Introduction: 2/5

I think you should somewhat reword the introduction a little bit. I understand that you was inspired by the games and other things; but it may confuse your reader and much more. I was overwhelmed with the questions of "What?" Maybe try being more descriptive; try giving a sneak peak of each chapter of your stories; even though it is indeed just a one shot of multiple stories combined into one. Also when it comes to looks; maybe you should try adding a post or background? It makes it appear a little bland and dull; do not be afraid to stun your readers with a amazing background and poster!

Basic Summary: 3/5

The basic summary is pretty much jumbled everywhere; since it is a combination of multiple one shots of course! That is indeed not a bad thing; but it can be sort of confusing. Even though; the basic summary is highlighting the fac tthey indeed are in the air force. I enjoyed how descriptive and in depth you was with everything- such as the code-talk and much more; even the date and zones you included. I really felt like I was truly in the force with them; being able to observe and see everything in their point of view!

Title Originality: 10/10

This title is very orginial! I have not seen a single person use a different langauge or anything like that! There may similiar titles with 'warriors' and etc; but you was smart and managed to give your own uniqueness to it by changing the language. It really gives it meaning since indeed they are pilots; working and fighting in the sky. It alerts myself and other readers that they indeed are in the airforce. I enjoyed the way you also translated it- so I was not confused and did not have to search it up. It mentally expressed in depth that even people in the air force are warriors; I liked the personal meaning and preferance you put in there.

Presentation Of The Story: 3/10

I was pretty interested in the title mainly, I enjoyed reading and reviewing it so very much! I enjoyed the flow and the way like I mentioned before, you put meaning in the title. It gave it an extra feeling of being there; as well as expierancing everything they was. As for the poster- I did not see one. Maybe you should add one to give the reader a viewing cliff hanger? The same for your background; so nothing looks bare and dull as well. Also; try adding a sneak peak for every single one shot intro to gain more knowledge on what you are about to write; and as well for the reader or reviewer to read!