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Marriage Bites
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[CONTENTID1] What Next? [/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2] [/CONTENTID2]

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"I-I... I don't know," answered Lay honestly.

He really didn't have a clue on what to do. He didn't know of anyone who could do of such a thing.

Lay seemed to being having a hard time trying to think up of a solution. But he came up with nothing. He felt useless.

"Why don't we..." Lay trailed off as he rubbed the back of his neck. He honestly didn't have a clue. He was just stalling even more than he needed to.

Ye Jun sighed heavily has he looked at his sister who continued to shiver even more. She rubbed her arms as best as she could as her teeth started chattering. Baekhyun wrapped his cargiden around her but seemed to help little.

"Let me talk to father," Ye Jun said as he snapped his fingers and went towards the King's bedroom.

"Hyung... wait..." Lay reached out but Ye Jun was already gone. Lay looked over to Mi Na and she was shivering severally. "Why don't you lie down?" he suggested. "In our room right?" Baekhyun asked raising his eyebrows.

"Of course," Lay weakly smiled as Baekhyun guided Mi Na out of the room and back up the hallway towards their room. Lay went ahead and opened the door for them.

Once inside the bedroom, Baekhyun guided Mi Na towards the bed and pulled the covers so she could lay down. Baekhyun tucked her in as she continued to shiver.

"This... is... really.... a-an-nn-o-o-ying," she said as she wrapped the blankets tighter against herself.

"But is it really inside you?" Lay asked wondering. "Y-Y-Yes,"

"She attacked me. So it is inside of her still,"

Lay looked at his dongsang concerned. "She attacked you?"

"Yeah... but I know she didn't mean it. It was that... that thing," Baekhyun said with a weird hand gesture.

"I need to kill her," A whispery voice was heard in the room. Sending shivers down both Baekhyun and Lay's back. "W-Who or what was that?"

"Me you idiots," Mi Na started to chuckle. It was a sinister laugh. Causing both of the guys to back away.

Lay didn't need any further evidence that that thing was inside her. This was enough prove.

"G-Get the guys," Baekhyun said nudging Lay towards the doorway. "But what about you?"

"I'll try to stall it,"

Lay hestitantly went towards the door and ran out as he went to find the other guys. He went towards the lounge area because he knew that most of the guys would be there.

And to his luck, they were all there watching some show.

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Shirotakashi
#1
Chapter 40: I'm just going to go ahead and say this and I hope I don't sound rude and if I do.. I'm super sorry!!! So as the sequel continue it did feel as if you were dragging the story a bit too long and it kinda got boring that I didn't really want to read it anymore but I still did even though it was boring... (sorry if that sounded rude!!! I truly am sorry!!) Things were going a bit too slow for me as the reader and so it got boring. (I'm not going to say anymore since it'll sound even ruder.)
And yes, I would like it the fairy business got deal with~ And that Baekhyun and Mi Na start a family because it would be so cute to read Mi Na's and Baekhyun's children!! And yes!! I totally want Siwon and Soo Young to end up with one another~~
daggerose
#2
Hi, sorry, but the first story is unavailable?? Did you hide it or something?
spirit_L #3
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Hello~ As requested from Advertise Paradise, I am here to give you feedback on your story. Maybe it's because this is a sequel but I was a little lost in the story lol. I liked it nonetheless and the whole supernatural theme was great. Just a couple of things threw me off like the extra images in the chapter. I think it would be best to just use words to describe what your explaining. Overall, I liked the story and I like the way the plot is going. I wish you luck on the rest of your story (though you probably won't need it). ^^
Nelsiexoxo_16
#4
Chapter 35: Wahhh for some reason this chapter is my favorite...but then so was the last one...aish I'm confused now but good job I liked this one! And you're finally graduating dongsaeng ^^
Update soon it was great ^^
-Anita
#5
Chapter 33: I hate it when my browser just suddenly shuts down and I have to type my entire comment again.
ANYWAY.
I do think the classmates will find out, I'm just not sure if it will be now or a little while later... And I don't really know who's blocking Liu, based on the thing they said to Liu, I'd say Mi Na, but based on her condition, I don't think it's her.
Nelsiexoxo_16
#6
Chapter 32: Why am I commenting so late? What am I doing...I don't know..but anyways this was good! Revenge revenge revenge I see. Hmm..I'm really curious how this is going to play out and I can't wait. Update soon, like hurry dongsaeang!
-Anita
#7
Chapter 31: Let's hope Uncle Xiu can help..
Also, why is Love Bites 'currently unavailable'?
Nelsiexoxo_16
#8
I really like this!...Well obviously not what happened to her you know because that's just messed up aish...I'm rambling again. Okay never mind I mean I like the way you wrote out this chapter. It was very good! Update soon ^^
-Anita
#9
Chapter 30: Oh great. And here I thought that pesky thing was gone.. *sigh*
JungLiin #10
Chapter 9: actually i dont understand this story from the first chapter till the end ☺