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Marriage Bites
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Soo Young's POV

Even though Ye Eun enlisted the help of Uncle Xiu... I was still not convinced that he would be of any help. In all my 2,525 years of living, I've never encountered something like this before.

I had told Myung Dae to stay in his room and sleep. I didn't want him to see his mother in this kind of state. It would probably traumatize the poor boy, and he just meet his mother.

I just hoped that Kai got back in time. I don't know how much longer we could stall. That thing was killing my sister from the inside out and I couldn't do any...

Suddenly it all hit me.

I'm so stupid... I could use my powers.

I concentrated on Mi Na and I could sense that evil thing inside her. I tried see if I could control that thing. But it seemed like no use. I guess I can only control the living.

Suddenly I heard a faint pop and I heard Uncle Xiu's voice. "My word," he breathed.

"UNCLE!" I squealed. "Ahh Soo Young," he replied. Everyone turned towards him.

That evil spirit thing seemed taken back for a moment. I looked over and Mi Na was now bleeding from her nose. "What are you doing to my niece you dirty little thing!" Uncle Xiu said in chinese.

The spirit tilted Mi Na's head to the side as it looked at him through her clouded eyes.

"What else? I'm killing her,"

I saw Uncle Xiu shiver. "He's seriously evil," he said in the best Korean I have ever heard him speak. "Y-You speak Korean?" asked. "Yeah but that's not what's important," he waved it off as he set down his bag that I didn't notice he even had.

"Now," he rummaged through it before pulling out various things. He pulled out a really old book, a bowl and some grass. Or what looked like grass.

"Okkayy,"

He sat down shocking all of us. "If you don't mind,"

He opened the book and grabbed the grass and some other ingriedents and mixed it into the bowl. He then pulled some candles put and lit them. He pulled out a container of what looked like salt and poured it out around him, creating a circle.

He lit the grass and whatever else was inside before cutting his finger and let blood drip inside. The evil spirit looked on and suddenly hissed as Uncle Xiu started speaking... latin?

Everyone was in awe as a sudden breeze started blowing which was very odd and it confused everyone. Uncle Xiu continued reading out of the book and the evil spirit hissed some more and fell down on the floor. He was seriously set on killing my sister.

Suddenly it looked like it was out of her body. Baekhyun hurriedly went over and picked up her lifeless body and carried her out to another room followed by Ye Jun and some of the other guys. Soo Min, me and the rest who decided to stay kept watch on Uncle Xiu.

"He's still here," he said as he paused. "I feel his presence,"

"It's a he?" asked Soo Min. "Yes. He died tragically more than 2,200 years ago. He was enlisted by an evil witch to get revenge on the King and his family. And hopefully kill The One. But since he failed because Mi Na wasn't even born then, he hasn't been able to leave and then was locked up in that room. The witch then died during the Great War because some of her minions her," explained Uncle Xiu.

"Really? But what was he?"

"Hmm... he was... he was..." he gasped as he looked up at us. "He was a Fallen Angel," he whispered.

Everyone knew that when a Fallen Angel is killed tragically they can sometimes come back as a very angry and evil spirit. Very evil so they can get revenge.

We all looked around the room when suddenly we heard a sinister laughter.

"That's correct,"

Shivers went down my spine. That was seriously something. "Who else sent you beside that witch?"

"The Fairy Liu. She killed the witch afterwards," he simply said which caught us all off guard. "What the?" I balled my fists. Now everything changes. We first have to deal with that thing before we can deal with that fair

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Shirotakashi
#1
Chapter 40: I'm just going to go ahead and say this and I hope I don't sound rude and if I do.. I'm super sorry!!! So as the sequel continue it did feel as if you were dragging the story a bit too long and it kinda got boring that I didn't really want to read it anymore but I still did even though it was boring... (sorry if that sounded rude!!! I truly am sorry!!) Things were going a bit too slow for me as the reader and so it got boring. (I'm not going to say anymore since it'll sound even ruder.)
And yes, I would like it the fairy business got deal with~ And that Baekhyun and Mi Na start a family because it would be so cute to read Mi Na's and Baekhyun's children!! And yes!! I totally want Siwon and Soo Young to end up with one another~~
daggerose
#2
Hi, sorry, but the first story is unavailable?? Did you hide it or something?
spirit_L #3
✦✧ Advertise Paradise ✧✦ - Spirit_L's comment:

Hello~ As requested from Advertise Paradise, I am here to give you feedback on your story. Maybe it's because this is a sequel but I was a little lost in the story lol. I liked it nonetheless and the whole supernatural theme was great. Just a couple of things threw me off like the extra images in the chapter. I think it would be best to just use words to describe what your explaining. Overall, I liked the story and I like the way the plot is going. I wish you luck on the rest of your story (though you probably won't need it). ^^
Nelsiexoxo_16
#4
Chapter 35: Wahhh for some reason this chapter is my favorite...but then so was the last one...aish I'm confused now but good job I liked this one! And you're finally graduating dongsaeng ^^
Update soon it was great ^^
-Anita
#5
Chapter 33: I hate it when my browser just suddenly shuts down and I have to type my entire comment again.
ANYWAY.
I do think the classmates will find out, I'm just not sure if it will be now or a little while later... And I don't really know who's blocking Liu, based on the thing they said to Liu, I'd say Mi Na, but based on her condition, I don't think it's her.
Nelsiexoxo_16
#6
Chapter 32: Why am I commenting so late? What am I doing...I don't know..but anyways this was good! Revenge revenge revenge I see. Hmm..I'm really curious how this is going to play out and I can't wait. Update soon, like hurry dongsaeang!
-Anita
#7
Chapter 31: Let's hope Uncle Xiu can help..
Also, why is Love Bites 'currently unavailable'?
Nelsiexoxo_16
#8
I really like this!...Well obviously not what happened to her you know because that's just messed up aish...I'm rambling again. Okay never mind I mean I like the way you wrote out this chapter. It was very good! Update soon ^^
-Anita
#9
Chapter 30: Oh great. And here I thought that pesky thing was gone.. *sigh*
JungLiin #10
Chapter 9: actually i dont understand this story from the first chapter till the end ☺