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DONT HATE ME! BECAUSE THIS ISN'T THE EPILOGUE.

But I made a new story starring................ BYUN BAEKHYUN! I'm trying out the comedy-ish style and I am really liking the story so far... it only has two chapters right now but I have another two already written.... hehe.

This is another thing just to pass the time while I'm home.

I really hope you guys like it and hopefully subscribe. I'm writing in it isnt all over the place like it is in this story >-<

 

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Convenience Store Boy

 

 

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chicklit_89
Re-reading this story and realized all the loose ends and spelling mistakes. Maybe I'll edit this story soon.... :S

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minion27
212 streak #1
Chapter 36: It is somehow a nice story although i feel bad for Taylor though. But overall its a good one
samsamphorn
#2
Chapter 36: Please update soon!!!!....
kriseu_chu #3
Chapter 4: I like the story so far but it's not very realistic but it's good
Wonuda
#4
Chapter 36: Aigoooo so sweet
lisbeth110499
#5
Chapter 36: Update soon epílogo 3
xoxosenshine #6
Chapter 36: Aweee i totally love it
sommer-rain #7
Chapter 36: Epilogue 3 please? Hehehe
ExoticStarlightARMY
#8
Chapter 36: Awww! I love this story so much! It reminds me of my sister and my nephew! She just had her first baby on Dec. 1st and i was able to visit them for Christmas and New Years. She's not in the same situation as this character, (she's 30 and has been married for 4 years) but it just makes me miss them.

I really like the way this story was writen especially the delivery chapters. Usually you find stories where it's crazy and hectic and that's more of a Hollywood thing. Usually they're just waiting to dilate and timing contractions tell it's time to push. So good job!!

I really love Yixing in this story and how sweet he is. I also love the character development of Taylor and her relationship with her parents.

Some things that did bother me was kind of the situation that Yixing and Taylor went through. Usually, in Korea, when an idol gets married their popularity drops, and if they have kids their career is basically over. If they do get married and have kids they try to keep it on the down low like Eli from U-kiss did until he announced that his wife will be having a baby.

Regardless this is a beautiful story and is well written. I hope you and your son are doing well and that you are both happy and healthy! (sorry for the long comment)
chanikan #9
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charlesia
#10
Chapter 35: Beautiful story