Chapter 18: 'her words stung me and broke my heart than Mei Lyn's farewell" I added.'Maybe you can add an ' even more' to this so it turns out like ' be so selfish, her words stung me and broke my heart even more than Mei Lyn's farewell" I added.'
It sounds better! ;) My buddy Fighting
Chapter 12: If you want any tips on how to improve your English, I'll be here even though I'm Vietnamese. I was born in Australia so my English is very fluent! My buddy! Tell me more about you and il tell you about me! Anyway, my Unni/Dongsaeng Hwaiting and Fighting!
Chapter 9: Before I forget, I'm not trying to be mean but it's actually themselves not theirselves okay? You English is better than most non English people I know so it's ok
Chapter 7: Thanks for the font change... It's hard for me to read stuff like that if it's small but hey you're a really good author so I don't mind.. And you're English is quite good for someone who doesn't speak English as their mother language!! My Yixing fangirl buddy!! FIGHTING!
Chapter 33: Hoho, my name in here! Thanks authornim! And fighting for the future!!!
your story is amazing and i will read the sequel now.... Off to your other story...
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