Introduction: 2/5

The introduction was way to short in my opinion. It didn't really show anything, or what year or anything. Not to be to strict, but maybe you should add more to it. I do like that you gave a short yet sweet introduction, but it still made me quiet confused. How did he even get married if he did not truely love the person - was it an arranged marriage? Does he love both? I think you should not be afraid to stretch it out a tad. It makes it even more interesting to have more of a back story on it. The reader will have more of a backstory on the of them falling in love; kind of like a sneak peak. However, you do not have to take my advice. Was the quote from him?

Basic Summary: 4/5

The basic summary of this story is pretty sweet however. Like I mentioned above, the introduction of this story is fairly short, but the entire summary of the story. I like how you did not rush the bond between Jungkook and his lover. It really builds up the of the entire story. The way you made the characters and exposed their special traits is sort of shy and hard to see, but besides that.. You did a good job. You didn't really say what year and exactly when this took place. Did this happen before? What year? How did this happen? Don't be afraid to give it a very well prespective and wide range. You sort of closed the reader in, but you did very well. I enjoyed the stories climatic outloook.

Title Originality: 5/10

This title, sadly, has been used many of times before. "You are now mine/ Mine, etc." I have seen many stories with this title many times, but it is alright. Your story is fairly new, but don't be afraid to come with uniqueness to the title's at all. You could try "Jungkook's mine/ The Bond Between Us." Or more. However, on the brightside, you did indeed give this title much purpose. Especially since the torn and exposed issues and struggle's Jungkook is indeed going through. You have put much thought in this title, it fits it both mentally and phsyically. It also seems to match the poster given to this story. You put meaning into "You're mine." The readers can feel the bond.

Neatness/ Presentation Of Story: 6/10

The presentation of this story was done very well! I enjoyed the poster as well, it's very well presented. It isn't boom in your face, not to many colors and not blinding to look at. As well as very well put together, not sloppy at all. I suggest maybe having a background to match indeed as well, but you do not have to. It would flow with the introduction presentation to really capture people's view. The text of the chapter is also well composed and thought out, it isn't hard to read- not to big or to little. You also have everything spaced out together, and isn't hard to read or tell who's talking. I enjoyed the way you did that, it wasn't hard at all to read. The only thing is, make sure you make your introduction a tad bit more longer.

Chapter Flow: 10/20