Sorry that I Loved You: Author: -Baekonized_Eggyeol-

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Sorry That I Loved You

 

 

 

 

 

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▬ Author: -Baekonized_Eggyeol-


▬ Review Published: 11-17-17


▬ Characters: Kim Hanbin/Lee Hayi


▬ Genre: Light Angst/Romance


▬ Reviewer: Baekies

 

【 Introduction : 5/5 】 The description was good. Seeing as this was a one-shot for a contest and there were multiple prompts that helped create the idea for this story. I was always found prompts helpful, but only for short stories. I could never get hooked with a prompt to write a long story. I don't know why. I LOVE the poster. Primarymess makes amazing posters. I have a poster from her and it turned out to be one of the best! :) I love her animation skills. Also The Pearl: Graphics shop is awesome because three of my co-workers of this shop are also afilliated with The Pearl.  br />



【 Basic Summary : 5/5 】 The little description was a good lead in into the story because that's exactly what Hanbin did. He hurt Hayi and he thought she'd take that? Boy was he wrong.



【 Plot : 17/20 】To be honest, it's not the most original of plotlines, I'm sure this has happened more than once in a relationship. Where the ex-boyfriend broke up with the sweet natured girl because he couldn't keep his "magic" in his pants and he was rich, handsome and a la

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Moonshiner #1
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Author : moonshiner

https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1900944

Title : Sea in your Eyes

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1411855/sea-in-your-eyes

Character : Chanyeol and Kyungsoo and Jongdae
Genre : fantasy and slice of life(?) idk
Summary : false diagnosis of schizophrenia and sea creatures


Non rated
Type : chaptered with 7 currently
Ult bias : Jongdae and Kyungsoo
No preferred reviewer, everyone is welcomed
Ongoing

Author note: just tell me if anything is confusing, coherence and whether it is all over the place.
Aryaprava_1993- 1101 streak #2
Author : Aryaprava_1993-
Story title : stubborn beloved
Link :https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1334233/stubborn-beloved
Profile link :https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1636545
Character : oh sehun x Oc
Genre : romance ,comedy (and little bit )
Summary : She has fire in her eyes and he has a heart colder than ice. She cares for other and he can't be more careless. She always wears a smile and all his lips can do is smirk coldly.
Chapters :22 and completed
Password : livid
Favourite bias : sehun and Jin
Author note : it's already completed and I wanted to have a review about it.
Preferred reviewer : XxLittleKittyXx
Thank you!
charlislekim #3
Author: charlislekim

Story Name: every last bead

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1360039/every-last-bead-angst-fantasy-romance-yeri-crackship-bts-mythologyau-supernaturalau-faeries-jungkook-btsjungkook-redvelvet-btsvelvet-bangtanvelvet-redvelvetyeri-jungri-siren-gidle-yuqi

Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1524000

Characters: Yeri and Jungkook

Genre: fantasy, supernatural, romance

Summary: In exchange for magical favors, debts are given to the receiver in the form of black beads. Seven years ago, Yeri gathered enough black beads to fill her whole entire left arm. Now, Jungkook, with a chaste kiss and mischievous smile, is finally ready to collect his debts.

Chapters: 1 - 4 (i'm not rlly sure what u mean sorry)

Password: livid

Favorite Bias: kyungsoo

Author's Note: it's not complete yet and still pretty short but i wanna see how it is so far^^

Preferred Reviewer: sugalgi (if not possible, any is fine)

thank you!!
PCYplusBBH #4
Hi, I requested for a review a few months ago, in like July, and it hasn't been done yet. I was just wondering if there was a hold up? I had completely forgotten about the review, but I recently got another story reviewed and I suddenly remembered >.< You can take your time, but I wasn't sure if you needed the time or just didn't want to do my review >.< (at the time my usernames was PCYplusBBH) I'm not at all trying to sound rude or anything, I promise >.<
charlislekim #5
Also is it possible to request more than one per batch??
charlislekim #6
Hello! Is it okay to request if my story is only two chapters long?
PCYplusBBH #7
Author: PCYplusBBH

Story Name: Catch me when I fall

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1339434/catch-me-when-i-fall-angst-exo-exok-exom-hunhan-chanbaek

Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1751762

Characters: Luhan and Sehun (exo)

Genre: angst

Summary: Luhan is terrified of ever trusting anyone else. He has been let down left and right, he has been in love, or so he thought, so many times. And all he was given back was false affection and lies. So when Oh Sehun stumbles into his life and takes all of that pain away, Luhan must decide whether he will open his heart one more time or if he will learn from his past mistakes and ignore this new feeling Sehun has given him. Whatever he decides, it will affect his future greatly.

Chapters: 1

Password:Livid

Favorite Bias: I have two, Hoseok (BTS) and Chanyeol (exo)

Author's Note: This was my first time writing a story like this. It's kinda dark in the beginning, but gets lighter as the story goes on.

Preferred Reviewer: Grackie
SpillTheUnicornBlood #8
and i don't know if it's okay to ask for another review, but i'm sending again. feel free to turn me down if i can't. u.u

Author: SpillTheUnicornBlood

Story Name: Wake Up and Look At Me

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1205473

Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1169976

Characters: Seventeen's Joshua, Mingyu, S.Coups, Wonwoo, Vernon, Jun, DK, and mention of other members

Genre: Romance, Fantasy, Suspense (?)

Summary: Monday to Saturday. A series of encounters with Jisoo waking up being loved by a different man.

Chapters: 7

Password: Livid

Favorite Bias: Seventeen's Hiphop Unit (I gave up choosing u.u)

Author's Note: English is not my first language >.< the story might have a lot of plot holes and hanging/unanswered questions are intentional

Preferred Reviewer: none. (anyone is fine! ^^)
SpillTheUnicornBlood #9
Chapter 42: hi! i'm picking up my review!
(reviewer-nim, my comments are in the reply so other people won't be bothered by my lengthy post >.<)
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