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Marriage Bites
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[CONTENTID1] Recovering [/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2] [/CONTENTID2]

[CONTENTID3]

"Is she going to be okay?"

"When will she wake up?"

"Hyung I'm worried she might go into another coma for another 200 years,"

"Stop that. She wouldn't go into another coma,"

"Shhh... maybe she can hear you."

"Yah! Why don't you all leave then huh?"

"B-But we want to stay by her side,"

"Yeah we do. Please let us stay hyung!"

"Fine fine. But don't be so noisy!"

"Alright!"

All I could hear were the boys talking around me and making a lot of noise. I wanted peace and quiet but I was obviously not getting that at all.

I groaned as I as I shifted my head a little and tried to open my eyes.

"She's alive!"

"Yah!"

"Look she's opening her eyes!"

I felt everyone's attention on me as I fully opened my eyes and looked around the dim room. "What happened?" I asked. My voice raspy.

"Well you were out for about two days now," answered Soo Min as he came in with a tray.

"TWO DAYS?" I shrieked out as I tried to sit up. Baekhyun and Luhan quickly helped me up while Soo Min placed the tray on my lap.

"Yeah. Now eat up. You must be hungry,"

I looked down at the tray and it was a really hearty meal. Everything that I liked. Fried chicken, fried ribs, coleslaw, rice and blood orange juice.

"I thought you want something greasy," smirked Soo Min. "You want her to have a heart attack," commented Soo Young.

"Very western but I like it," I said. Just the smell of the food woke my stomach up and by then it was going crazy. I was so hungry that it hurt everytime it growled. I didn't waste time digging into the food.

"Wow... this is amazing,"

"By yours truly," Soo Min huffed his chest out as he patted it proudly. "Thanks bro," I said between bites.

"You're really enjoying it aren't you?" Baekhyun asked amused. "Duh," was all I could answer.

Everyone in the room burst out laughing as I ate the food that my brother was so kind to prepare for me. Honestly it's been a while since Soo Min last cooked a meal. It was a nice change.

"Soo... I hate being the mood killer but..." started Heechul. "But?" Ryeowook asked with a raised eyebrow. "What are we going to do about that fairy? She seemed to be everywhere,"

"What do you mean everywhere?"

"Like... a few days ago I swore I saw her out of the corner of my eye," explained Heechul.

"Where?" Ye Jun snapped his head towards Heechul. "Hmmm... I was out shopping in Hongdae and I suddenly saw her. Or I think I saw her. I'm sure it was her," he nodded his head.

"Either it was or wasn't," I stated as I ate some of the delicious coleslaw.

"I think it was her. Does she have long jet black hair? With like blue and green highlights?" he asked

I heard Myungdae choke on the water that he was drinking. "Are you okay?" I asked looking over to him. "Y-Yeah..."

"What is it?"

"That's her,"

Our eyes widened as he answered. "Are you sure?" Ye Jun asked.

"I would know. I spend 20 years coming home to her," he said looking down. "20 years?!" Heechul looked on surprised.

"Yeah... she was a 'housekeeper' for us. She mostly 'took care' of me though," he air qouted the words.

"So you must know how she really is li

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Shirotakashi
#1
Chapter 40: I'm just going to go ahead and say this and I hope I don't sound rude and if I do.. I'm super sorry!!! So as the sequel continue it did feel as if you were dragging the story a bit too long and it kinda got boring that I didn't really want to read it anymore but I still did even though it was boring... (sorry if that sounded rude!!! I truly am sorry!!) Things were going a bit too slow for me as the reader and so it got boring. (I'm not going to say anymore since it'll sound even ruder.)
And yes, I would like it the fairy business got deal with~ And that Baekhyun and Mi Na start a family because it would be so cute to read Mi Na's and Baekhyun's children!! And yes!! I totally want Siwon and Soo Young to end up with one another~~
daggerose
#2
Hi, sorry, but the first story is unavailable?? Did you hide it or something?
spirit_L #3
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Hello~ As requested from Advertise Paradise, I am here to give you feedback on your story. Maybe it's because this is a sequel but I was a little lost in the story lol. I liked it nonetheless and the whole supernatural theme was great. Just a couple of things threw me off like the extra images in the chapter. I think it would be best to just use words to describe what your explaining. Overall, I liked the story and I like the way the plot is going. I wish you luck on the rest of your story (though you probably won't need it). ^^
Nelsiexoxo_16
#4
Chapter 35: Wahhh for some reason this chapter is my favorite...but then so was the last one...aish I'm confused now but good job I liked this one! And you're finally graduating dongsaeng ^^
Update soon it was great ^^
-Anita
#5
Chapter 33: I hate it when my browser just suddenly shuts down and I have to type my entire comment again.
ANYWAY.
I do think the classmates will find out, I'm just not sure if it will be now or a little while later... And I don't really know who's blocking Liu, based on the thing they said to Liu, I'd say Mi Na, but based on her condition, I don't think it's her.
Nelsiexoxo_16
#6
Chapter 32: Why am I commenting so late? What am I doing...I don't know..but anyways this was good! Revenge revenge revenge I see. Hmm..I'm really curious how this is going to play out and I can't wait. Update soon, like hurry dongsaeang!
-Anita
#7
Chapter 31: Let's hope Uncle Xiu can help..
Also, why is Love Bites 'currently unavailable'?
Nelsiexoxo_16
#8
I really like this!...Well obviously not what happened to her you know because that's just messed up aish...I'm rambling again. Okay never mind I mean I like the way you wrote out this chapter. It was very good! Update soon ^^
-Anita
#9
Chapter 30: Oh great. And here I thought that pesky thing was gone.. *sigh*
JungLiin #10
Chapter 9: actually i dont understand this story from the first chapter till the end ☺