THE CONFESSIONS OF A SOCIALITE'S

DAUGHTER

paula1988

I really like your introduction! It's detailed and you give me what I'm supposed to expect in your story. I really appreciate that fact that you gave an advanced warning to the readers about having and abusive scenes so that the readers could be mentally and physically prepare themselves for the upcoming chapters they're about to read.

Your summary is quite detailed, the same thing as I mentioned in the introduction section. My only concern is that it's somehow not yet complete? You didn't gave me any important info about BTS and what they would do once Jihye started living with them. I think that's an important piece of data I need to know in order for me to further see where this story goes.

Although your title is rather unique since I haven't seen any story that has the same title as yours, I would prefer simple and deeper titles to it. Like 2-4 worded titles that says it all. Your title is too long but it's still up to you if you want to change or retain it ^^

First of all, I love your poster! It definitely screams fame and high status because of the gold letters and fonts being used. There's nothing wrong with how you present your story, however I suggest that if you plan to have flashbacks, you italicize them. You may include the word flashback starts and flashback ends but to further differentiate the two scenes of the story, it would be nice to look at if there's a different style to it. Also, don't start a chapter with the word flashback if the flashback only covers 30%-40% of the chapter unless this is the title of your chapter- but I don't think that's not the case since you had your first chapter titled as chapter 1. Consitency of chapter titles would be more nice to look at.

Note that this is not a low score. Since your story only has 2 chapter