Introduction: 5-5

The introduction was absolutely perfect! Very clean, simple, and straight to the point! I didn’t really have any questions about the story after reading it, (which in some cases could be a bad thing, because questions make the reader actually want to read the story) it just really made me curious about the plot of the story… 

Well, if you couldn’t tell, I’m not too good with words- but basically, I just really love your introduction!

Basic Summary: 5-5

I’ve honestly never seen any summaries like this… It’s different, but in a really great way! While you were summarizing the story, I could kinda tell what the story would be about, and I even got a little glimpse into the character’s personalities, which I really admire! 

Title Originality: 10-10

Your title is very original! Considering titles are usually the first thing people see on a story, people should want to make it very unique and entrancing, which is exactly what your title does! It really made me wonder what the story could be about before I read your description. 

Neatness / Presentation of Story: 10-10

As for neatness, I seriously couldn’t find anything wrong with your story! Everything was absolutely perfect. The font was beautiful, the spacing was just right, and I could just tell that you thought it out!

Chapter Flow: 15-20

The chapters for me seemed a bit rushed…? I don’t really know how to explain it- it just seems as if you go straight from one scene to the next… (Honestly, it might be because I read stories with time skips, so it's probably just me!) Other than that, your chapter flow is pretty good!

Plot: 18-20

 Ah, the plot!

What I love about your plot is that it seems very simple. Not in a bad wa