not wanting to see me.
"Jie Eun, I can explain it all. From the beginning I wanted to tell you.

When we're having dinner at Namsan tower, I really want to tell you, Jie Eun. 

But I do not have a chance." My tears keep flowing with rapids. How could this

happen to me god? Why? Why I can not live happily with a girl that I love?

Why to be with the girl that I love so difficult?
Jie Eun did not respond and continue to shut her ears and eyes.

Until finally my cell phone rang.
"Yeob-yeoboseyo? Oh ... umma Neh, neh ..." I immediately hung up.

"Jie Eun, oppa will be out soon. Better you take a break. Later we talked about ~ "

"There is nothing to talk about anymore. Better get

out now and do not also back again." She spoke coldly and without seeing

the slightest to me. My heart was torn to shreds when saw her refusal.

With heavy steps and slow, I walked out of the room and met my mother.

My mother was asking me out leave Jie Eun so that she could think clearly, and when

I talk to her later, she was calm enough for me to talk to.

1 hour later ....

I walked into the room where Jie Eun rest to bring her food.
When I opened the door, I do not see Jie Eun in the room.
I started to panic. I kept looking for it. To the bathroom, the balcony,

but I also can not find her.

Did she run away and go left?


* END OF Onew'S POV *

 


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AND .... PLEASE DO NOT hate me and kill me BECAUSE THIS NEW CHAPTER ... keke ^ ^
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Littlemrsmalfoy
#1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129
#3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14
#6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie
#7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129
#10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.