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Chapter 16: Let me go, so you will be free

 

Narrator’s POV

The small apartment echoed with Hoseok’s loud voice forcing everyone in the house to wake up from their deep sleep. Jungkook grunted with his eyes half open, as he wrapped the blanket around his body forcing himself off from bed. He bumped into Yoongi on his way out and they both scoffed.

Namjoon yawned loudly with one hand rubbing his already messy hair taking a seat between Yoongi and Jungkook. Jungkook who had his chin rested at the arm of the couch paid no attention to excited Hoseok ‘Why in the world this hyung so hyper? It is still morning ughhh’ he squished his eyes tight, annoyed.

“Listen to me; this is not the time to sleep! I have good news” Hoseok pulled the laptop facing those three sleepy men who were actually ready to kick Hoseok into a pulp for ruining their morning.

“Whatever Jung Hobi… Why can’t you wait until we fully awake?” Yoongi let out a deep grunt making no effort to open his eyes properly. He leaned his head against Jungkook’s shoulder practically snuggled into his warm blanket.

Hoseok rolled his eyes “You are going to regret this. There is an article relating to slush fund scandal and plus the illegal business by the infamous Kim Corps” Jungkook eyes shot opened upon hearing his statement. His hand unconsciously shoved Yoongi’s face away towards Namjoon side causing both of them to growl in anger.

“What? How is that possible? I don’t remember that in our plan ”Jungkook brows knitted into a frown. He had no idea about the slush fund scandal it was not part of his plan, and then he realized the only person who was capable in digging such things.

Jungkook moved his gaze to Yoongi “Were you the one who sell those stories out?”

Yoongi gave a slight nod “When I hacked into their security system, I got carried away. So I ended up finding something that I shouldn’t, and then I realized we could make money from it. Besides, if you want to push them inside police radar slush fund scandal is the perfect start of the game. The deeper they dig, it will end up to Max suspicious business, the money that this company wired out can be a major lead” he explained the whole situation and his future prediction like a real detective.

In fact, he did not stop as he continued, “I did not reveal to the journalist who is the Kim Corps, even so they will figure it out sooner or later. They pay me a big sum of money for this information, therefore it benefits you and I both way. Don’t worry all of you will have a share” Jungkook snickered at his hyung genius plan.

“Bloody hell, you are genius Min Suga!” Hoseok smirked while clapping his hand like a fan.

Namjoon who had his eyes close tight now were wide open “So, you are saying. You are using medias to get the cops to investigate this company? Not bad, Yoongi” he smirked.

“The tips that we sent alone would not be enough for them to build a case against the Kims. Their company is huge they will just think it is another method for their enemy to bring them down. Come to think about it, if I give the evidence of the slush fund to the cops we don’t know yet who will be on our side. There is a possibility that they may bury the evidence without even investigating it. So, medias are the best way to aim the bad guys” the three boys nodded in agreement to Yoongi’s relevancy.

A sly smirk spread wide on Jungkook’s face “Therefore, the cops have no choice but to at least pretend they investigate this or else public will criticize them. Whoa Min Suga you turn out genius” he nudged Yoongis’s shoulder.

Yoongi crossed his arms with a proud smile “You may need this Chief Min someday in the police force” he chuckled. Min Yoongi was the hidden gems among them despite having a rough life since he was a kid; he was born with high intellectual thinking. They had to admit Yoongi could be child prodigy if he was raised in a good family and got a proper education.

Jungkook received a call from Max’s right man and his laughter died instantly. Others noticed the change in Jungkook expression as they carefully studied the boy without uttering any words. For some reason, they feared the consequences of betraying Max considering he still had Jungkook’s mother with him.

He hung up and immediately snatched the laptop from Hoseok “They emailed me something” he mumbled as he shifted uncomfortably in his seat. Hoseok moved to Jungkook’s side as all of them now had their eyes fixed on the screen. The link that they sent Jungkook via email brought them to a private live stream website, it made them gasped.

It was a clear image of Jungkook’s mother stood on a stool with her hand tied up over her head attached to the ceiling. Her hair falls messily covering her face as they could hear her soft whimper from the screen. Jungkook clenched his fists in anger. His mother looked so horrible, her clothes were torn and dirty and he cussed himself for taking a long time to find her.

“What is he up too?” Namjoon spoke quietly through clenched teeth.

Big Max the guy that they expected would appear finally making his way circling Jungkook’s mother in provoke way, he took a deep breath before looking at the camera. “Have you been missing your mother Jeon Jungkook?” his voice was cold and rusty.

