Introduction: 5/5

The introduction for this story is the same as the last one last time. But still more advanced, I like how you mentioned that they was already being hunted and was already discovered. You explained that they was hunted and desired in multiple ways, exposing the fact that the Hunters and humans that was left desired to keep them as pets and trophies. But- why exactly did they decide to come on earth? What made them not fight back? When and what year did this exactly happen? What formed the new species? The introduction is short and sweet and explained a fairly more then The Forest Fallen Indeed did. As well as the layout, it is not hard to read and is not in your face. The bold you used makes it more visible as well. I enjoyed it alot!

Basic Summary: 5/5

The basic summary is well explained of the entire story. The cruelness of the Na'vi and the other tribes are well exposed. The of the summary is not explained nor exposed yet, like you mentioned to be me before. I enjoy the bonding you have between the different tribes of the angels, the type of punishments and the different masters you expose as well. Such as Clipping, cutting, surgically removing their wings shows how they are also caged in. As well as you have Minho, Kibum and more looking for him as well still. The harshness and conditions they are in like I mentioned are very well expressed. I still questions why exactly the humans desire them- and why they are not fighting back right away? But you did an amazing job on this!

Title Orginiality 7/10

I really like the name Caged. Even though however, there has been a few people that used 'Caged' in their name. 'Caged Birds/ Caged Angels and etc.' But the name for this story really fits it. They are victims of enslaving and corruption of humans. There was so many ways that the title fit, mentally and pyshically. I felt awful for the characters that was presented to me in this story. They are caged in their spirit, not free to fly around but yet captured in cages. As well as not able to speak their native tongue and more. I would possible come up with an more orginal story title such as : Caged Away From The Sky, or something like that. However, It hink it is fine the way it is. It also matched the poster and background you have for your story. The reader understands that the title truely does match the flow of it all.

Neatness/ Presentation Of Story: 5/10

The neatness of this story is very well put together and done. The background is not to in your face and drowns out everything from the story. It did indeed catch my eye, since it is a darker color. It fit the theme of the story very well, as well not being hard on the eyes. However, it does not really match the poster in my opinion. It is very light hearted looking on the appearance of it. The poster, again, is well done and I am impressed! It exposes the amount of creation and more of the story, it fits perfectly well. The introduction like I mentioned before, is incredible and is short and sweet. You missed a few points before like Forest Of The Fallen, including the year and where and etc. But the text and font used is not to much, you have it the right size. It was easy and enjoyable, and mainly eyegrabbing.

Chapter Flow: 20/20

I really enjoyed every chapter wholeheartedly. The flow you did with them is very good, I ejoyed it