Title: 5/5
Comments:
It's not exactly a title that stands out to a reader but it definitely tells what kind of story you have. Even from the first chapters, there was already a feel of wanting to forget - from Victoria. And in the stalker's case, wanting her to remember. And, it was original. Only your story would pop up in the search engine if you type in the title. XD

Appearance: 4/5
Comments:
The posters you used were always good. And, it was a great idea that you changed them every now and then. Though it didn't really say what kind of story you were writing, they were still pleasing to the eyes. Especially the poster for Chapter 86. ^^

Forewords: 7/10
Comments: I think you changed the foreword sometime while the story was in progress. But anyway, it was good that you gave a preview of the story by writing it through Victoria's point of view. And it was a ++ that you didn't spoil your readers through it. You didn't reveal too much of the plot.

Plot: 13/15
Comments: The flow of the story was really good. You know how leave cliffhangers. You know when to keep the readers waiting. But just a comment about the ending. I felt that it was bit rushed. Although the ending was very good, I just think that you put everything in one chapter. Maybe you could've separated them into 2 or 3 more chapters.

Originality: 19/20
Comments: Although the idea of love triangles (or pentagon +1) isn't exactly original, you gave it a feel and a twist that made it your own and not anybody else's.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary: 13/15
Comments: Grammar was perfect. Though there were some words missing every now and then, maybe because you overlooked it while proof-reading. But we're just human. Mistakes can't be avoided.

Details: 3/5
Comments: You put extra details to the important parts and don't dwell on too much details for the unimportant parts. But of course I couldn't help but think that there were some parts that could've used more detail. Like, at the ending. "What happened to Melodix?" You never mentioned her again. XD

Writing style: 10/10
Comments: You're writing style is really good. But I noticed that you're especially good at writing the sad and/or hurtful parts. The emotions really go out to the readers. Two thumbs up for that.

Overall enjoyment: 10/10
Comments: As someone who always commented on your fanfic, and waited everyday for an update, I can proudly say that I enjoyed your story.

Bonus: 5/5
Comments: I absolutely loved it. ^^

Total: 89/100

Thanks a lot Izzy!

***I have to say I feel especially proud of myself ^^ One of the best scores I've received ever! I miss this story actually, I think about it every now and then...maybe I should do a part II? lol!