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I really like your introduction; however, it fits better if you add it to your prologue. It's too long to be a foreword and same goes to what you wrote in the description section. Forewords are often used to catch your reader's attention and make them curious as to what is behind it. Even if you did made them curious because of the element of cliffhanging, the way you did your introduction looks like you revealed a big part of the story which I disapprove. It's as if I'm reading a chapter instead of an introduciton.

I recommend for you to either write a few sentences that can summarize the story OR write just a paragraph.

I was a bit lost with the summary you've submitted since you didn't really gave me the actual summary. Most of the time, the summary helps us, reviewers, know what the story is all about without reading the story yet. For my case, I used it as a basis to see if your story doesn't go far from the summary.

 You should already give me the main points of the story or the plot, to be exact. For example, I have to actually read the story just for me to know:

1. What is a Guardian?

2. Why Taehyung is somewhat against to the Head Guardian's orders and who the Head Guardian is?

3. What did Taehyung do to have his wings get sliced off?

4. What does Eunbi have to do with him?

5. What did Taehyung want them to understand and who is them?

Most Angel AU's have the word fall, fallen or a word similar to it in their title so it's not really that new to me since we all know that every angel who goes against their own kind, commits a crime or goes against their rules would be banished from the above and thus, to be called a Fallen or Fallen Guardian/Angel.

I'm honestly not sure if what you meant by Guardian as in Guardian Angel or basically they're angels but since your title is The Fallen, I assumed that this is an Angel AU.

Despite the things I said about the title and the introduction, your presentation is not really that bad. Although it's a bit messy since like what I said before, your introduction can already be mistaken as a chapter. The way you wrote it somehow covers that messiness.

I admit that even if I was suprised and beyond confused when I read both the foreword and the description but I was deeply mesmerized at how you wrote it.

The poster is also very pretty and gothic so it kind of gave me the right vibe when I started reading your story.

Okay, honestly, I was deeply and truly amazed at how your story is written. The flow of the chapter is very satisfying and I didn't get lost between the chapters. Each chapter is attached securely to each other wherein it is really connected with both the previous and after chapters.

I absolutely love how you describe everything in each chapter. Since I have a wild imagination, your descriptive paragraphs helps a lot in making m