Blooming Days- JasminWesson99
Light Livid Dreams: A Review Shop (Open) (Batch 2~)Hello JasminWesson99! I was very excited to read your story! It was a wonderful read ^^. Your poster was gORGEOUS and I love Jelly Bubble (I use them too keke) Er, I don't use fancy layouts 'cause I at them, but hopefully it's aesthetically pleasing enough lmao. Shall we get into the review?
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Introduction (9.5/10)
Gives the reader knowledge on her family problems. However, if you connected this hatred for Spring with how Baekhyun maybe changes these thoughts that'd be great.
Basic summary (6/10)
(Your description) It barely connected with your story. For reviews I read the summary after I read the content so that I can see how 'accurate' it is. However, it almost seemed like a description for another story. Where do you address Baekhyun is popular? When does she question her feelings? Bullied- do you mean the one time she was ually assaulted? I was very confused...
Title originality (8/10)
First of all YASSSS I LOVE THAT ALBUM SM. Secondly, while it's a cute title, why is it the title? Does it connect to Spring? If so, somehow connect that so the reader can be like "OMG THAT'S WHY IT'S "BLOOMING DAYS"!"
Neatness of story/presentation (10/10)
Easy to read. The chat part is usually a pain to read but for you, you made it very easy to read. Bless lmao
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