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Marriage Bites
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[CONTENTID1] Planning [/CONTENTID1]

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[CONTENTID3]

Soo Young's POV

"What are you guys doing?" I asked clamly as I stood there at the door staring at the three guys who were looking at me shocked.

"W-We w-were just p-passing by and it was HIS IDEA!" said Luhan pointing at Baekhyun

"YAH!" yelled Baekhyun towards Luhan

"This is my room," He said nonchanlantly.

"What about you? What's YOUR excuse?" I said looking towards Donghae.

"Well I-I was going to Luhan's room because Chanyeol said he wanted to show me something," he said trying to smile at me

I crossed my arms and looked at the three guys disappointed.

"Honestly I thought it was Myung Dae," I half whispered.

"Waeyo?" asked Donghae

"I don't know,"

I thought it was him because he would want to know about himself and his newly found family.

"Well... since now we know what's truly going on can we go in?" said Baekhyun pushing past me to go in.

"Fine," I rolled my eyes and turned around to go in the room.

Donghae and Luhan looked at each other and shrugged. They followed behind. I made sure that this time the door was actually closed and no one else would be in the hallway.

"So I take it you were eavesdropping?" said Sarah

"Ne," they said.

"Wow," was all she said

"So what is all this about? Training for what?" asked Baekhyun

"I thought you heard us?" questioned Soo Min

"We heard bits and pieces," defended Donghae

"Whatever. Well I guess you've met the fairy Liu right? Well she's up to no good. She slowly killing off the judging panel from before the Great War. She must be stopped at all costs. But the thing is that the only person who can actually stop her is Mi Na, because Liu has become the leader of the fairies, thus making her the strongest," explained Sarah

Baekhyun and Luhan both looked at Mi Na concerned.

"So thats were this training comes in?" asked Luhan

"Ne. But not just her. Everyone. Including you pretty idols," said Sarah smirking.

"Okay. Not a problem," said Donghae puffing up his chest.

"But it's going to be hell," I said slapping his chest. Making him cough. Which caused us all to laugh.

"Yah!" he whined.

I honestly didn't want my little sister to go through something like this but there was no choice. She had to do in order to stop Liu from killing off vampires who voted against her and her kind. This was like the werewolf problem all over again. Which had caused the Great War.

Everyone else were quietly talking among themselves about what they should do in order to make the training successful and help us prepare for the coming battles that we would possibly face.

Suddenly there was a knock on the door.

"Come in!" I yelled

Siwon and Leeteuk walked in. Closing the door behind them.

At that moment, I felt my heart racing. I looked at Siwon and I could tell he had just taken a shower by his fresh scent.

He was were a white t-shirt and basketball shorts. But for some reason, I found that attractive. Leeteuk was just about wearing the same thing but I didn't find that attractive at all.

They both made their way towards whe

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Shirotakashi
#1
Chapter 40: I'm just going to go ahead and say this and I hope I don't sound rude and if I do.. I'm super sorry!!! So as the sequel continue it did feel as if you were dragging the story a bit too long and it kinda got boring that I didn't really want to read it anymore but I still did even though it was boring... (sorry if that sounded rude!!! I truly am sorry!!) Things were going a bit too slow for me as the reader and so it got boring. (I'm not going to say anymore since it'll sound even ruder.)
And yes, I would like it the fairy business got deal with~ And that Baekhyun and Mi Na start a family because it would be so cute to read Mi Na's and Baekhyun's children!! And yes!! I totally want Siwon and Soo Young to end up with one another~~
daggerose
#2
Hi, sorry, but the first story is unavailable?? Did you hide it or something?
spirit_L #3
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Hello~ As requested from Advertise Paradise, I am here to give you feedback on your story. Maybe it's because this is a sequel but I was a little lost in the story lol. I liked it nonetheless and the whole supernatural theme was great. Just a couple of things threw me off like the extra images in the chapter. I think it would be best to just use words to describe what your explaining. Overall, I liked the story and I like the way the plot is going. I wish you luck on the rest of your story (though you probably won't need it). ^^
Nelsiexoxo_16
#4
Chapter 35: Wahhh for some reason this chapter is my favorite...but then so was the last one...aish I'm confused now but good job I liked this one! And you're finally graduating dongsaeng ^^
Update soon it was great ^^
-Anita
#5
Chapter 33: I hate it when my browser just suddenly shuts down and I have to type my entire comment again.
ANYWAY.
I do think the classmates will find out, I'm just not sure if it will be now or a little while later... And I don't really know who's blocking Liu, based on the thing they said to Liu, I'd say Mi Na, but based on her condition, I don't think it's her.
Nelsiexoxo_16
#6
Chapter 32: Why am I commenting so late? What am I doing...I don't know..but anyways this was good! Revenge revenge revenge I see. Hmm..I'm really curious how this is going to play out and I can't wait. Update soon, like hurry dongsaeang!
-Anita
#7
Chapter 31: Let's hope Uncle Xiu can help..
Also, why is Love Bites 'currently unavailable'?
Nelsiexoxo_16
#8
I really like this!...Well obviously not what happened to her you know because that's just messed up aish...I'm rambling again. Okay never mind I mean I like the way you wrote out this chapter. It was very good! Update soon ^^
-Anita
#9
Chapter 30: Oh great. And here I thought that pesky thing was gone.. *sigh*
JungLiin #10
Chapter 9: actually i dont understand this story from the first chapter till the end ☺