Hello Swareece! Thanks for requesting from me again! I was very excited when I learned it was the sequel to Human Touch! Hopefully I was a little quicker this time haha....yeah, still sorry about what happened last time, heh.

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Introduction (9/10)

Really liked the introduction, and how it carried from the ending of the last story, to the beginning of this one.

Basic summary (10/10)

The summary is very good, and tells me what the story is about, and (kinda) tells the reader what happened in the previous story- which was great. It also made readers of the first story (like me!) interested on why Donghyuck and Mark were fighting...which I understood when the answers came and I got so emo lmao

Title originality (9.5/10)

I actually did like this title more than Human Touch, as I felt it was a lot more meaningful (which I told you in my last review)

Neatness of story/presentation (10/10)

Reading stories with little to no grammatical errors makes me so happy. Thumbs up! I actually think your writing was better, as it became more  detailed and emotional which made a very very enjoyable read.

Chapter flow (10/10)

The chapters all flowed nicely, like usual, haha! I usually have mixed feelings on two POVs (depending on the story) and I did really like how you switched between Mark and Donghyuck.

Plot (9.5/10)

Again, an amazing plot...although I wished that it was more connected to Human Touch. I did like how Riley was an important character, not just as a romantic interest, but as a friend to Donghyuck (the epilogue made me laugh) I did kinda want Donghyuck to start showing symptoms again...but it obviously didn't happen, which was totally fine. I did like the plot in Human Touch more, but your writing this time around was better- which i