有志竟成 (where there's a will, there's a way) - Dana-ya
Light Livid Dreams: A Review Shop (Open) (Batch 2~)Introduction- 5-5:
Not really much to say since your introduction was the translation of your title, but in all honesty, the translation just sounds really pretty.
Basic Summary- 5-5:
Wow… That just sounds really cool! It’s so simple, yet there’s so many questions I’m asking myself about the story. And it’s so mysterious… I love it!
Title Originality- 9.8-10:
Can 9.8 be a thing? I want that to be a thing.
Uh, I don’t really know how to say this…
I really like your title, especially since you put it in a foreign language and all. I remember seeing your story and immediately putting the title into different translators because, well, I’m pretty sure I don’t speak Chinese! It was a bit confusing, however, because every time I translated it, it said something different, sometimes even differing from your own translation. So while I do admire your unique title and what it means to the story, it can get a bit confusing to new readers, but that is to be expected, so don’t worry about it too much.
Neatness / Presentation of Story- 10-10:
Your story and font and spacing was just beautiful! I especially feel like the font described the story very well.
Chapter Flow- 19-20:
Your chapter flow was pretty good! I really like how you switched between the pov of the OC and T
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