“I warned you didn’t i? Be a good boy, then I spare your mother’s life. Look who rebels, after years becoming my dogs. You are interesting Kook. To be honest I am exhausted to look after your worthless mother, and I realize maybe she is better off with your father. Don’t you think?” Max’s fake laugh made them wanted to puke. Indeed, he was a psychopath.

“He can’t be real right” Yoongi hissed in anger. He hated Big Max ever since he found out how he made his friend suffered.

Max then started to load his guns with bullets, every click sound from the guns drove Jungkook crazy “This bastard, I am going to kill him” he scowled and angrily clutched onto his hair, frustrated.

Again, he felt useless because he could not do anything to stop this psychopath for the second time. He did not want his mother die before him again not after that horrifying event years ago.

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nochusunshinerainbow
#1
Chapter 39: Thanks for writing this incredibly beautiful story!!!
nochusunshinerainbow
#2
Chapter 30: Oh my gosh!!! This is really unexpected!!!! I really love your story!!! A lot of surprises!!
Namjoonadmirer
#3
Hi. I would like to say thank you for writing such a beautiful stories. I read all of your stories and its give me a lot of happiness during my semester break. Unwind is the best story and for the first time, i'm in love with jimin in AFF. I wish u a lot of happiness and thank you again :)
Violetflowers
#4
Chapter 40: Hi author I finished reading this, guess who is cryibg *points self* it is me. Cant believe I read such beautiful stories? Your writing makes me emotional. I sure want to see more of this genre in the future. I love Jimin and Sera. I will miss them and everyone.
Minaluvv #5
Chapter 40: Hi authornim, I enjoyed “unwind” a lot, so much that it only took me 2 days to finish this story, despite my busy schedule. I love how you plot and twist the story and they are interesting and addictive. On TOP of that, I love how Sera and Jimin loved each other so much that they didn’t let just anyone come into their life even when they were not dating. Thank you again for this wonderful story.
Violetflowers
#6
Chapter 10: This story is so intriguing, I cant wait to finish it. I really love Sera! She is fiction but relatable character. Rooting for more of Sera and Jimin.
tartytorts
#7
Chapter 39: Okay. I am ready to go through the emotions again. Firstly, I'm glad I read this, it wasn't my usual genre but I stuck around for the epilogue and I am glad I did.
I have always been a Jungkook bias in fanfics, like i feel he fits every character written about him to the T. Jimin is a soft character and usually does well in either or extremely bad boy romances.
This story reversed the order for me and it took me some time to wrap my head around the reversal. I always rooted for Team jungkook and even after the epilogue I cannot decide which team I like better, its like Sera would have a different feel with both of them so its incomparable. I liked all the characters here, i could visualise them as they were described. The choice of words was simple and effective. It knitted the plot without any complexity that would hinder your plot or make it lose itself in the fancy schmancy and that is something I love. Nothing like Less is more right?
Coming to the story-
1. The backstory is so emotionally rich. You feel the pain, you feel the love and longing. The sting of loss, the void of everything around you collapsing like a house of cards *ehh see what I did there?*
2. I love how fatherly Jin is. I love everything that man does lmao. His motherly brotherly character tickled the plot by lightening it up through the revenge and love drama.
3. Revenge and betrayal play a hidden undertone in this- right from Sera's best friend who dated JK to the major antagonist Max. Its very difficult to write these scenes I know but you delivered well. Like it makes me hate his character so you succeeded.
4. Coming to the actual love triangle I did not enjoy the confusion a lot partly because I was on Team kook and i hoped she would go back to him. Even in the last when Jimin breaks up I hoped for her to end up with Jungkook (this is only me being salty as a subjective kookie wrecked cookie) like i throughly enjoyed flirty jimin bcz i can imagine the real jimin being this adorable pouty bad blob of mush too.
4. I really did feel so emotional at the entire thing. Jungkook started over. Jimsera have a family. Other friends have their world. Yoongi is apparently a hot man in uniform whoa.
If this was your first fic then this is legit your baby master piece because there wasn't a single dull moment. It concluded beautifully. Also i love how you format everything.
Bunny i hope you enjoyed my comment bcz i enjoyed this a lot. I am moving on to nip in the bud now lmao
iilydia #8
Chapter 39: oh my god, this story was so good. I was on an emotional roller coaster. Thank you for this wonderful story :')
tartytorts
#9
Chapter 39: Bunny.... why did you do th-this to me?....I need to compose myself. Wait then i will give my comment.
*takes a deep breath*
tartytorts
#10
Chapter 11: Oh no i cannot decide my team either :(