Cheating Death
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CHEATING DEATH
☓ FINISHED REVIEW
[Description/Forward-10/10]
The Dsecription and forward were very straightforward with what the story would entail: ghosts, witches and magic! Harry Potter much? BUT WAY COOLER so far! :D
Your Forward was quite shocking to me. This story is your first fanfiction but the imagery you gave in just those three chapters tells a lot and I can imagine Taehyung and Jaera running from the Mort Fae and that they seem very dangerous. I'm looking forward to see what happens.
[Plotline-10/10]
Very good so far. It's intriguing and I can't wait to read more. I've subscribed so I'm ready to read when you're ready to continue. I'm super curious to know what happens next. Continue please :D
[Character Development-9/10]
Jaera: She is a witch with incredible powers which she unbeknownest about until Miss Kou points out. I really hope you develope her to be a strong and soon powerful witch.
Taehyung: The faithful sidekick. Your little scene in the beginning where he says "Your cauldron is ugly and dented" was cute. Snide yet cute little joke and then she hurls something at him as "shut up" gesture. Super cute! :D
Hope: I w
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