** I want to note that I am very sorry for the delayed request. I have taken forever to get caught up with everyone; I am so sorry! Forgive me ^^; **

Introduction: 2/5

The introduction was a tad confusing for me- I did not exactly understand at certain points actually. I liked the entire layout of the introduction; especially the title. The title itself is a very big attention grabber- I enjoyed how you pieced it together fully. It means a hiding place, or safety and comfort. Even though; I did not fully understand what the story was about when I scrolled down. I was lost; what exactly does the quotes mean? Why do they believe that? You should give a sneak peak from the story, so I, myself and the other readers know's what is going on. I enjoyed the way you made it pop out though.

Basic Summary: 5/5

I do indeed like the basic summary of this story. It is very unique, and has it's own flow and feeling to it. I have never really encountered nor heard of killer butterflies before! (I have a undying fear of butterflies O-O). So this story is the reason I absolutely hate them. How did the butterflies exactly get infected themselves? I love how you also made it seem like one of the most harmless creatures could somehow spread the disease and virus. The way you also explained what everything was, such as Blood Butterflies, Bloomers and all of that. You may want to put that in the beginning of the story, into your introduction. It would help your reader right away, so they do not have to keep going back and forth.

Title Originality: 10/10

The tilte was very orginial! It had your own spinoff and meaning to it. Since it is an outbreak against all of manking, you used a word that is foreign to some people; and unique to others- since they do not use that advanced of word choice's. I was impressed on how you chose the word relating so safety and security. It allows the reader to know that this is a serious story, making them more aware that many things will take place along the lines of a apocolyptic matter. It also was not extensively long and hard to remember, it was short and sweet. I have not really seen many people use an word that truly coresponds with their story, so I am very proud and impressed!

Presentation Of The Story: 5/10

The presentation of the story was not that attention grabbing as the title. I do not mean to sound harsh, but that is sadly the truth. I will begin with your poster- that was very amazing and well put together! I love the apocolyptic feeling to it; it was sort of in my face but it wasn't to much. The same thing as your background, it flowed well together and wasn't out of context or unrelatable. However, like I mentioned before, you may want to truly not put the guide on a chapter, they could always see it on the front page instead of having to go back to the other ''chapter.'' do not worry, you will not r