INTRODUCTION (3/5)

I'm pretty much okay with the introduction but I feel that more could be added in terms of descriptive writing. You could describe how the cars raced with each other a little more as well as the emotions and thoughts of the driver to give the readers a better visual and allow them to connect with the characters. Otherwise, it may feel quite dull at times. Also, I'm not sure if it's because of my understanding, but you mentioned four cars and I counted five. Is the Mustang counted as one the four? (Chapter 1, first paragraph)

BASIC SUMMARY (3/5)

Your description of the story isn't too bad but it doesn't draw me in to read the story either. I think you could elaborate slightly more on how the characters in the story are involved without giving too much of the story away. Also, the sentences in the description don't really flow well and come together to form a good description. You could use some sentence connectors to better join your ideas together.

TITLE ORIGINALITY (6/10)

There weren't as many fanfics with the same title as I thought there would be but I found some with the exact same title/similar titles that people might confuse your story with. Especially since there is at least one within the same fandom/with the same characters that you have included in your fanfic.

PRESENTATION OF STORY (9/10)

I appreciate the fact that you space out the paragraphs as they allow readers to read your story more easily. However, without using a different font or style to separate the place and time headers from the text, it may become a bit confusing initially. (Chapter