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Marriage Bites
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Siwon's POV

Two Weeks later...

I was heading out of the dorms with my members when I suddenly got a call from Soo Young.

"Oh Soo Young-ah what's up?" I said as I went out of the dorm.

"Um... Siwon-sshi... I don't know if this is too much to ask but... can you help me with Mi Na-ah?" she said quietly.

I chuckled a little. "Why is that?" I asked as I followed everyone out.

"Well... her and Baekhyun are still bickering. And I really don't know what to do to help. I have no experience in this field what-so-ever," she said.

"And you think I do?" I laughed.

"I-I.... I didn't think of that! I'm so sorry if I bothered you!" she stummered. She's so cute when she's flustered... wait what am I thinking?!

"Really it's no big deal. Plus we were actually on our way there," I chuckled as I got into the SUV.

Soo Young was quiet for a moment. "Oh... alright. I'll see you in a few then," she said.

"Okay bye," I hung up and sighed. What am I supposed to do? Can't she ask Ye Eun?

"What's the matter hyung?" asked Eunhyuk looking at me.

"That was Soo Young. She seems to be concerned about Mi Na and Baekhyun still,"

"Are they still fighting?" asked Donghae.

I nodded my head. "Aish that Baekhyun. When is he going to learn!" glared Donghae.

I shrugged. I cared for Baekhyun since he is our label mate but even so, Baekhyun is very stubborn and naive 

 

Once we got to the Cha mansion, I was whisked away by Soo Young.

"Siwon-sshi, I just wanted to tell you that..." she paused for a moment. I was curious as too what she was going to say. "I just wanted to tell you that if you don't want to be the one always helping with Mi Na and Baekhyun then you don't have to. I just don't want you to think that I'm an incompetent sister. That I can't help my-," 

At that moment I felt bad for Soo Young so I did was I thought was best. I pulled her into a hug not caring if she was done talking or not.

"Soo Young-sshi,  I don't think that way. I know you care for your sister a lot and I do feel like your an amazing sister to her and the rest of your siblings. You shouldn't worry what others might think," I said as I placed my hand on her head her soft long luscious hair.

She was frozen still. She obviously was shocked by my sudden reaction. "S-Siwon-sshi," she muttered.

I chuckled a little as we stayed like that.

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Soo Young's POV

When Siwon pulled me into a hug... I didn't know what to do or say. I felt like he took so many of my worries away. His hand was raking through my hair and it felt calming. I laid my head on his chest and I heard his heart beat steadily.

I felt like we could stay like that forever but I knew that we had to let go sooner or later.

I'd rather let go later...

I sighed before gently pushing away from him. I looked at him and he was blushing down to his neck. I felt my cheeks heating up and I cleared my throat.

"Sorry," I mumbled. "No no. It's my fault," he said

I shook my head. "I don't want others to misunderstand," I said.

I'm such an idiot...

"Misunderstand what? Us hugging?" he questioned. I seriously felt bad now. I felt his emotions go crazy and I knew at that moment that he may like me... but he doesn't know how much I like him so what's the point.

I stared into space and sighed. "Waeyo?" he asked.

"Nothing," was all I said before turning around and heading back towards the living room. But before I even could take two steps, I felt him grab onto my arm and turn me around.

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Shirotakashi
#1
Chapter 40: I'm just going to go ahead and say this and I hope I don't sound rude and if I do.. I'm super sorry!!! So as the sequel continue it did feel as if you were dragging the story a bit too long and it kinda got boring that I didn't really want to read it anymore but I still did even though it was boring... (sorry if that sounded rude!!! I truly am sorry!!) Things were going a bit too slow for me as the reader and so it got boring. (I'm not going to say anymore since it'll sound even ruder.)
And yes, I would like it the fairy business got deal with~ And that Baekhyun and Mi Na start a family because it would be so cute to read Mi Na's and Baekhyun's children!! And yes!! I totally want Siwon and Soo Young to end up with one another~~
daggerose
#2
Hi, sorry, but the first story is unavailable?? Did you hide it or something?
spirit_L #3
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Hello~ As requested from Advertise Paradise, I am here to give you feedback on your story. Maybe it's because this is a sequel but I was a little lost in the story lol. I liked it nonetheless and the whole supernatural theme was great. Just a couple of things threw me off like the extra images in the chapter. I think it would be best to just use words to describe what your explaining. Overall, I liked the story and I like the way the plot is going. I wish you luck on the rest of your story (though you probably won't need it). ^^
Nelsiexoxo_16
#4
Chapter 35: Wahhh for some reason this chapter is my favorite...but then so was the last one...aish I'm confused now but good job I liked this one! And you're finally graduating dongsaeng ^^
Update soon it was great ^^
-Anita
#5
Chapter 33: I hate it when my browser just suddenly shuts down and I have to type my entire comment again.
ANYWAY.
I do think the classmates will find out, I'm just not sure if it will be now or a little while later... And I don't really know who's blocking Liu, based on the thing they said to Liu, I'd say Mi Na, but based on her condition, I don't think it's her.
Nelsiexoxo_16
#6
Chapter 32: Why am I commenting so late? What am I doing...I don't know..but anyways this was good! Revenge revenge revenge I see. Hmm..I'm really curious how this is going to play out and I can't wait. Update soon, like hurry dongsaeang!
-Anita
#7
Chapter 31: Let's hope Uncle Xiu can help..
Also, why is Love Bites 'currently unavailable'?
Nelsiexoxo_16
#8
I really like this!...Well obviously not what happened to her you know because that's just messed up aish...I'm rambling again. Okay never mind I mean I like the way you wrote out this chapter. It was very good! Update soon ^^
-Anita
#9
Chapter 30: Oh great. And here I thought that pesky thing was gone.. *sigh*
JungLiin #10
Chapter 9: actually i dont understand this story from the first chapter till the end ☺