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Chapter 11: Was it a friendly relationship? Was it one sided? Was it more than just a friend?

 

Narrator’s Pov

Jimin carefully used his elbow to press the button to Sera’s apartment; she was sleeping quite peacefully on his back. The door clicked opened and Jin’s sleepy face welcomed them “Jiminie, what are y- Wait, Sera? What happen to her? Is she hurt?” Jin freaked out to see Jimin’s sudden appearance at his doorstep. The last time Jimin visited him was months ago without Sera’s presence at home.

“ Chill. She is okay, she passed out after drinking bottles of Soju. Make way for me, I need to put her down on bed” Jimin was tired but he enjoyed doing this simple things for Sera.

Jin was about to ask questions, he sure had so much things in his head as expected obsessive brother. He made way for Jimin as he quickly closed the door and led him to Sera’s bedroom.

Jimin carefully tuck Sera’s on her bed with Jin’s help, he stretched a little to loosen his muscle. “Both of you had a drink together? She does not even let me drink with her, this punk” Jin mumbled in annoyance with his hands diligently took off Sera’s heels setting it down on floor.

“ No. I got a call from Sunhi. She said the stall owner informed her, Sera was too drunk to get back home by her own” Jimin shrugged while his eyes scanned her room. He liked the ambience of the room, vintage and floral.

“And why would Sunhi call you instead of me? I am her brother and who are you?” he pulled the duvet over Sera’s body.

“Maybe I am the guardian of her heart” Jimin rolled his eyes following Jin out from the room.

Jin bewildered at Jimin’s stupid reply “ You are cocky. Why would you be the guardian of her heart? Eww” Jimin sat down on the couch, leaning back while stretching his legs. Seokjin settled down beside Jimin and handed him a can of beer. They used to spend their free time drinking, had a heart-to-heart talk like a gentleman before he got a full-time job. Too bad, nowadays they were too busy to even bump into each other.

Jimin took a long sip enjoying the taste of the beer as Jin remained silent beside him. They were staring blankly at the ceiling watching the fan circled round and round. “How’s thing with Sera?” his sudden question sent tingle to Jimin’s heart. He did not exactly know how to answer that question; he was unsure what they actually were right now.

Was it a friendly relationship? Was it more than just a friend? Was it a one sided thing?

Jimin let out a soft sigh, “Things were good. We catch up on each other’s life. I like how she just reappears in my life again. She seems different, a mature version of Sera that I know few years ago. I like that” his lips curl up into a cheeky smile.

Anyone who saw how stupidly Jimin smiled would know he was madly in love.

Seokjin chuckled, “ I never expect this to happen. You and Sera. I have always seen her as my baby sister, when I found out she actually has a thing for you, It is upsetting me” Jimin frowned.

“Why is she having a thing for me upsetting you, seriously? You are a jealous freak Jinnie.” Jimin shook his head showing his disapproval.

“Well at first, It was weird. Why would she like a guy with weird choice of colour hairstyle like you? You don’t even have a sense in fashion. You changed your hair colour every year, pink , blonde, brown, black, orange and pink again. Most importantly your eyeliner, that is horrible. I never like your pink hair” Jin cringed.

Jimin nudged the older boy shoulder as a protest “ And, when you think about it. You never told me that you actually have feelings for my sister? We are best friend, like bro-bro yet you betray me. I hate betrayal the most. It stings” Jimin chuckled at his ridiculous reasons.

Sometimes Jin could be unreasonable and unreadable, he would say anything that he thought was right according to his brilliant brain.

“ No one with sane mind would tell the girl’s obsessive, overprotective and insane brother that he actually has feelings for her sister. Wow you really won all the titles to yourself” Jimin scoffed.

“ That is why I’m the best man that she ever had in life” his confident big time. Jin turned his head to Jimin’s direction “ Are you worried this is a one sided thing? I could read you” he smirked.

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nochusunshinerainbow
#1
Chapter 39: Thanks for writing this incredibly beautiful story!!!
nochusunshinerainbow
#2
Chapter 30: Oh my gosh!!! This is really unexpected!!!! I really love your story!!! A lot of surprises!!
Namjoonadmirer
#3
Hi. I would like to say thank you for writing such a beautiful stories. I read all of your stories and its give me a lot of happiness during my semester break. Unwind is the best story and for the first time, i'm in love with jimin in AFF. I wish u a lot of happiness and thank you again :)
Violetflowers
#4
Chapter 40: Hi author I finished reading this, guess who is cryibg *points self* it is me. Cant believe I read such beautiful stories? Your writing makes me emotional. I sure want to see more of this genre in the future. I love Jimin and Sera. I will miss them and everyone.
Minaluvv #5
Chapter 40: Hi authornim, I enjoyed “unwind” a lot, so much that it only took me 2 days to finish this story, despite my busy schedule. I love how you plot and twist the story and they are interesting and addictive. On TOP of that, I love how Sera and Jimin loved each other so much that they didn’t let just anyone come into their life even when they were not dating. Thank you again for this wonderful story.
Violetflowers
#6
Chapter 10: This story is so intriguing, I cant wait to finish it. I really love Sera! She is fiction but relatable character. Rooting for more of Sera and Jimin.
tartytorts
#7
Chapter 39: Okay. I am ready to go through the emotions again. Firstly, I'm glad I read this, it wasn't my usual genre but I stuck around for the epilogue and I am glad I did.
I have always been a Jungkook bias in fanfics, like i feel he fits every character written about him to the T. Jimin is a soft character and usually does well in either or extremely bad boy romances.
This story reversed the order for me and it took me some time to wrap my head around the reversal. I always rooted for Team jungkook and even after the epilogue I cannot decide which team I like better, its like Sera would have a different feel with both of them so its incomparable. I liked all the characters here, i could visualise them as they were described. The choice of words was simple and effective. It knitted the plot without any complexity that would hinder your plot or make it lose itself in the fancy schmancy and that is something I love. Nothing like Less is more right?
Coming to the story-
1. The backstory is so emotionally rich. You feel the pain, you feel the love and longing. The sting of loss, the void of everything around you collapsing like a house of cards *ehh see what I did there?*
2. I love how fatherly Jin is. I love everything that man does lmao. His motherly brotherly character tickled the plot by lightening it up through the revenge and love drama.
3. Revenge and betrayal play a hidden undertone in this- right from Sera's best friend who dated JK to the major antagonist Max. Its very difficult to write these scenes I know but you delivered well. Like it makes me hate his character so you succeeded.
4. Coming to the actual love triangle I did not enjoy the confusion a lot partly because I was on Team kook and i hoped she would go back to him. Even in the last when Jimin breaks up I hoped for her to end up with Jungkook (this is only me being salty as a subjective kookie wrecked cookie) like i throughly enjoyed flirty jimin bcz i can imagine the real jimin being this adorable pouty bad blob of mush too.
4. I really did feel so emotional at the entire thing. Jungkook started over. Jimsera have a family. Other friends have their world. Yoongi is apparently a hot man in uniform whoa.
If this was your first fic then this is legit your baby master piece because there wasn't a single dull moment. It concluded beautifully. Also i love how you format everything.
Bunny i hope you enjoyed my comment bcz i enjoyed this a lot. I am moving on to nip in the bud now lmao
iilydia #8
Chapter 39: oh my god, this story was so good. I was on an emotional roller coaster. Thank you for this wonderful story :')
tartytorts
#9
Chapter 39: Bunny.... why did you do th-this to me?....I need to compose myself. Wait then i will give my comment.
*takes a deep breath*
tartytorts
#10
Chapter 11: Oh no i cannot decide my team either :(