I Don't Know You, But Would You Like Some Coffee?~TEZMiso
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TITLE: Don't know you but Coffee?
date
6.24.`8
kitty
chapters 7
story link scores
scroll down INTRODUCTION
3/5 BASIC SUMMARY
5/5 TITLE ORIGINALITY
5/10 PRESENTATION OF STORY
10/10 CHAPTER FLOW
20/20 PLOT
20/20
20/30 CHARACTERS
30/30 GRAMMAR
40/40 GENERAL ENJOYMENT
50/50 COMMENTS
Hello there; lets jump into this review shall we?! introduction The introduction is very eye catching for me; but I do wish you made it just a little more longer. How old is seulgi? How did she discover her? You may want to include this; this is just about the introduction; not the entire story. I was kind of withdrawn because It seemed a little to fast paced; I was left with to many questions. Make sue you add a little detail! It is a very important quality. Other than that, the text and font was very easy to read and delighting. basic summary I indeed like the summary of the story; and how you highlight the pros and cons of everything. Seulgi has a very tough life and work; and is sort of depressed. I like how you drew the huge picture of how unhappy she is with her life; and the details and obstacle she faces every day. It makes it intreging and desireable to read. There was no plot holes or gapes in the story at at all. It really builds up the entire essence of it all. I love the feel and natural flow of the story. As for the genre; it really does fit. It is light and fluffy; there is no dramatic twists and events that catch the reader off guard. The flow and chapters of the story make sense. there is a very imaginative flow and i am sure many people can relate to the basic essence of this story. The chapters also close together and make sense, i love the way you really made sure it was perfect. You did an amazing job and you are correct, you do an amazing job on this genre as well! TITLE ORIGINALITY This title really stuck out to me as well; everything about it very creative. At first i was pretty inqusitive, but the whole foundation explained it very well. It is mainly talking about how Seulgi found the mysterious woman who visited the coffee shop every single day. It really fit in with the current events and reoccuring cycle evolving around the main character. I enjoyed the creative way you chose the title! Very good job! There is indeed people who do choose close cap
6.24.`8
kitty
chapters 7
story link scores
scroll down INTRODUCTION
3/5 BASIC SUMMARY
5/5 TITLE ORIGINALITY
5/10 PRESENTATION OF STORY
10/10 CHAPTER FLOW
20/20 PLOT
20/20
20/30 CHARACTERS
30/30 GRAMMAR
40/40 GENERAL ENJOYMENT
50/50 COMMENTS
Hello there; lets jump into this review shall we?! introduction The introduction is very eye catching for me; but I do wish you made it just a little more longer. How old is seulgi? How did she discover her? You may want to include this; this is just about the introduction; not the entire story. I was kind of withdrawn because It seemed a little to fast paced; I was left with to many questions. Make sue you add a little detail! It is a very important quality. Other than that, the text and font was very easy to read and delighting. basic summary I indeed like the summary of the story; and how you highlight the pros and cons of everything. Seulgi has a very tough life and work; and is sort of depressed. I like how you drew the huge picture of how unhappy she is with her life; and the details and obstacle she faces every day. It makes it intreging and desireable to read. There was no plot holes or gapes in the story at at all. It really builds up the entire essence of it all. I love the feel and natural flow of the story. As for the genre; it really does fit. It is light and fluffy; there is no dramatic twists and events that catch the reader off guard. The flow and chapters of the story make sense. there is a very imaginative flow and i am sure many people can relate to the basic essence of this story. The chapters also close together and make sense, i love the way you really made sure it was perfect. You did an amazing job and you are correct, you do an amazing job on this genre as well! TITLE ORIGINALITY This title really stuck out to me as well; everything about it very creative. At first i was pretty inqusitive, but the whole foundation explained it very well. It is mainly talking about how Seulgi found the mysterious woman who visited the coffee shop every single day. It really fit in with the current events and reoccuring cycle evolving around the main character. I enjoyed the creative way you chose the title! Very good job! There is indeed people who do choose close cap
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