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Chapter 4: If you keep this up, I am not sure if this is the last time you hugging me

 

Jimin threw his body on his king size bed, sighing in relief after the last exam ended few hours ago. He had been spending his precious time studying his off despite not having any confident whether he passed the exam. He did not care about college or whatsoever. He lazily rubbed his hair upon hearing soft knock came from his door ‘Ugh can everyone just leave me alone’.

It took few minutes before he finally got up and opened the door harshly “WHAT THE DO YOU WANT?” he yelled at the figure stood before him thinking it was his annoying step sister Song Sunhi.

To his surprise it was not Sunhi “Sera?” his eyes widened to see her in front of his door, looking scared. He cussed under his breath blaming himself for being super sensitive; he almost forgot that Sera were Sunhi best friend. However, it was his first time to see Sera hanging around his house; she never paid a visit despite being one of Sunhi’s close friends.

She immediately bowed “I am so sor-ry for bothering y-ou..urm. It is just that Sunhi wanted you to come down for dinner? We..kinda cook something?If you care to urm join u-s?” she sounded so unsure and scared.

For once Jimin regretted for jumping into conclusion, he felt guilty that he raised his voice at her. He cleared his throat awkwardly “I t-hought you were Sunhi. I am not hungry but thank you..” Jimin could tell the disappointment on her face as she about to turn away. He did not know where or when he gathered the courage to grab her hand stopping her from walking away. Sera blushed at the sudden contact and slowly turned to see Jimin gazing down at her deep and somewhat it confused her. They were both stood there staring at each other without uttering any words, Sera could feel Jimin’s breath against her skin as they were few inches away.

“I..am sorry..” He broke the silence.

Sera blinked at him, biting her lips nervously ‘ I never know Sunhi’s step brother is good looking. This is my first time to see him up close. Okay, what I am thinking?’ she studied his face, from his small smiley eyes, down to his perfect nose and her eyes landed on his pink plump lips. She cussed herself for being so stupid and creeping on her best friend’s brother.

Jimin hid his smirk when he saw how nervous Sera was, he noticed she was staring at his face. Following her gaze, he slowly let go Sera’s arm when he heard Sunhi’s voice “Is everything alright?” Sunhi gave both of them a wary glance. Flustered Sera quickly swayed her body to the left as she accidentally hit her body against the wall ‘Tsk Clumsy’ Jimin smirked at her clumsiness.

“Sera, you idiot. Are you okay? Why are you so flustered?” Sunhi helped Sera to balance herself.

“Mm.. im okay I will get down and help Kiara” she almost stumbled, slamming her face down on the cold tile as she about to make her way down. Jimin was quick enough to circle his arms around her waist preventing her from any unwanted accident. Her heart raced quickly as she could Jimin’s warm embrace and the smell of his cologne so close to her. She shut her eyes tight as her hand clutching onto his bicep for balance.

Sunhi shook her head and watching those two having the typical romance drama scene in front of her ‘Seriously? Jimin doesn’t even care if I lay flat on ground now he actually cares that Sera might fall? He likes her isn’t he?’ she smirked to herself.

Jimin mumbled softly close to Sera’s ears “If you keep being clumsy, I am not sure if this is the last time you hugging me. ” he bit down his lower lips teasing her.

Sera flushed at the soft voice that was so close to her sensory organ ‘Damn Sunhi’s brother’ she squished his biceps softly to regain her balance and stood up straight. Jimin was staring at her with his playful eyes; she swore to god she could see him smirking at her stupid action. She shyly bowed, tugging her best friend arms as they stormed downstairs to get Kiara.

 

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Jimin’s POV

I watched Sera’s figure disappeared from my sight, with a big smile and I entered my room slamming the door shut. My head was in cloud nine, I could not think straight. ‘Did I

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nochusunshinerainbow
#1
Chapter 39: Thanks for writing this incredibly beautiful story!!!
nochusunshinerainbow
#2
Chapter 30: Oh my gosh!!! This is really unexpected!!!! I really love your story!!! A lot of surprises!!
Namjoonadmirer
#3
Hi. I would like to say thank you for writing such a beautiful stories. I read all of your stories and its give me a lot of happiness during my semester break. Unwind is the best story and for the first time, i'm in love with jimin in AFF. I wish u a lot of happiness and thank you again :)
Violetflowers
#4
Chapter 40: Hi author I finished reading this, guess who is cryibg *points self* it is me. Cant believe I read such beautiful stories? Your writing makes me emotional. I sure want to see more of this genre in the future. I love Jimin and Sera. I will miss them and everyone.
Minaluvv #5
Chapter 40: Hi authornim, I enjoyed “unwind” a lot, so much that it only took me 2 days to finish this story, despite my busy schedule. I love how you plot and twist the story and they are interesting and addictive. On TOP of that, I love how Sera and Jimin loved each other so much that they didn’t let just anyone come into their life even when they were not dating. Thank you again for this wonderful story.
Violetflowers
#6
Chapter 10: This story is so intriguing, I cant wait to finish it. I really love Sera! She is fiction but relatable character. Rooting for more of Sera and Jimin.
tartytorts
#7
Chapter 39: Okay. I am ready to go through the emotions again. Firstly, I'm glad I read this, it wasn't my usual genre but I stuck around for the epilogue and I am glad I did.
I have always been a Jungkook bias in fanfics, like i feel he fits every character written about him to the T. Jimin is a soft character and usually does well in either or extremely bad boy romances.
This story reversed the order for me and it took me some time to wrap my head around the reversal. I always rooted for Team jungkook and even after the epilogue I cannot decide which team I like better, its like Sera would have a different feel with both of them so its incomparable. I liked all the characters here, i could visualise them as they were described. The choice of words was simple and effective. It knitted the plot without any complexity that would hinder your plot or make it lose itself in the fancy schmancy and that is something I love. Nothing like Less is more right?
Coming to the story-
1. The backstory is so emotionally rich. You feel the pain, you feel the love and longing. The sting of loss, the void of everything around you collapsing like a house of cards *ehh see what I did there?*
2. I love how fatherly Jin is. I love everything that man does lmao. His motherly brotherly character tickled the plot by lightening it up through the revenge and love drama.
3. Revenge and betrayal play a hidden undertone in this- right from Sera's best friend who dated JK to the major antagonist Max. Its very difficult to write these scenes I know but you delivered well. Like it makes me hate his character so you succeeded.
4. Coming to the actual love triangle I did not enjoy the confusion a lot partly because I was on Team kook and i hoped she would go back to him. Even in the last when Jimin breaks up I hoped for her to end up with Jungkook (this is only me being salty as a subjective kookie wrecked cookie) like i throughly enjoyed flirty jimin bcz i can imagine the real jimin being this adorable pouty bad blob of mush too.
4. I really did feel so emotional at the entire thing. Jungkook started over. Jimsera have a family. Other friends have their world. Yoongi is apparently a hot man in uniform whoa.
If this was your first fic then this is legit your baby master piece because there wasn't a single dull moment. It concluded beautifully. Also i love how you format everything.
Bunny i hope you enjoyed my comment bcz i enjoyed this a lot. I am moving on to nip in the bud now lmao
iilydia #8
Chapter 39: oh my god, this story was so good. I was on an emotional roller coaster. Thank you for this wonderful story :')
tartytorts
#9
Chapter 39: Bunny.... why did you do th-this to me?....I need to compose myself. Wait then i will give my comment.
*takes a deep breath*
tartytorts
#10
Chapter 11: Oh no i cannot decide my team either :(