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Chapter 17: It is time to return the favor Kim Sera

 

Sera took a quick glance at her watch as she cursed in her head ‘Kim Sera why didn’t you check the time? You stupid stupid girl’. Jungkook had left twenty minutes ago looking better and she was happy that she could comfort him.

However, she totally missed her very first date with Jimin. She hailed a cab to get to her destination faster as Sera tapped her foot nervously hoping that Jimin would still be there. Sera screwed up this date and should be blamed for it.

She could not imagine how much destruction it would bring to their relationship.

The journey was short but it felt way too long, as soon as they arrived at the destination Sera quickly paid the driver and ran out to find Jimin. To her dismay, the skatepark was closed. There were no sign of human except few workers who just exited the park. They were supposed to meet here four hours ago, but it passed the operation hours.

Sera walked for thirty minutes and didn’t get anywhere. She grew frustrated and took a turnoff to the left hoping to catch Jimin nearby. She felt the pain from the ankle, all the way up to her legs from the heels that she wore.

She finally gave up as she leaned against the cold wall ‘I screwed up. He must think I am playing him’ she sighed deeply. Sera kicked her heels, squatting down while giving her legs a light massage. At this rate, she already lost hope and she was ready to see her relationship with Jimin destroyed.

Sera felt like bawling but she was too tired to even breath, she hid her face in her knees as she tried not to give in to her negative thought. A footstep broke the silence but she paid no attention to it. She just wanted to hide her face under her blanket and screamed.

She felt a presence in front of her squatting down at her level, for some reason her stomach twitched in fear.

Jimin ran his finger in her hair it gently “Sera..” his voice was soft and sweet.

Sera snapped her head up to see Jimin staring into her orbs with that attractive eyes of his “Jims..You..” his breathtaking presence literally took her breath away.

She was relieved to see him.

Without hesitation she threw her arms around his neck, as she pulled him close into an unusual tight hug “I am sorry” she buried her face in his neck.

Jimin was never mad at her so she had no reason to apologize. He waited for Sera to come until the skatepark officially closed for the day and he grew worried when she didn’t show up. Jimin thought she stood him up because she was not ready to bring their relationship to another level. As negative thoughts kicked in, he did feel like giving up. He didn’t really leave for the night.

Hence, in order to gather his thought he decided to talk a walk around the area just to gather back his almost broken spirit. When Jimin saw a familiar figure squatting with her face buried in knees, he knew he shouldn’t have given in to negative thoughts. She really showed up. And, for whatever reason why she couldn’t show up earlier he knew she had her own reasons.

Jimin his hand down encircled it around her waist securely, pulling her close to him “Don’t be. You did nothing to apologize” he whispered.

Sera held onto him dearly “I am afraid that I might lose you..” she muttered with her eyes close enjoying Jimin’s warm embrace. Her confession fluttered his heart; Sera had never been this honest.

His lips curled into a genuine smile “So do i.. Kim Sera…” Jimin pulled away from the hug taking a long pause. He gathered his courage to let this feeling that he had been keeping for years. Pressing their forehead together, he brushed his thumb over her cheeks as she gazed back lovingly.

He loved this girl and he did not want to lose her anymore.

Five years were more than enough; he did not want to lose her again. “Kim Sera, I have kept this feeling to myself for five years; I don’t think I can handle it anymore. I can’t imagine my life without you. Your smile, your laugh, the smell of your perfume, the way your lips curls into a cute pout when you’re upset even to the simplest touch that we share, I can’t seem to get enough of you” Sera bit her lower lips as she caressed his cheeks. Her heart now felt much warmer hearing those beautiful words from Jimin.

Jimin brought her hand close to his lips and he planted a soft kiss on it “ You are my person, Kim Sera. I hate how I can’t stop loving you since that day when I saw you in that fitting room” he mumbled. Sera who had no idea about the fitting room stared at him curiously.

“What fitting room? I thought the first time we met was when you knocked me down in front of our school gate” she pinched his nose seeking for answer “You better tell me everything Park Jiminieeee” she whined.

“You are impatient. I was planning to tell you, don’t use violence on your sweetheart” he removed her hand off his nose and wrapped it around his neck. Their bodies are pinned closer than they were before and it made Sera blush.

Jimin chuckled softly “Stay still, dummy” he whispered.

“Remember your first school theatre? Jungkook went for an audition of one of the roles; I did not know what got him because he was not talented at all. He persuaded me to come and watch his awful acting so I did. Then Jungkook freaked out when he found out there was no man to do his makeup and hair, now tell me how that guy is still alive after discriminating people via gender” Sera chuckled as the memories of her very first theatre role came to her mind.

