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Chapter 8: Miss me girl? You sure are bold. You went straight into my arms.

 

Narrator’s POV

Two weeks since her last encounter with Jungkook, she gathered her sane thought to give him a call and asked him out for a drink, but failed. In frustration, Sera kicked at the pebbles ‘I got his number yet I don’t have any guts to call him. I thought I wanted to get over this’ she bit her lower lips, shoving her hand inside her sweater to find warmth. It was unexpectedly chilly today; she made her way quickly into the building heading to her class.

She walked pass the classes and made a sharp turn to the right, something caught her attention as she slowed down her pace. She took few steps close as she heard music blasted from the room; the door was left opened a little. For some reason, Sera was extremely nosy today so she peeked a little, leaning against the door ‘Pink hair seriously? But at least he dances well’ she smiled at the sight before her.

She didn’t see his face clearly as it was covered with his sweaty bangs but her smile turned into a gasp as she realized who the person was ‘Jimin?’ Sera froze. She could not remember when the last time she saw him, and the sight of him sent tingles in her heart. Her conscious mind did not actually hold herself back from tugging her lips into a smile, she missed him.

Jimin could see her reflection from the mirror “Sera” he immediately stop whatever he was doing, and turned to her. They were staring at each other longingly, did not know how to react. ‘Oh god I really want to pull you into a tight hug now Kim Sera. I am missing you like crazy’ he approached Sera who seemed shock. Judging from her expression, she did not expect to see Jimin like this.

They went to same college and it was very hard to see each other. It was rather weird that they ended up meeting this way, Jimin stopped in front of Sera. They were very close but Sera made no effort to look away, she was gazing at him in awe or more like his breathtaking presence was overwhelming. Jimin and Sera were too busy staring at each other that they did not realize the college janitor was pushing a huge cart with brooms and mop stuck out at the edge of the cart, the janitor made his way through the school hallway.

“Dangerous and heavy load. Make way for the cart, kids” the sound of the cart was getting closer to where Sera stood, as it made its way pass her, Sera felt her body was pushed forward. Sera stumbled in Jimin’s warm embrace; it was like a rerun of the scene at Sunhi’s house few years ago. Jimin had his arms secured around her waist as he held onto her small figure like a fragile vase.Sera had her hand palmed on his chest as her face was squished in his shirt, she could feel his heartbeat. It was racing crazily, so did hers.

Jimin missed her sweet scent, her warmth and now she was in his arm again like she did few years ago “Missing me girl? You sure are bold. You went straight into my arms.” he whispered lowly in her ears. Jimin’s nose made a slight contact near her neck; he cussed in his head liking the softness of her skin.

She was crimson red now; she missed those flirty vendettas that he always had to get her. Gathering her courage, she tip-toed a little closer to his earlobe “So, does it flutters you? I forgot how warm your embrace was” she teased Jimin.

He was taken aback with her attitude, the Kim Sera five years ago would mewl and being all embarrassed around him. Jimin did not expect her to boldly reply him with a flirt ‘She is a tease. Oh god Kim Sera why are you doing this? I am afraid I may not want to let you go’ he bit his lower lips trying to control himself.

“My arms always open for you whenever and wherever” he chuckled between his soft whisper and slowly setting her straight on ground again.

Sera tucked a strand of hair behind her ears and bit her lower lips shyly “You always know how to tease a fragile heart like me” she mumbled.

Jimin chuckled at her shyness ‘Now she is being all kitties in front of me. Where is that boldness again?’ he ran his fingers following the length of her hair and studied her face. “Right, I forget that your heart has a very soft spot for me. I am sorry, if I am by any chance making my way right into your heart” he smirked. Sera did not know how their skinship became so natural, his every touch made her nervous but it didn’t bother her. She actually loved how they flirted, exchanging looks and innocent touch.

