Human Touch- Swareece
Light Livid Dreams: A Review Shop (Open) (Batch 2~)Hello Swareece! Thanks for requesting from me. Firstly I'd like to apologise: It took me much too long to review your story, and I’m very very sorry. A lot of stuff happened that I didn't expect, and also had to update my stories. Again, my apologies!
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Introduction (9/10)
Really liked the introduction, and how it revealed Mark’s denial of his condition.
Basic summary (10/10)
The summary is very good, and tells me what the story is about, but still makes me want to read more. It also tells the reader how Mark refuses to accept his feat our contact.
Title originality (9/10)
I did actually really enjoy your title, although (especially with mental illness!au) I feel like the title should have a deeper meaning, that’s revealed as the story goes on. However Human Touch did make sense, and connected with Mark’s condition.
Neatness of story/presentation (10/10)
Ahh, love reading stories with little to no grammatical or punctuation errors. Thumbs up to you!
Chapter flow (10/10)
The chapters all flowed nicely. ‘nuff said :)
Plot (9.5/10)
The storyline itself was a
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