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The introduction of the story is very good! You didn't mention to much or to little, and even though everything was mysterious and gaped apart, you might want to explain what happened with Tae's parents, and how he got to where he was. It might seem a little grasping and mysterious, but also confusing and might draw them away at the same time.

But, appearance wise, everything fit very well! The poster and the background was very beautiful, and it fit well together.  The background didn't over swamp and drown everything else out, and it matched. As well as the poster, I loved how it showed the city and bright neon lights; it highlighted the fact that the city is dangerous; as well as the outline of racing.

The font and the way you typed; it wasn't to much or to little. Like I mentioned before; I am near sighted; so it was not hard to see at all! I didn't have to see or look to close. It also was not in a very crazy font.

Everything seems very easy to grasp onto, and I was really confused however, and like I may mention; there was a few holes in the plot and description. How exactly did Kookie get to where he was, how did Tae decide getting in trouble would solve his problems? Why is Taeyeon so mad? How did Jimin and Jin meet Kookie? How about Rap Monster and Suga? Everything is sort of holes, but everything fits very good; besides that, the summary and base of the story was good!

I must admit, I really like the title of the story! However, is it illegal drag racing, or is it the way Tae is, always breaking the law and his behavior? There is titles with Illegal in the name, or refer to it in some sort of way, but you always made it into a very in depth meaning of the story and it fit perfectly! Everything fell in to place, and the title definitely isn't out of place at all, and I really loved it as well! It stands out, short and simple.

I really like the format and appearance of this story! It is so beautifully done, and the way it appeared was utterly amazing! The poster grabbed my attention, and it wasn't done to little or to much. The way it flowed together really made it pop, and it matched as well! It wasn't uneven, and it wasn't to blinding to my eyes. It really grabs my attention very much!

The chapter's are only two chapters, and I hope to see alot more from this story honestly! Not seeing it progress would make me quiet sad, but I see huge potential for it! Even though, I must say, there is a few gaps in the chapters as well as quite rushed! How did Kookie become a racer, how did he meet Jimin and Jin?

Even though there is some gaps, I really did like the way you expanded and really went into depth about the racing, bonds between characters and the direction you was going with it! I really enjoyed how everything went; and I wasn't bored at all with was happening, just a little confused however! I loved how I felt like I was in it!

The plot was a very interesting mixture of things! There was so much that happened throughout the story, and I enjoyed the way everything flowed together! There wasn't to many gaps; even though I would really want more of a backstory and de