spin spilltheunicornblood REVIEWER'S NOTE (sugalgi)

i sincerely apologize for reviewing your story so so so late as i had been busy a lot lately :(( i do hope you understand the inconvenience

but nevertheless, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR GIIVNG ME THE OPPURTUNITY TO REVIEW YOUR WONDERFUL STORY! I REALLY LIKE IT SO I HOPE YOU'RE SATISFIED WITH THE SCORES AND COMMENTS I HAD GIVEN AND POINTED OUT :)

ALL MY NOTES AND CORRECTIONS AREN'T REALLY MANDATORY FOR YOU TO DO. IT'S STILL YOUR CHOICE IF YOU WANT TO DO IT OR NOT!

Thank you for requesting < 3

  SCORES COMMENTS introduction (5/5) i love the intro, girl! you definitely caught my attention with that description and foreword of yours and i just suddenly felt that vibe of being "so close yet so far" type and i honestly love that. it even gave me the chills when you mentioned the last part of the description: the man in his drawings is slowly turning around. i'm not even sure why i felt that twinge of fear but maybe because it''s the suspense? probably- but great job nonetheless! BASIC SUMMARY (5/5) i like it that you somewhat gave me a summary that is short, yet straight to the point. you gave me enough points on what i should expect in your story; that jisoo is indeed an excellent artist since he loves to draw and that the main muse of his drawings is a man who doesn't show his face which supports that statement with the last sentence. even if you didn't mentioned that the muse's face wasn't show yet, that last part gave me an idea. TITLE ORIGINALITY (10/10) to be frank, when i saw spin, i thought the story is about a dancer (to be more precise, ballet) so i was a bit surprised that it wasn't ahahaha. anyway, i like how you used this single and short word to describe the whole story itself and you honestly just nailed it. PRESENTATION OF STORY (8/10)   THE WAY YOUR STORY WAS PRESENTED IS ACTUALLY VERY CLEAN AND ORGANIZED SO I HAD NO TROUBLE WHEN IT COMES TO READING. I WAS THINKING THAT MAYBE YOU SHOULD REQUEST FOR A POSTER FOR YOUR ONESHOT BECAUSE SERIOUSLY, YOUR STORY'S TOO GOOD TO NOT HAVE A POSTER AS ITS CHERRY ON TOP :) MY ONLY CONCERN IS THAT I WAS HAVING A HARD TIME TO DIFFERENTIATE WHETHER THIS SECTION OF THE STORY, OR THE POINT OF VIEW RATHER, DISPLAYS IF JISOO IS IN HIS DAYDREAM MODE WHERE HE'S WITH MINGYU OR NOT. IT'S HARD FOR ME TO INDETIFY IF THIS PART OF THE STORY IS THE REALITY WHERE JISOO IS OR THE FANTASY WHERE JISOO IS SOMEWHAT IMAGINING OR DAYDREAMING. ALTHOUGH YOU ALREADY HAD A FEW SE