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Chapter 18: You cant unlove Kim Taehyung

 

The image of his mother’s death was still fresh in Jungkook’s mind, he just seemed couldn’t erase it from his memory. There was part of him wanted Max dead instantly but he knew it was impossible to attack him without plan. His mind was a total mess; even the alcohol could not wash away the pain.

The meeting with Sera last night was wonderful and he wondered how her presence made him feel better. Jungkook took another shot to get over his frustration, placing the glass down with a slight grunt. He wanted to end this war with Max and he had to find way to bring him down.

His eyes roamed around as he caught a familiar figure with his head hung down “Taehyung?” he mumbled. Jungkook arose from his seat making his way to Taehyung’s table “Had a ty day huh?” he sat down beside him.

Taehyung turned his head to Jungkook with a deep sigh “ My father disowned me. He said it was my fault for putting so much trust on you without checking the bag” Jungkook who was about to take a sip of his drink stopped moving. He knew his action might affect Taehyung indirectly, but it was his only choice to slow down Max and his father.

Jungkook listened as Taehyung continued “I know he doesn’t have any intention to accept me in the family. He has been using me for his sick business so his hand will never get dirty. I devoted my life for him but I am sure he doesn’t even give a damn about me” he gritted his teeth and drank his drink one shot.

“Do the headlines posted on the internet affect your family business that bad?” Jungkook sighed softly. He was the one that should be blamed for ruining Taehyung’s relationship with his father.

Taehyung scoffed “Family business? More like the Almighty Kim business. I might be the Kims but I don’t think the business wants to be associated with someone like me” he chuckled bitterly with a long pause.

“The company is in chaos right now. Detectives came over few times to interrogate every worker. There was also an order from the prosecution office to confiscate files and related data for investigation. I am sure he is plotting something and looking for someone to take the fall for the company” he gritted his teeth.

“He is not a good father for you Tae. He made you do his dirty jobs knowing how desperate you wanted his attention and love. He never meant to bond with you so he took advantage of your desperation. You did not lose anything” Jungkook patted his back.

Taehyung’s rubbed his back head, frustrated “Why was I blinded by his so called love and affection? I should have stopped cleaning his mess. I guess I was meant to be like this, fatherless” Jungkook smiled sadly at the thought of him being in the same position as Taehyung.

“You are not alone. I am fatherless too” he mumbled under his breath. He could tell Taehyung had his gaze fixed on him as he never talked real things happened in his life. Jungkook felt obligated to clear the air between him and Taehyung. He kept the whole story involving Max from Taehyung because he did not want to ruin his relationship with his dad.

“ Few years ago I was a normal person until Max came ruining my life. He killed my father in front of me, and he took my mother so he could use me to do his dirty job. It was pure hell to live under Max’s shadow. I did nasty things indirectly helping them to get innocent kids and girls” he finally opened up to Taehyung.

Taehyung flinched in curiosity “Why he needs those kids and girls?”

“Human organ trafficking. I have no idea how and where this business apparently takes place. He never trusted me fully so he didn’t really reveal his filthy operation. My tasks were to lure these people and they would finish the rest of it. I have been living like this for years and I am sick of it. That is why I set your company up with that fake drugs” Taehyung shook his head finally understood Jungkook’s difficult situation.

“That is sick man. I am sorry about your dad, I should have known. You don’t seem like a guy that carelessly works for Max. I was curious at first but I didn’t want to sound nosy” Taehyung poured drinks in Jungkook’s glass.

“So where is your mother? Max still has her?” he asked.

Jungkook felt a heavy lump on his throat; he tried not to break down when it came to this topic. He finally shook his head i

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nochusunshinerainbow
#1
Chapter 39: Thanks for writing this incredibly beautiful story!!!
nochusunshinerainbow
#2
Chapter 30: Oh my gosh!!! This is really unexpected!!!! I really love your story!!! A lot of surprises!!
Namjoonadmirer
#3
Hi. I would like to say thank you for writing such a beautiful stories. I read all of your stories and its give me a lot of happiness during my semester break. Unwind is the best story and for the first time, i'm in love with jimin in AFF. I wish u a lot of happiness and thank you again :)
Violetflowers
#4
Chapter 40: Hi author I finished reading this, guess who is cryibg *points self* it is me. Cant believe I read such beautiful stories? Your writing makes me emotional. I sure want to see more of this genre in the future. I love Jimin and Sera. I will miss them and everyone.
Minaluvv #5
Chapter 40: Hi authornim, I enjoyed “unwind” a lot, so much that it only took me 2 days to finish this story, despite my busy schedule. I love how you plot and twist the story and they are interesting and addictive. On TOP of that, I love how Sera and Jimin loved each other so much that they didn’t let just anyone come into their life even when they were not dating. Thank you again for this wonderful story.
Violetflowers
#6
Chapter 10: This story is so intriguing, I cant wait to finish it. I really love Sera! She is fiction but relatable character. Rooting for more of Sera and Jimin.
tartytorts
#7
Chapter 39: Okay. I am ready to go through the emotions again. Firstly, I'm glad I read this, it wasn't my usual genre but I stuck around for the epilogue and I am glad I did.
I have always been a Jungkook bias in fanfics, like i feel he fits every character written about him to the T. Jimin is a soft character and usually does well in either or extremely bad boy romances.
This story reversed the order for me and it took me some time to wrap my head around the reversal. I always rooted for Team jungkook and even after the epilogue I cannot decide which team I like better, its like Sera would have a different feel with both of them so its incomparable. I liked all the characters here, i could visualise them as they were described. The choice of words was simple and effective. It knitted the plot without any complexity that would hinder your plot or make it lose itself in the fancy schmancy and that is something I love. Nothing like Less is more right?
Coming to the story-
1. The backstory is so emotionally rich. You feel the pain, you feel the love and longing. The sting of loss, the void of everything around you collapsing like a house of cards *ehh see what I did there?*
2. I love how fatherly Jin is. I love everything that man does lmao. His motherly brotherly character tickled the plot by lightening it up through the revenge and love drama.
3. Revenge and betrayal play a hidden undertone in this- right from Sera's best friend who dated JK to the major antagonist Max. Its very difficult to write these scenes I know but you delivered well. Like it makes me hate his character so you succeeded.
4. Coming to the actual love triangle I did not enjoy the confusion a lot partly because I was on Team kook and i hoped she would go back to him. Even in the last when Jimin breaks up I hoped for her to end up with Jungkook (this is only me being salty as a subjective kookie wrecked cookie) like i throughly enjoyed flirty jimin bcz i can imagine the real jimin being this adorable pouty bad blob of mush too.
4. I really did feel so emotional at the entire thing. Jungkook started over. Jimsera have a family. Other friends have their world. Yoongi is apparently a hot man in uniform whoa.
If this was your first fic then this is legit your baby master piece because there wasn't a single dull moment. It concluded beautifully. Also i love how you format everything.
Bunny i hope you enjoyed my comment bcz i enjoyed this a lot. I am moving on to nip in the bud now lmao
iilydia #8
Chapter 39: oh my god, this story was so good. I was on an emotional roller coaster. Thank you for this wonderful story :')
tartytorts
#9
Chapter 39: Bunny.... why did you do th-this to me?....I need to compose myself. Wait then i will give my comment.
*takes a deep breath*
tartytorts
#10
Chapter 11: Oh no i cannot decide my team either :(