Unwind

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Unwind ; I wont unravel when nothing will unwind

How to unwind my feelings for you?

How do I unwind my past and present?

How am I going to unwind from my first love?

 

Torn between past and present; Park Jimin and Jeon Jungkook, does this ring a bell? Was it a fate or mere coincidence? Jeon Jungkook might change but he is still that shy boy you used to love. Park Jimin? You hate how much his warm and gregarious presence affects you. Now, do these two rings any bells again?

 

 

 

 

Foreword

 

Characters

 

Kim Sera(OC)

 

Park Jimin 

 

 

Jeon Jungkook

 

 

Minor Characters

Kim Seokjin

 

Kim Taehyung

 

Kim Namjoon

 

Min Yoongi 

 

Jung Hoseok

 

Song Sunhi(OC)

 

Cho Kiara (OC)

 

Others might come along as the story goes on

 

 

Five years, im still longing for him..It was my mistake to begin with, i should have never let him in.I miss him so badly.But do i deserve this?

(Kim Sera,2017)

 

I was madly in love with her,I should have told her the moment i held onto her so tight when she thought her whole world crash. You have me my love,always.

(Park Jimin, 2017)

 

I deserve no one. My darkness consume me. I dont need her. I dont need her smile. I hate weakness.

(Jeon Jungkook, 2017)

 

Author's Note

1. First poster Poster Credit to GL18MTBD

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2. Second Poster credit to kawaiimingyu

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  1. Firstly, my writing style is more casual and simple so i might not be using much bombastic words. I am not professional writer and grammatical error everywhere. If you are one of those grammar nazis keep ur eyes shut or you can help me fix the grammar, message me anytime . I dont bite :)
  2. Secondly, this storyline is my original idea if you happen to stumble upon similar plots or background as mine it might be coincidence. Sometimes, human may share the same way of thinking, dont u think? :)
  3. This story is pure fiction and has nothing to do with the characters real life. I warned you my storyline might be cliche but i keep it simple and realistic. Some of the scenes or at least the base of the plots came from my real experience, i twisted it to sound fitting in my story.After all, real life works that way right. Feel free to put yourself in Kim Sera's shoes, the OC is you :) 
  4. Lastly, I hope you enjoy reading this as much as i love writting this story. Please subscribe and comment angels. 

Disclaimer: I dont own any of the gif used at the end of chapters. Neither do i own any of the characters, this fic is not related to any of the characters in real life.

Please do not plagiarize this story. 

Belongs to Jaegege © 2017. All Rights Reserved.

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Chimswae
Thank you for 10K views and, new subs and upvotes xx Im deeply touched unwind is still alive <3
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nochusunshinerainbow #1
Chapter 39: Thanks for writing this incredibly beautiful story!!!
nochusunshinerainbow #2
Chapter 30: Oh my gosh!!! This is really unexpected!!!! I really love your story!!! A lot of surprises!!
Namjoonadmirer #3
Hi. I would like to say thank you for writing such a beautiful stories. I read all of your stories and its give me a lot of happiness during my semester break. Unwind is the best story and for the first time, i'm in love with jimin in AFF. I wish u a lot of happiness and thank you again :)
Violetflowers #4
Chapter 40: Hi author I finished reading this, guess who is cryibg *points self* it is me. Cant believe I read such beautiful stories? Your writing makes me emotional. I sure want to see more of this genre in the future. I love Jimin and Sera. I will miss them and everyone.
Minaluvv #5
Chapter 40: Hi authornim, I enjoyed “unwind” a lot, so much that it only took me 2 days to finish this story, despite my busy schedule. I love how you plot and twist the story and they are interesting and addictive. On TOP of that, I love how Sera and Jimin loved each other so much that they didn’t let just anyone come into their life even when they were not dating. Thank you again for this wonderful story.
Violetflowers #6
Chapter 10: This story is so intriguing, I cant wait to finish it. I really love Sera! She is fiction but relatable character. Rooting for more of Sera and Jimin.
tartytorts #7
Chapter 39: Okay. I am ready to go through the emotions again. Firstly, I'm glad I read this, it wasn't my usual genre but I stuck around for the epilogue and I am glad I did.
I have always been a Jungkook bias in fanfics, like i feel he fits every character written about him to the T. Jimin is a soft character and usually does well in either or extremely bad boy romances.
This story reversed the order for me and it took me some time to wrap my head around the reversal. I always rooted for Team jungkook and even after the epilogue I cannot decide which team I like better, its like Sera would have a different feel with both of them so its incomparable. I liked all the characters here, i could visualise them as they were described. The choice of words was simple and effective. It knitted the plot without any complexity that would hinder your plot or make it lose itself in the fancy schmancy and that is something I love. Nothing like Less is more right?
Coming to the story-
1. The backstory is so emotionally rich. You feel the pain, you feel the love and longing. The sting of loss, the void of everything around you collapsing like a house of cards *ehh see what I did there?*
2. I love how fatherly Jin is. I love everything that man does lmao. His motherly brotherly character tickled the plot by lightening it up through the revenge and love drama.
3. Revenge and betrayal play a hidden undertone in this- right from Sera's best friend who dated JK to the major antagonist Max. Its very difficult to write these scenes I know but you delivered well. Like it makes me hate his character so you succeeded.
4. Coming to the actual love triangle I did not enjoy the confusion a lot partly because I was on Team kook and i hoped she would go back to him. Even in the last when Jimin breaks up I hoped for her to end up with Jungkook (this is only me being salty as a subjective kookie wrecked cookie) like i throughly enjoyed flirty jimin bcz i can imagine the real jimin being this adorable pouty bad blob of mush too.
4. I really did feel so emotional at the entire thing. Jungkook started over. Jimsera have a family. Other friends have their world. Yoongi is apparently a hot man in uniform whoa.
If this was your first fic then this is legit your baby master piece because there wasn't a single dull moment. It concluded beautifully. Also i love how you format everything.
Bunny i hope you enjoyed my comment bcz i enjoyed this a lot. I am moving on to nip in the bud now lmao
iilydia #8
Chapter 39: oh my god, this story was so good. I was on an emotional roller coaster. Thank you for this wonderful story :')
tartytorts #9
Chapter 39: Bunny.... why did you do th-this to me?....I need to compose myself. Wait then i will give my comment.
*takes a deep breath*
tartytorts #10
Chapter 11: Oh no i cannot decide my team either :(
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