Chapter 11.

Shower Of Sorrows [ In the process of editing ]
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"Hyung, are you alright? You are looking rather uncomfortable" Sehun looked over at Chanyeol who had both his hands underneath the table, trembling.

 

"Oh, no i'm fine~ so what were you saying just now?" He held both his hands together, trying to stop himself from shaking any further.

 

Why was he feeling this way? Why was he trembling? What was he afraid of?

 

"You seemed alittle flustered when i mentioned about you and Hyeri always coming here often to eat.. Did i say something wrong?" Sehun asked while eating his meal.

 

Chanyeol was too deep in his thoughts that he didn't even hear what Sehun was saying. "Hyung! Are you really okay?" Chanyeol's body jerked back alittle and he kept blinking his eyes mulitple of times.

 

"I'm fine~i'm fine"

 

"Oh, ~~~~~~ is back" Sehun looked up towards me and gave me a smile.

 

"Sorry, i took so long~ you guys still haven't finish eating yet?" I looked over at the table and noticed that Chanyeol's plate of food wasn't even half finished.

 

"I'm done~ but hyung isn't" Sehun pointed at Chanyeol.

 

I glanced over at Chanyeol and our eyes met before i could even say something, he had already looked away. "I don't feel like eating anymore,"

 

"i told you said you were hungry?" I asked him, trying to sound as normal as i can be even though on the inside all i wanted to do was scream right in his face for lying to me. 

 

"I think i was already full when we arrived here but then i saw the menu and suddenly thought i was hungry," he explained.

 

"do you mind if i eat yours then? I'm still kind of hungry" Sehun asked in between our conversation. "sorry, just that i hadn't had anything since yesterday's dinner"

 

Chanyeol pushed his plate and Sehun immdiately began eating it all. Watching Sehun eat was adorable to watch and i didn't know why. Suddenly the anger i felt earlier was fading alittle and I tried hard not to let out a little chuckled at the way Sehun was munching that plate of chicken cutlets.

 

At the corner of his lips was covered with that barbecue sauce from the cutlets, it was as though i was watching a little child having his favourite meal. "Slow down or you might choke" I told him and he stopped eating all of a sudden.

 

He looked at me with a surprised expression, "what?" i asked and he just shook his head before continuing his last bite of the cutlet. 

 

 

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"Thank you for the awesome meal hyunggg~" Sehun thanked Chanyeol as soon as we got out of the restaurant and Chanyeol just nodded his head.  "I should get going, my mum just texted me saying that she needs me to help her with some things at home AGAIN, see you guys next time then~ bye hyung and ~~~~~~"

 

"bye" I waved a little hand out.

 

When Sehun had disappeared from our sight,the anger in me started to built up again so i walked away from Chanyeol. I didn't want to say anything to Chanyeol at the moment.

 

"Hey, why did you walk so fast?" Chanyeol grabbed my wrist and turned me around.

 

He took a step back when he realized that i was glaring at him. "Look, i'm sorry alright..i didn't mean to lie-"

 

"Save it Chanyeol, i am in no mood to hear your explainations right now" I pushed away his hand on mine and brushed past him.

 

"~~~~~, please don't be like this" He came and stood right infront of me.

 

"Really Chanyeol, i just don't feel like talking to you right now" I told him and blocked my way when i wanted to continued on walking. "Chanyeol, move"

 

"NO! Not until you hear what i have to say" I couldn't even walk away, he had already taken a firm grip on my w

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superdupper
#1
Chapter 31: Awwww lobe it so much. Many obstacle had the oc have face. But there's always sehun and baekhyun beside her when chanyeol neglect her or when she's sad. I'm happy for the oc
saerakimj #2
Chapter 14: OH GOD I KNOW ITS 2015 AND I JUST STARTED THIS FF TODAY BUT OH GOD CHANYEOL YOU R SON OF A JUST LEAVE ME ALONE AND STAY WITH HER OH PLS STOP LYING
adyoreyou
#3
Chapter 14: oh god chanyeol is such a douche!!! when will he stop lying ughhh so frustating
adyoreyou
#4
Chapter 8: awwww i dont know why im feels hurt right now T_T oh! mybe bcuz u really good in 'you' ff ^^
DeliciousChicken
#5
Chapter 31: god authornim my face is streaked with tears and I probably look like an ugly mess after reading this.

Your story kicked me in the feels so hard... Ahhh~

First tears of pity, then tears of sadness, tears of confusion, tears of frustration, and finally tears of joy. XD omg your writing, though the grammar could be fixed, impacted me a lot. The feelings that you describe seem so achingly real and heartclenching and, at the same time, relieving and light like a hot-air balloon. You had me screaming curses out at Chanyeol about halfway through the fic and squealing because of his utter sweetness in the last bunch of chapters. I love how you made Lee Hyeri so human--being so likeable but not likeable at the same time. How you manage to put detail into her story while still dealing with the main characters' story in a nice, detailed way. Lee Hyeri is a very human character and I applaud you for capturing that part of her in your writing--same with the other characters. With work you can improve your sentence structuring and vocabulary and I bet your writing would touch the hearts of others with your meaningful words and thoughts relating to human feelings.

;u; You did a great job, authornim~
_YeongGi_
#6
Chapter 31: This is just too good to be true. So much drama. I am glad she ended up with ChanYeol.
theebaeyann #7
Chapter 30: sorry for the spam! it just that it was slow and being werid on my computer so u can deleted the others:)
theebaeyann #8
Chapter 31: :))I love this stories alot:) make you feel love, hate, and sad with it. it feel like a kdrama but not much:)
i love so much that it also made me addicted to it:) love more about *you person with others kpop guys^^*
i was really enjoyed reading it:)
Wonuda
#9
Chapter 31: Hahahaha what a cute story . Yeah i hate hyeri .. so bad girl . As for sehun and baekhyun aww i love them so much . You really did great job authornim
LS35879
#10
Chapter 31: I love this story is so beautiful and so e chapters make me cried TT_TT