Introduction: 3/5

The introduction to this story is very bleek and shortened. It doesn't really make sense once you begin to read it honestly. I don't understand a few things, like how did they actually fall in love when they was fourteen? Did they get together at some point? Why does and how does he still love her? I sort of have a few question's on the introduction of your story. It doesn't really make sense to me. Your introduction is also very short and doesn't really explain what year and where it takes place, you might want to expose what time period. I do not think in your foreword you need to put in the title and all of that, they just have to scroll up to see all of that.

Basic Introduction: 5/5

The introduction for the story is actually very sweet and much more. Especially how you used a reference with the elephants dying from heartbreak. It was very touching, as well as how you recalled many memories they both shared together throughout the story and how he fell in love with her during highschool. I enjoyed the way you made him contact her, and well as vis-versa. The way you did so was very incredible. The basic introduction to the story however, needed a little bit of work. Like I mentioned before, I was very confused and didn't understand when exactly this took place. But you explained that in the actual chapter.

Title Originality: 3/5:

The title of this story is very orginal, not many people have used this story title before. Of course, there has been "A Touch Away.." And etc, but you give the meaning a new highlighting. I was not really able to get a further intake on the entire story, thus, since it was only a one shot. I was impressed on how you made the flow of the chapter. Even though, you might want to Capitalize the title, instead of lowercase. It doesn't look that great lower cased, especially since indeed it is a title. Suga or Yoongi, in this, can't have the girl but Seokjin, aka Jin, is able to have her instead. He is truely only a finger tip away, since he loved her then let her go. It's truely powerful.

Neatness/ Presentation Of Story: 5/10

The presentation of this story is alright. It was not my favorite thing, I apologize for my level of harshness but it is indeed very true. The poster however, does fit. It looks like they are texting in some way! It also includes all of the important character's in the story. The background, however, should match the poster. Maybe request to from a shop, such as my affilate, Pearl's Graphic Shop, to do a poster and back ground. The text was very easy to read however, not to small or little. You also made it easy for the reader to know between texting or calling between just normal dialog. It was very easy to comprehend and observe.

Chapter Flow: 20/20

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