Sera ended up spending her time in Jimin’s practice room having conversation, once in a while Jimin’s hand would end up caressing her hair. They were comfortable with each other ,it somehow brought them closer. It was a major steps for both Sera and Jimin to accept their feelings for each other and when the right time c

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nochusunshinerainbow
#1
Chapter 39: Thanks for writing this incredibly beautiful story!!!
nochusunshinerainbow
#2
Chapter 30: Oh my gosh!!! This is really unexpected!!!! I really love your story!!! A lot of surprises!!
Namjoonadmirer
#3
Hi. I would like to say thank you for writing such a beautiful stories. I read all of your stories and its give me a lot of happiness during my semester break. Unwind is the best story and for the first time, i'm in love with jimin in AFF. I wish u a lot of happiness and thank you again :)
Violetflowers
#4
Chapter 40: Hi author I finished reading this, guess who is cryibg *points self* it is me. Cant believe I read such beautiful stories? Your writing makes me emotional. I sure want to see more of this genre in the future. I love Jimin and Sera. I will miss them and everyone.
Minaluvv #5
Chapter 40: Hi authornim, I enjoyed “unwind” a lot, so much that it only took me 2 days to finish this story, despite my busy schedule. I love how you plot and twist the story and they are interesting and addictive. On TOP of that, I love how Sera and Jimin loved each other so much that they didn’t let just anyone come into their life even when they were not dating. Thank you again for this wonderful story.
Violetflowers
#6
Chapter 10: This story is so intriguing, I cant wait to finish it. I really love Sera! She is fiction but relatable character. Rooting for more of Sera and Jimin.
tartytorts
#7
Chapter 39: Okay. I am ready to go through the emotions again. Firstly, I'm glad I read this, it wasn't my usual genre but I stuck around for the epilogue and I am glad I did.
I have always been a Jungkook bias in fanfics, like i feel he fits every character written about him to the T. Jimin is a soft character and usually does well in either or extremely bad boy romances.
This story reversed the order for me and it took me some time to wrap my head around the reversal. I always rooted for Team jungkook and even after the epilogue I cannot decide which team I like better, its like Sera would have a different feel with both of them so its incomparable. I liked all the characters here, i could visualise them as they were described. The choice of words was simple and effective. It knitted the plot without any complexity that would hinder your plot or make it lose itself in the fancy schmancy and that is something I love. Nothing like Less is more right?
Coming to the story-
1. The backstory is so emotionally rich. You feel the pain, you feel the love and longing. The sting of loss, the void of everything around you collapsing like a house of cards *ehh see what I did there?*
2. I love how fatherly Jin is. I love everything that man does lmao. His motherly brotherly character tickled the plot by lightening it up through the revenge and love drama.
3. Revenge and betrayal play a hidden undertone in this- right from Sera's best friend who dated JK to the major antagonist Max. Its very difficult to write these scenes I know but you delivered well. Like it makes me hate his character so you succeeded.
4. Coming to the actual love triangle I did not enjoy the confusion a lot partly because I was on Team kook and i hoped she would go back to him. Even in the last when Jimin breaks up I hoped for her to end up with Jungkook (this is only me being salty as a subjective kookie wrecked cookie) like i throughly enjoyed flirty jimin bcz i can imagine the real jimin being this adorable pouty bad blob of mush too.
4. I really did feel so emotional at the entire thing. Jungkook started over. Jimsera have a family. Other friends have their world. Yoongi is apparently a hot man in uniform whoa.
If this was your first fic then this is legit your baby master piece because there wasn't a single dull moment. It concluded beautifully. Also i love how you format everything.
Bunny i hope you enjoyed my comment bcz i enjoyed this a lot. I am moving on to nip in the bud now lmao
iilydia #8
Chapter 39: oh my god, this story was so good. I was on an emotional roller coaster. Thank you for this wonderful story :')
tartytorts
#9
Chapter 39: Bunny.... why did you do th-this to me?....I need to compose myself. Wait then i will give my comment.
*takes a deep breath*
tartytorts
#10
Chapter 11: Oh no i cannot decide my team either :(