Author's Note

Unwind
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Hello everyone, I swear this wont be long *Im trying to*

So that is the end of it for Unwind. When i first started writting this story, i didnt expect it would end up to be this long and can i say fast? I usually proscrastinate most of the time, but i really put heart and soul to this one. I dedicated my life just for Unwind i just dont know why. And as i mentioned earlier, my writing style is just so me, i am writing with my mind and zero ideas of how it would turn out. 

Again, i am so thankful that they are people out there reading my stories and leaving comments. I am deeply touched since i didnt expect that. The upvote that i recieved too was overwhelmed (this is really beyond my expectations, what did i do that i deserve this kind of sweet gesture) okay enough being a drama queen. Oh gosh i literally read each of every comments that you left and i tried my best to response, and gosh thank you so much to you kind souls who never fail to amuse me with your comments everytime i update my chapters. 

Huge thanks and huggies to these beautiful souls for your kind comments <3

maknaetrash_ , omgsunnie, husunaglorymorning , kpoplovers251, parkjimjim

And also to subscribers which again i didnt expect it would to exceed 100, gosh im shedding legit tears here! God bless your kind souls. Love you to the moon and back.

Check out my second Un-series entitled Untold do check it out if you are interested. I have started posted two chapters there:))

Untold

 

From this one onwards you dont need to read the so called post-mortem below, it is just me ranting about the storyline and the characters ;)

1. Who is the main star in this story?

So if you notice this, it is actually Jeon Jungkook. The storyline is actually revolved around Jungkook's life yes sometimes there are few things major happenes to Sera and Jimin but most of it are tangled with Jungkook's plots. I have to say the main spotlight of Unwind is Jungkook, himself. I purposely ended this story with Jungkook because the whole point of this story exist at first place is bcs of him. Bangtan friendships start to bloom bcs of Ju

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Thank you for 10K views and, new subs and upvotes xx Im deeply touched unwind is still alive <3
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nochusunshinerainbow #1
Chapter 39: Thanks for writing this incredibly beautiful story!!!
nochusunshinerainbow #2
Chapter 30: Oh my gosh!!! This is really unexpected!!!! I really love your story!!! A lot of surprises!!
Namjoonadmirer #3
Hi. I would like to say thank you for writing such a beautiful stories. I read all of your stories and its give me a lot of happiness during my semester break. Unwind is the best story and for the first time, i'm in love with jimin in AFF. I wish u a lot of happiness and thank you again :)
Violetflowers #4
Chapter 40: Hi author I finished reading this, guess who is cryibg *points self* it is me. Cant believe I read such beautiful stories? Your writing makes me emotional. I sure want to see more of this genre in the future. I love Jimin and Sera. I will miss them and everyone.
Minaluvv #5
Chapter 40: Hi authornim, I enjoyed “unwind” a lot, so much that it only took me 2 days to finish this story, despite my busy schedule. I love how you plot and twist the story and they are interesting and addictive. On TOP of that, I love how Sera and Jimin loved each other so much that they didn’t let just anyone come into their life even when they were not dating. Thank you again for this wonderful story.
Violetflowers #6
Chapter 10: This story is so intriguing, I cant wait to finish it. I really love Sera! She is fiction but relatable character. Rooting for more of Sera and Jimin.
tartytorts #7
Chapter 39: Okay. I am ready to go through the emotions again. Firstly, I'm glad I read this, it wasn't my usual genre but I stuck around for the epilogue and I am glad I did.
I have always been a Jungkook bias in fanfics, like i feel he fits every character written about him to the T. Jimin is a soft character and usually does well in either or extremely bad boy romances.
This story reversed the order for me and it took me some time to wrap my head around the reversal. I always rooted for Team jungkook and even after the epilogue I cannot decide which team I like better, its like Sera would have a different feel with both of them so its incomparable. I liked all the characters here, i could visualise them as they were described. The choice of words was simple and effective. It knitted the plot without any complexity that would hinder your plot or make it lose itself in the fancy schmancy and that is something I love. Nothing like Less is more right?
Coming to the story-
1. The backstory is so emotionally rich. You feel the pain, you feel the love and longing. The sting of loss, the void of everything around you collapsing like a house of cards *ehh see what I did there?*
2. I love how fatherly Jin is. I love everything that man does lmao. His motherly brotherly character tickled the plot by lightening it up through the revenge and love drama.
3. Revenge and betrayal play a hidden undertone in this- right from Sera's best friend who dated JK to the major antagonist Max. Its very difficult to write these scenes I know but you delivered well. Like it makes me hate his character so you succeeded.
4. Coming to the actual love triangle I did not enjoy the confusion a lot partly because I was on Team kook and i hoped she would go back to him. Even in the last when Jimin breaks up I hoped for her to end up with Jungkook (this is only me being salty as a subjective kookie wrecked cookie) like i throughly enjoyed flirty jimin bcz i can imagine the real jimin being this adorable pouty bad blob of mush too.
4. I really did feel so emotional at the entire thing. Jungkook started over. Jimsera have a family. Other friends have their world. Yoongi is apparently a hot man in uniform whoa.
If this was your first fic then this is legit your baby master piece because there wasn't a single dull moment. It concluded beautifully. Also i love how you format everything.
Bunny i hope you enjoyed my comment bcz i enjoyed this a lot. I am moving on to nip in the bud now lmao
iilydia #8
Chapter 39: oh my god, this story was so good. I was on an emotional roller coaster. Thank you for this wonderful story :')
tartytorts #9
Chapter 39: Bunny.... why did you do th-this to me?....I need to compose myself. Wait then i will give my comment.
*takes a deep breath*
tartytorts #10
Chapter 11: Oh no i cannot decide my team either :(
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