Light Livid Dreams: A Review Shop (Open) (Batch 2~)

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About

Welcome to Light Livid Dream's Review Shop. This is a review shop for you and only you. Our talented reviewers will thoroughly read your stories and critique whatever it needs to better your writing and make it a pleasurable experience for you and your audience. 

The shop was started by XxLittleKittyXx and thus far has aquired many fantastic stories. She has now joined forces with PeakyWave, PeanutsWithCream, Baekies and DeliDelay to accompany her with reviewing. Make sure to check out the Staff Section to get to know them and see what their strengths and weakness's are. 

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"With your dreams, comes a magical price. Enjoy The Little Things, It Paint's The Bigger Picture. And Your Dreams big or small, will come true"
 
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XxLittleKittyxx (available)
 
Position: Owner/Reviewer
Experience: 6 Years
Favorite Genres: Violence, Gore, Romance, etc. 
Least Favorite Genre: , Tragic
Bias: Jay Park
Favorite Group: B.A.P, EXO, BTS
Infomation: I will gladly do any requests and reviews of any sort! I am always here :3 - hands cookie- 
 
tba (UnAvailable)
 
Position: Graphic Artist/Reviewer
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Notes: Keep everything else to 1 line and this to (max) three lines. Image must be square (64px by 64px).
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sugalgi (available)
 
Position: Reviewer
Experience: 3 months
Favorite Genre: CHATFIC, fluff, romance, sliceoflife, angst, fantasy,
Least Favorite Genre: sci-fi & action
Bias: Min Yoongi (BTS)
Favorite Group: BTS, EXO, Seventeen
Notes: it's my first time to become a reviewer so please bear with me :( I'm so excited to review your stories so don't hesitate to request < 3


 
Grackie (Available)
 
Position: Reviewer
Experience: One year
Strengths: EXO, Romance, fluff, angst, sliceoflife
Weaknesses: Sci-Fi
Bias:  Baekhyun
Ultimate group: EXO
Notes: Excited to read new stories!

 
 
bebopchan (available)
 
Position: Reviewer
Experience: a few years :3
Favorite Genres: Any
Least Favorite Genre: None
Bias: All of them 
Favorite Group: TBA
Infomation: TBA
 

TBA(UnAvailable)
 
Position: Reviewer
Experience:  Newly Expierenced
Favorite Genre:  Any
Least Favorite Genre:  Any
Notes: She is our newest reviewer and is excited to work with us all!
 
 
 
 
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Nixxiom (available)
 
Position: Reviewer
Experience: 1 year
Favorite Genre: Comedy, Fluff, Tragic
Least Favorite Genre: OC Romance, Sci-Fi
Bias: Kim Minseok (EXO)
Favorite Group: EXO, BTS, GOT7
Notes: Looking forward to helping you all! ^.^
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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I am free and open to do reviews! Feel free to request from me anytime :D
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Moonshiner #1
Request form

Author : moonshiner

https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1900944

Title : Sea in your Eyes

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1411855/sea-in-your-eyes

Character : Chanyeol and Kyungsoo and Jongdae
Genre : fantasy and slice of life(?) idk
Summary : false diagnosis of schizophrenia and sea creatures


Non rated
Type : chaptered with 7 currently
Ult bias : Jongdae and Kyungsoo
No preferred reviewer, everyone is welcomed
Ongoing

Author note: just tell me if anything is confusing, coherence and whether it is all over the place.
Aryaprava_1993- 1101 streak #2
Author : Aryaprava_1993-
Story title : stubborn beloved
Link :https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1334233/stubborn-beloved
Profile link :https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1636545
Character : oh sehun x Oc
Genre : romance ,comedy (and little bit )
Summary : She has fire in her eyes and he has a heart colder than ice. She cares for other and he can't be more careless. She always wears a smile and all his lips can do is smirk coldly.
Chapters :22 and completed
Password : livid
Favourite bias : sehun and Jin
Author note : it's already completed and I wanted to have a review about it.
Preferred reviewer : XxLittleKittyXx
Thank you!
charlislekim #3
Author: charlislekim

Story Name: every last bead

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1360039/every-last-bead-angst-fantasy-romance-yeri-crackship-bts-mythologyau-supernaturalau-faeries-jungkook-btsjungkook-redvelvet-btsvelvet-bangtanvelvet-redvelvetyeri-jungri-siren-gidle-yuqi

Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1524000

Characters: Yeri and Jungkook

Genre: fantasy, supernatural, romance

Summary: In exchange for magical favors, debts are given to the receiver in the form of black beads. Seven years ago, Yeri gathered enough black beads to fill her whole entire left arm. Now, Jungkook, with a chaste kiss and mischievous smile, is finally ready to collect his debts.

Chapters: 1 - 4 (i'm not rlly sure what u mean sorry)

Password: livid

Favorite Bias: kyungsoo

Author's Note: it's not complete yet and still pretty short but i wanna see how it is so far^^

Preferred Reviewer: sugalgi (if not possible, any is fine)

thank you!!
PCYplusBBH #4
Hi, I requested for a review a few months ago, in like July, and it hasn't been done yet. I was just wondering if there was a hold up? I had completely forgotten about the review, but I recently got another story reviewed and I suddenly remembered >.< You can take your time, but I wasn't sure if you needed the time or just didn't want to do my review >.< (at the time my usernames was PCYplusBBH) I'm not at all trying to sound rude or anything, I promise >.<
charlislekim #5
Also is it possible to request more than one per batch??
charlislekim #6
Hello! Is it okay to request if my story is only two chapters long?
PCYplusBBH #7
Author: PCYplusBBH

Story Name: Catch me when I fall

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1339434/catch-me-when-i-fall-angst-exo-exok-exom-hunhan-chanbaek

Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1751762

Characters: Luhan and Sehun (exo)

Genre: angst

Summary: Luhan is terrified of ever trusting anyone else. He has been let down left and right, he has been in love, or so he thought, so many times. And all he was given back was false affection and lies. So when Oh Sehun stumbles into his life and takes all of that pain away, Luhan must decide whether he will open his heart one more time or if he will learn from his past mistakes and ignore this new feeling Sehun has given him. Whatever he decides, it will affect his future greatly.

Chapters: 1

Password:Livid

Favorite Bias: I have two, Hoseok (BTS) and Chanyeol (exo)

Author's Note: This was my first time writing a story like this. It's kinda dark in the beginning, but gets lighter as the story goes on.

Preferred Reviewer: Grackie
SpillTheUnicornBlood #8
and i don't know if it's okay to ask for another review, but i'm sending again. feel free to turn me down if i can't. u.u

Author: SpillTheUnicornBlood

Story Name: Wake Up and Look At Me

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1205473

Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1169976

Characters: Seventeen's Joshua, Mingyu, S.Coups, Wonwoo, Vernon, Jun, DK, and mention of other members

Genre: Romance, Fantasy, Suspense (?)

Summary: Monday to Saturday. A series of encounters with Jisoo waking up being loved by a different man.

Chapters: 7

Password: Livid

Favorite Bias: Seventeen's Hiphop Unit (I gave up choosing u.u)

Author's Note: English is not my first language >.< the story might have a lot of plot holes and hanging/unanswered questions are intentional

Preferred Reviewer: none. (anyone is fine! ^^)
SpillTheUnicornBlood #9
Chapter 42: hi! i'm picking up my review!
(reviewer-nim, my comments are in the reply so other people won't be bothered by my lengthy post >.<)
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