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Chapter 1: Best Friends forever right?

 

Kiara’s POV

It was never easy at first place moving to this unfamiliar neighbourhood with my inability to speak like locals. I sighed to myself as I remembered how stupid I was for not practicing my mother tongue language fluently back in England. This reminds me to not take things for granted as we never know when we need the skills in the future. I had a hard time adjusting in my new school and I was bullied and labelled as an “Arrogant Wannabe White ” for using English as a way to communicate with people. Nevertheless, I overcame the hardships with the help of two angels that meant the world to me, Kim Sera and Song Sunhi.

 

*Flashback*

“Do you even learn manners in England?” said the tall girl with big eyes who had been staring down at me fiercely. I nodded timidly afraid that I might offend her even more. The other girl who I assumed her devoted followers, step on my thigh seemed unsatisfied with the answers that I gave.

“YAH! ARE YOU MUTE? CANT YOU ANSWER HER CLEARLY?” the pain grew even more as she kept pressing my thigh with her filthy and unsanitary foot. I finally gathered my courage to answer her “ y-es..i am sorry…if I offend y-ou..i will make sure next time to talk formally” i held back the groan at the back of my throat.

The tall girl leaned down and held my chin to face her up “ It is called courtesy. Sunbaenim is for a senior like me. You don’t call me by my name, “you” or even worse “yaaa”. You understand me new girl?” she snickered. I nodded weakly as my tears cascaded down slowly hitting the ground. The other girl lifted her foot off from my thigh and walked away leaving the broken me alone. As I was about to get up, I saw two pairs of hands before me offering help. I looked up and I saw two girls with not much difference in height staring at me with their concern looks.

The girl with cute bangs broke the silence “Let us help you. You do not seem alright” her voice sounded friendly and she gave me a sincere smile. I hesitated at first because I was afraid of meeting fake people who ended up hurting me again.

I heard another soft voice talking to me “ Don’t worry we won’t hurt you, we just want to help. Trust us, please?” the other girl with smiley eyes convinced me. I was in pain and couldn’t even stand up by my own; therefore I reached out and hold their hands as a support. They brought me to school’s medical room and I was treated by the friendly and kind school nurse. Both of them left for awhile and came back with the principal Mrs Song.

I was taken aback to see the principal and bowed at her politely, however she insisted for me to sit down as she didn’t want I got hurt. “I heard from Miss Song and Miss Kim that you were hurt. Mind to tell me what happen?” she sounded concern.

“I tripped. I am sorry” I hung my head down afraid to tell the truth about those bullies. I was sure they would be after me if I ever told anyone about the incident.

The girl with bangs hissed “ Liar. You weren’t tripped; I was there with Sera witnessing the whole thing. You should not be afraid of telling the truth. You must protect yourself from those bullies”

The other girl whom I assumed named Sera nodded in agreement “ We saw the girls treated you awfully. Don’t worry we will be your witness; we cannot let this thing slide. It is a serious offence. It is never okay for anyone to get bully that is just so wrong. I am sorry if I am overreacting but I don’t like to see people getting hurt” I chuckled at her last word a little.

I did not want to cause trouble here not when it was only my first month in the school. The principal took my hand and gently rubbed it “Dear, tell me is it true you were bullied? Remember this is not a petty case, you must tell me then only I can help you and the bully” her words were as warmth as her presence. I missed this motherly attention.

“Y-e..yes. I was bullied by these senior girls. They were never satisfied with anything that I did and made fun of my ability to speak fluent Korean. I apologized for causing trouble please do not punish them. I promised to diligently work out my Korean skills and adjust in this new environment” I held back my tears which by anytime soon might roll down. Sera and the girls with bang sat beside me and held my hand tights assuring everything will be alright.

“From now on we will be protecting you just like how we protect our delicious lunch boxes from being stole” the girls with bang cracked a not so funny joke but it made me smile a little.I could feel the sincerity from these two girls and ever since then we were never apart from each other.

