Making it through

Twisted Revelation
You slowly awoke from unconsciousness, to a destroyed apartment, and Jae was nowhere to be found. There were holes in almost every wall, almost every window was busted, and there were huge, gaping holes in the ceilings. You slowly started to move, then the pain in your wrist and on your side immediately pressed your nerves. "" you yelled as the pain shot through your body. You slowly got up using your unbroken wrist and made your way to your room while holding your side, to get some medical wrap. You painfully popped your wrist back into place, and slowly wrapped it with the medical wrap. You then left the mess of a room you had, and slowly made your way out of the apartment, and into Bang's Hummer. You had a 6 hour drive from LA to San Francisco, and you had to drive it all with 1 hand. All the 6 hours finally past, and you made your way to the hotel, limping. Many people asked you if you needed help, but you kindly refused as you knew you were already close to your destination. It was 3am when you finally made it to the hotel room and slowly knocked on the door. Bang, having most of his energy back, jumped over everything in the hotel and opened the door, not even asking who it is. When Bang saw it was you, his eyes starting tearing up as he immediately pulled you into a tight embrace. "Evelyn.....Evelyn" was all Bang said as he held you in his arms crying, not caring who saw him. He looked down and saw you crying too, as you held on to him with your good hand. "Bang, loosen up, my side hurts"'You said, wincing in pain. "I'm sorry"'Bang said, helping you inside as everyone else ran up to you too give you hugs as well. Bang helped you to the couch so you can sit down. "What happened to your wrist?" Daehyun asked. "Jae broke it." You replied back. "Who's Jae?" Daehyun asked confused. "My ex, he was behind the whole thing. He disguised himself as Zelo so he could carry out his plan for revenge, since I didn't get back with his after he cheated on me." "Ahhh" Daehyun said quite surprised. "That was a really long fight Evelyn, like 8 hours" Youngjae said, seeing how bruised up you were. "I only fought him for about two hours" you said, while leaning back on the couch. "Then why did it take you so long to get here? Teleporting over here doesn't take that long" Himchan asked wondering. "I drove...." You said back to Himchan. "WHAT, WHY?? That's a 6 hour drive!" Zelo said shocked. "I gave them up" you said looking at Zelo. "What do you mean...have them up?" Bang said looking at you. "My powers, they're gone." You said looking down. "But how??" Jongup said, knowing you were supposed to keep your powers since you had the seal. "I opened my last channel because when Jae broke my wrist, the energy in my arm dropped by 75%. He was starting to win the resistance battle so I had to run my gauge to zero, so my hand could make it to his face and release the seal. And that's what cost me my powers." You said, looking at everybody. "Once the gauge within you reaches zero, you lose your powers. You continued, as you shifted in your seat a bit. "We're just happy you made it here alive" Jongup said smiling. "Thank you" you said back, as everyone closed in on you to give you another hug. All you could do was smile. "Where's a bed, I'm tired as hell" you said laughing, as Bang got up to help you to your bed.
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Nata97 #1
Chapter 28: Good job :) the Endung killer my feelzzz *-*
bap_dae_wifey
#2
Chapter 28: this is the best story i have read to far omg! i wish you could make this a book i would so buy it!!
that_asiandork #3
Chapter 28: Awwwww that ending though... ugh my feels!!!!!! Great job authornim I can't wait to see your future work. Maybe a little sequel to 'Twisted Revelation"? Haha I think I've officially become a fangirl of your story, hehe. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love, Kelzbelz98
lovelost9
#4
Chapter 28: i love you too bang. lol..
that was cute at the end. awwww i finally finished my story. that was so cute
that_asiandork #5
Chapter 27: Yay everyone's together again!!!!! I can't believe Evelyn lost her powers though, well at least they can all be power-less together haha! Awesome update, are you going to continue to update from here? I hope so cause I love your story and I'd love to know more of what happens!!!!!!! Keep up the great work. \(^_^)/
that_asiandork #6
Chapter 26: Woooooooo!!! That's what I'm talking about!!! Great update!!!!!!
lovelost9
#7
Chapter 26: OH DANG BROKEN WRIST AND SHE STILL HANGING ON. I LOVE HER!! let's just hope she gets reunited with bang. and the rest of the crew
that_asiandork #8
Chapter 25: EVELYN'S EX?! What! OMG he did all this just to get revenge on her? Can someone say 'Phsyco'? Ugh and he tried to kill Yong Guk! Ahhhhh, come on Evelyn you can take him out girl!!!! Great job with the update can't wait for the next one! Yay for updates!!!
that_asiandork #9
Chapter 24: OHHH fake Zelo you're gonna get IT!! I'm so sad though that all the boys lost their powers (^~^). I hope Evelyn kicks the fake Zelo's ! Who is he anyway though? I hope everyone gets reunited after this big upcoming battle. Love the update, so keep'em coming!!!! Great job authornim!!!!!!!!!! \(^_^)/