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Marriage Bites
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[CONTENTID1] Defeat [/CONTENTID1]

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I took a quick look out the window and it was fully dark outside. This spirit was serious about killing me. He kept coming at me and every time I avoided the attacks but I was eventually growing tired.

"Just give it up. Just let me kill you okay?" he smirked as I breathed heavily.

"Never. I'll show you who's more powerful here," I breathed.

"Oh really?" he seemed amused. "Show me what you're really made of," he smirked as he looked at me as if observing my every move.

I glared at him. How could a spirit be like this? I thought he was going to be more ruthless. More angry...

I was so lost in thought that I didn't even realize that he lounged at me again. But this time I wasn't fast enough to dodge his attack. I felt burn on my left cheek as I was knocked down hitting the floor hard.

"Ow," I grunted as I went onto all fours to try to stand up. I felt my cheek and sure enough I was bleeding. But seconds later it stopped.

"I thought you said you were going to show me how strong you really are?" he mockingly said. "I will," I said through my teeth.

I reached my hand out and waited for the iron tool to fly into my hands. "What are-"

He was cut short as it flow across the room and come to my hands. I then proceeded to throw it at him. I got him where his stomach should be if he were to still be alive.

As the iron tool went through him, he bent over with pain and screamed out. "You !" he screamed as he suddenly started changing colors. His outline went from a white to a orange/red color. "You're going to pay for this," he voice sounding more demonic now.

I gulped but I suppressed the fear that was building up. "Two can play this game,"

I was already in my full form. But the anger that I felt deep inside started to surface causing me to feel even more powerful than ever.

"You will regret every," I said. He laughed as he attack me. I gave it my all by dodging, counter-attacking, defending,etc.

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Baekhyun's POV


We all stood by the door as we tried to listen in on what was happening.

"You think she'll be okay?" asked Tao worried. "Of course. Father wouldn't have sent her in, if he felt that she still wasn't ready," answered Soo Young.

We all sighed as we glanced towards the King. It was known that few vampires were able to defeat evil spirits, because those spirits are cunning. Even when they're dead they can calculate things far better than the living. It's really weird and shocking.

But I had faith in Mi Na. I knew that she would have the will power to defeat that spirit. If her Uncle was able to do it 2,000 years ago she could definitly do it herself.

I just hope she's careful.

"Why don't we wait in the lounge or something? Instead of waiting in front? It's only going to work us up even more than what we already are..." I suggested.

"I agree with him," added Myungdae catching me off guard. I weakly smiled at my... step son. That was still a foreign concept to me but I was adjusting to it. I mean... I did fill out the adoptation papers.

"Come on," Ye Jun said as he turned to go towards the lounge downstairs when we suddenly heard a loud crash coming inside of the room.

"MI NA!" screamed out Soo Min as he went towards the door and started banging on it and trying to open. We all freaked out but the King dragged Soo Min down the stairs.

"Don't worry about. I bet she's fine," he said with a dark expression. "But dad! What if she's seriously injured?" protested Soo Min.

"Look I'm worried as much as all of you but... even if we were able to open those doors... we wouldn't be able to do anything. That spirit is much stronger than what you all can imagine okay? Mi Na might have been able to talk to it but... now that it's angry all over again it's not going to stop now that he knows that Mi Na is the chosen one. He will not allow anyone to interfere... so please..." pleaded the King. The Queen went over to him and rubbed his back in gently circles.

"It's okay. We have to have faith for her okay?" she looked up at all of us. "Ne," we all said in unison causing her to break out into a smile and chuckle.

"That's it. We have to be optimistic about this,"

We all nodded our heads as she and the King turned around and went down the stairs.

Eventually we all got comfortable in the lounge, making sure we had room for all of us. The maids even brought in refreshments and snacks for us. They set the trays filled with snacks and assorted drink on the round table that was in the center of the lounge.

Some of us attacked the snacks as we grabbed what we liked as well as the drinks and went back to our spots to eat.

"What do you want to do to pass the time? I think mom and dad went to the garden to get fresh air because of this whole... Evil spirit thing," said Soo Min as took a bite into the sweet bread that he opened up.

"I mean... some of us should have stayed at the door to see if she would be okay..." started Luhan who looked worried. I glared at him because in some ways he didn't have the right to worry because I was married to her after all. I simply sighed as I opened up a bag of chips and started eating it.

"Well maybe you and Baekhyun can stay there?" smirked Donghae. "We should to," added Changmin as Yunho nodded simply.<

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Shirotakashi
#1
Chapter 40: I'm just going to go ahead and say this and I hope I don't sound rude and if I do.. I'm super sorry!!! So as the sequel continue it did feel as if you were dragging the story a bit too long and it kinda got boring that I didn't really want to read it anymore but I still did even though it was boring... (sorry if that sounded rude!!! I truly am sorry!!) Things were going a bit too slow for me as the reader and so it got boring. (I'm not going to say anymore since it'll sound even ruder.)
And yes, I would like it the fairy business got deal with~ And that Baekhyun and Mi Na start a family because it would be so cute to read Mi Na's and Baekhyun's children!! And yes!! I totally want Siwon and Soo Young to end up with one another~~
daggerose
#2
Hi, sorry, but the first story is unavailable?? Did you hide it or something?
spirit_L #3
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Hello~ As requested from Advertise Paradise, I am here to give you feedback on your story. Maybe it's because this is a sequel but I was a little lost in the story lol. I liked it nonetheless and the whole supernatural theme was great. Just a couple of things threw me off like the extra images in the chapter. I think it would be best to just use words to describe what your explaining. Overall, I liked the story and I like the way the plot is going. I wish you luck on the rest of your story (though you probably won't need it). ^^
Nelsiexoxo_16
#4
Chapter 35: Wahhh for some reason this chapter is my favorite...but then so was the last one...aish I'm confused now but good job I liked this one! And you're finally graduating dongsaeng ^^
Update soon it was great ^^
-Anita
#5
Chapter 33: I hate it when my browser just suddenly shuts down and I have to type my entire comment again.
ANYWAY.
I do think the classmates will find out, I'm just not sure if it will be now or a little while later... And I don't really know who's blocking Liu, based on the thing they said to Liu, I'd say Mi Na, but based on her condition, I don't think it's her.
Nelsiexoxo_16
#6
Chapter 32: Why am I commenting so late? What am I doing...I don't know..but anyways this was good! Revenge revenge revenge I see. Hmm..I'm really curious how this is going to play out and I can't wait. Update soon, like hurry dongsaeang!
-Anita
#7
Chapter 31: Let's hope Uncle Xiu can help..
Also, why is Love Bites 'currently unavailable'?
Nelsiexoxo_16
#8
I really like this!...Well obviously not what happened to her you know because that's just messed up aish...I'm rambling again. Okay never mind I mean I like the way you wrote out this chapter. It was very good! Update soon ^^
-Anita
#9
Chapter 30: Oh great. And here I thought that pesky thing was gone.. *sigh*
JungLiin #10
Chapter 9: actually i dont understand this story from the first chapter till the end ☺