*End of Flashback*

 

Sunhi’s chirpy voice brought me back to reality “Oi, Cho Kiara I have been looking for you everywhere. Don’t you know how hard it is to walk in these heels?” she pouted.

I giggled at her unending nagging of the heels “Did I remind you not to wear heels; it is just a school talent sho

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nochusunshinerainbow
#1
Chapter 39: Thanks for writing this incredibly beautiful story!!!
nochusunshinerainbow
#2
Chapter 30: Oh my gosh!!! This is really unexpected!!!! I really love your story!!! A lot of surprises!!
Namjoonadmirer
#3
Hi. I would like to say thank you for writing such a beautiful stories. I read all of your stories and its give me a lot of happiness during my semester break. Unwind is the best story and for the first time, i'm in love with jimin in AFF. I wish u a lot of happiness and thank you again :)
Violetflowers
#4
Chapter 40: Hi author I finished reading this, guess who is cryibg *points self* it is me. Cant believe I read such beautiful stories? Your writing makes me emotional. I sure want to see more of this genre in the future. I love Jimin and Sera. I will miss them and everyone.
Minaluvv #5
Chapter 40: Hi authornim, I enjoyed “unwind” a lot, so much that it only took me 2 days to finish this story, despite my busy schedule. I love how you plot and twist the story and they are interesting and addictive. On TOP of that, I love how Sera and Jimin loved each other so much that they didn’t let just anyone come into their life even when they were not dating. Thank you again for this wonderful story.
Violetflowers
#6
Chapter 10: This story is so intriguing, I cant wait to finish it. I really love Sera! She is fiction but relatable character. Rooting for more of Sera and Jimin.
tartytorts
#7
Chapter 39: Okay. I am ready to go through the emotions again. Firstly, I'm glad I read this, it wasn't my usual genre but I stuck around for the epilogue and I am glad I did.
I have always been a Jungkook bias in fanfics, like i feel he fits every character written about him to the T. Jimin is a soft character and usually does well in either or extremely bad boy romances.
This story reversed the order for me and it took me some time to wrap my head around the reversal. I always rooted for Team jungkook and even after the epilogue I cannot decide which team I like better, its like Sera would have a different feel with both of them so its incomparable. I liked all the characters here, i could visualise them as they were described. The choice of words was simple and effective. It knitted the plot without any complexity that would hinder your plot or make it lose itself in the fancy schmancy and that is something I love. Nothing like Less is more right?
Coming to the story-
1. The backstory is so emotionally rich. You feel the pain, you feel the love and longing. The sting of loss, the void of everything around you collapsing like a house of cards *ehh see what I did there?*
2. I love how fatherly Jin is. I love everything that man does lmao. His motherly brotherly character tickled the plot by lightening it up through the revenge and love drama.
3. Revenge and betrayal play a hidden undertone in this- right from Sera's best friend who dated JK to the major antagonist Max. Its very difficult to write these scenes I know but you delivered well. Like it makes me hate his character so you succeeded.
4. Coming to the actual love triangle I did not enjoy the confusion a lot partly because I was on Team kook and i hoped she would go back to him. Even in the last when Jimin breaks up I hoped for her to end up with Jungkook (this is only me being salty as a subjective kookie wrecked cookie) like i throughly enjoyed flirty jimin bcz i can imagine the real jimin being this adorable pouty bad blob of mush too.
4. I really did feel so emotional at the entire thing. Jungkook started over. Jimsera have a family. Other friends have their world. Yoongi is apparently a hot man in uniform whoa.
If this was your first fic then this is legit your baby master piece because there wasn't a single dull moment. It concluded beautifully. Also i love how you format everything.
Bunny i hope you enjoyed my comment bcz i enjoyed this a lot. I am moving on to nip in the bud now lmao
iilydia #8
Chapter 39: oh my god, this story was so good. I was on an emotional roller coaster. Thank you for this wonderful story :')
tartytorts
#9
Chapter 39: Bunny.... why did you do th-this to me?....I need to compose myself. Wait then i will give my comment.
*takes a deep breath*
tartytorts
#10
Chapter 11: Oh no i cannot decide my team either :(