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Marriage Bites
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[CONTENTID1] Surprise Visit [/CONTENTID1]

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[CONTENTID3]

Mi Na's POV

I was stil baffled that no one wanted to tell me about that room upstairs. Like what is up there?

I was walking around the hall thinking...

What could they possibly be hiding up there?!

I was so frustrasted that I had accidently bumped into someone.

"Oh Mi Na-ah are you okay? You should pay more attention to where your going," said a familiar voice as he had hands on my shoulder.

I looked up to see Changmin's concerned face.

"Ah yeah I'm okay. Mianhae Oppa, I was just so deep into thought," I said

"About what?" he asked letting go of my shoulders.

"Just the room thats up on by father's study," I said

His expression quickly darkened.

"Oh," he simply said

"W-Wae?" I asked

"Nothing. Just don't go up there," he said

"Waeyo?"

"Just don't okay?" he said

"Arraeso," I said looking down frustrated.

"Come. The others want to do something," he said grabbing my hand and pulling me towards the game room.

"There you are!" chimed Sehun as he saw Changmin and I walk towards them.

"Wae?" 

"Lets go out to eat!" said Shindong

"Where?"

"Molla. Anywhere," said Eunhyuk

"I don't know either," I blankly stated.

"What's wrong?" asked Luhan

"Nothing," I said looking down. I could feel Luhan trying to get into my head. But I simply blocked him out.

He glared at me.

"Come on Mi Na what's wrong?" questioned Donghae

"Nothing,"

"B-But something is clearly-"

"Bothering her? Yes. Thats Mi Na when shes frustrasted upset or simply just mad," answered a female voice from behind.

Everyone stopped in there tracks and looked towards her. I turned around and my eyes widened in surprise.

"Sarah!" I screamed as I ran towards her.

"Sarah?" I heard Myung Dae ask

Sarah braced herself for my hug as I jumped into her embrace.

"I missed you!" I said digging my face into her shoulder.

"So did I. How have you been? How was the wedding? I'm sorry I couldn't attend," she said hugging me tighter.

"I've been good. And it was amazing! It's okay. At least I received your present," I said

She pulled away and looked at me.

"Always with the presents," she said smiling

"Yup," I was on the verge of crying

"Don't cry," she said

Sarah was like another sister to me. She was always there when I need her and she was my best friend as well. Along with Kwon Ji Young. Sarah is one of my only cousins that I'm really close to.

I tried holding in the tears.

"Oh Annyoug Sarah. Nice seeing you again," said Eunhyuk

"Annyoung Eunhyuk-sshi. And same," she smiled as she pulled away from me.

I held onto her arm.

"Unni..."

"Hmm?" she said smiling down on me

"I want you to met someone," I said looking towards Myung Dae who looked confused

"Who?" she asked looking around.

"Myung Dae," I said gesturing for him to come closer.

He hestisted at first but with a gentle push from Baekhyun he came forward.

Sarah's eyes landed onto him and she gasped. She held in her breath with shocked eyes.

"W-Wae?" I said. Myung Dae stopped in his tracks at her sudden reaction. Everyone else stared at Sarah with confused expressions.

"S-Shin Myung Dae?" she whispered.

Myung Dae slightly nodded.

"How do you know my name?" he asked

"Babo... she's your mom's cousin," I heard Soo Min say

"Ya! He might not remember!" I said defending him

"But how? I thought you had been taken away by your father?" she said staring at him

"Grandmother found me and brought me here," he said

"What about your father?" she asked

"H-He's dead," he said looking down as he shoved his hands into his front pockets.

Sarah's expression softened.

I let go of her arm. She looked at me and smiled.

She had ateary expression.

She slowly made her way towards him and pulled him into a hug.

"Oh how much you must have suffered by yourself. I should have never let your father take you. Do you know how much your mother went through? Not being able to remember anything. It broke my heart. I tried so hard to find you because I knew you would be the key for her to be able to remember everything," she said as she queitly cried as she held onto Myung Dae.

"Key? What do you mean?" I asked

"You see, just like you're special so is Myung Dae. He may not know it but he has a special ability. Like you. He can alter people's memories. He can either remember something or make them forget. Something like Ye Jun's ability. But different. It was like his father's," said Sarah letting go of Myung Dae.

"That's my ability?" he asked

"You didn't kn

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Shirotakashi
#1
Chapter 40: I'm just going to go ahead and say this and I hope I don't sound rude and if I do.. I'm super sorry!!! So as the sequel continue it did feel as if you were dragging the story a bit too long and it kinda got boring that I didn't really want to read it anymore but I still did even though it was boring... (sorry if that sounded rude!!! I truly am sorry!!) Things were going a bit too slow for me as the reader and so it got boring. (I'm not going to say anymore since it'll sound even ruder.)
And yes, I would like it the fairy business got deal with~ And that Baekhyun and Mi Na start a family because it would be so cute to read Mi Na's and Baekhyun's children!! And yes!! I totally want Siwon and Soo Young to end up with one another~~
daggerose
#2
Hi, sorry, but the first story is unavailable?? Did you hide it or something?
spirit_L #3
✦✧ Advertise Paradise ✧✦ - Spirit_L's comment:

Hello~ As requested from Advertise Paradise, I am here to give you feedback on your story. Maybe it's because this is a sequel but I was a little lost in the story lol. I liked it nonetheless and the whole supernatural theme was great. Just a couple of things threw me off like the extra images in the chapter. I think it would be best to just use words to describe what your explaining. Overall, I liked the story and I like the way the plot is going. I wish you luck on the rest of your story (though you probably won't need it). ^^
Nelsiexoxo_16
#4
Chapter 35: Wahhh for some reason this chapter is my favorite...but then so was the last one...aish I'm confused now but good job I liked this one! And you're finally graduating dongsaeng ^^
Update soon it was great ^^
-Anita
#5
Chapter 33: I hate it when my browser just suddenly shuts down and I have to type my entire comment again.
ANYWAY.
I do think the classmates will find out, I'm just not sure if it will be now or a little while later... And I don't really know who's blocking Liu, based on the thing they said to Liu, I'd say Mi Na, but based on her condition, I don't think it's her.
Nelsiexoxo_16
#6
Chapter 32: Why am I commenting so late? What am I doing...I don't know..but anyways this was good! Revenge revenge revenge I see. Hmm..I'm really curious how this is going to play out and I can't wait. Update soon, like hurry dongsaeang!
-Anita
#7
Chapter 31: Let's hope Uncle Xiu can help..
Also, why is Love Bites 'currently unavailable'?
Nelsiexoxo_16
#8
I really like this!...Well obviously not what happened to her you know because that's just messed up aish...I'm rambling again. Okay never mind I mean I like the way you wrote out this chapter. It was very good! Update soon ^^
-Anita
#9
Chapter 30: Oh great. And here I thought that pesky thing was gone.. *sigh*
JungLiin #10
Chapter 9: actually i dont understand this story from the first chapter till the end ☺