He continued “So, he S.O.S me. I went to find him at the backstage but to my surprise it was huge as hell, I got lost. I had no idea where I was, there were too many rooms, wardrobes, and people. I made way to the east then I heard an angelic voice seeking for help in one of the fitting rooms” Sera now had her eyes fix on his because she seemed to figure out where this story might lead. She let him continue to confirm her assumptions.

Jimin smirked “ I saw a girl struggled in her tight top. At first I did not want to help since I was afraid that you might smack me for being in that fitting room with you staring at your exposed skin” Sera slapped his shoulder glaring at him with a frown.

“So that saviour was you! It freaked me out when you were no longer to be seen, I really thought it was a freaking ghost” Sera brows twitched.

“I did not actually leave; I was hiding across your fitting room. I couldn’t take a good look at you, so I decided to hide” he defended himself.

“And creeping on me?” she raised her eyebrows as she knocked her forehead with softly.

Jimin pushed his forehead hitting hers back “I did not. Well I was trying to confirm

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nochusunshinerainbow
#1
Chapter 39: Thanks for writing this incredibly beautiful story!!!
nochusunshinerainbow
#2
Chapter 30: Oh my gosh!!! This is really unexpected!!!! I really love your story!!! A lot of surprises!!
Namjoonadmirer
#3
Hi. I would like to say thank you for writing such a beautiful stories. I read all of your stories and its give me a lot of happiness during my semester break. Unwind is the best story and for the first time, i'm in love with jimin in AFF. I wish u a lot of happiness and thank you again :)
Violetflowers
#4
Chapter 40: Hi author I finished reading this, guess who is cryibg *points self* it is me. Cant believe I read such beautiful stories? Your writing makes me emotional. I sure want to see more of this genre in the future. I love Jimin and Sera. I will miss them and everyone.
Minaluvv #5
Chapter 40: Hi authornim, I enjoyed “unwind” a lot, so much that it only took me 2 days to finish this story, despite my busy schedule. I love how you plot and twist the story and they are interesting and addictive. On TOP of that, I love how Sera and Jimin loved each other so much that they didn’t let just anyone come into their life even when they were not dating. Thank you again for this wonderful story.
Violetflowers
#6
Chapter 10: This story is so intriguing, I cant wait to finish it. I really love Sera! She is fiction but relatable character. Rooting for more of Sera and Jimin.
tartytorts
#7
Chapter 39: Okay. I am ready to go through the emotions again. Firstly, I'm glad I read this, it wasn't my usual genre but I stuck around for the epilogue and I am glad I did.
I have always been a Jungkook bias in fanfics, like i feel he fits every character written about him to the T. Jimin is a soft character and usually does well in either or extremely bad boy romances.
This story reversed the order for me and it took me some time to wrap my head around the reversal. I always rooted for Team jungkook and even after the epilogue I cannot decide which team I like better, its like Sera would have a different feel with both of them so its incomparable. I liked all the characters here, i could visualise them as they were described. The choice of words was simple and effective. It knitted the plot without any complexity that would hinder your plot or make it lose itself in the fancy schmancy and that is something I love. Nothing like Less is more right?
Coming to the story-
1. The backstory is so emotionally rich. You feel the pain, you feel the love and longing. The sting of loss, the void of everything around you collapsing like a house of cards *ehh see what I did there?*
2. I love how fatherly Jin is. I love everything that man does lmao. His motherly brotherly character tickled the plot by lightening it up through the revenge and love drama.
3. Revenge and betrayal play a hidden undertone in this- right from Sera's best friend who dated JK to the major antagonist Max. Its very difficult to write these scenes I know but you delivered well. Like it makes me hate his character so you succeeded.
4. Coming to the actual love triangle I did not enjoy the confusion a lot partly because I was on Team kook and i hoped she would go back to him. Even in the last when Jimin breaks up I hoped for her to end up with Jungkook (this is only me being salty as a subjective kookie wrecked cookie) like i throughly enjoyed flirty jimin bcz i can imagine the real jimin being this adorable pouty bad blob of mush too.
4. I really did feel so emotional at the entire thing. Jungkook started over. Jimsera have a family. Other friends have their world. Yoongi is apparently a hot man in uniform whoa.
If this was your first fic then this is legit your baby master piece because there wasn't a single dull moment. It concluded beautifully. Also i love how you format everything.
Bunny i hope you enjoyed my comment bcz i enjoyed this a lot. I am moving on to nip in the bud now lmao
iilydia #8
Chapter 39: oh my god, this story was so good. I was on an emotional roller coaster. Thank you for this wonderful story :')
tartytorts
#9
Chapter 39: Bunny.... why did you do th-this to me?....I need to compose myself. Wait then i will give my comment.
*takes a deep breath*
tartytorts
#10
Chapter 11: Oh no i cannot decide my team either :(