Bonus chapter Ending III - The Dimples

Star Illusion | ATEEZ Pirate AU

When Hongjoong told him that he should propose to Star, San was in trouble because he never imagined he had to do it.

Marriage. The word sounded too foreign to him.

San spent a lot of time pondering how he should propose to his beloved Star. He wanted to make her the happiest person, so that she wouldn't regret loving him. Yet, he failed to come up with a proposal.

Therefore San sought advice from his mates while trying to keep it a secret from Star. He was nervous that he would fail to impress her and she would reject him.

After listening to the advice he received, he still couldn’t make up his mind. In the end, Wooyoung gathered everyone in the quarter room to think of a plan.

“I’ll start first.” Wooyoung, who claims himself as a love guru, announces. “Take her to a quiet place, pull her to your embrace and kiss her passionately, then look at her in the eyes and propose to her.”

Hongjoong scoffs at the First mate’s idea and turns to the combatant. “Get a ring and give it to her, look her in the eyes then tell her how you feel and propose to her.”

“Hey, you’re copying me.” Wooyoung protests his captain.

“My advice isn’t as superficial as yours.” Hongjoong gives Wooyoung a threatening glare. Wooyoung snorts, rolling his eyes. And soon both of them get into an argument.

“Ahem.” The navigator chimes in with a bright smile. “I’ll propose to her by my self-written poetry.”

“You know poetry?” San asks Yunho curiously.

“Nope.” Yunho answers honestly.

San instantly whips his face toward the youngest man. He is the wisest person on the ship. However, Jongho keeps scratching his neck and flushing cheeks, opening and closing his mouth like a fish. So San glances over to the next person. Mingi looks so enthusiastic to give San a suggestion.

San skips to the next person.

“Hey, what about me???” Mingi whines, but San ignores him.

Seonghwa, sitting next to Mingi, says in a poker face. “You can still change your mind.”

San furrows his eyebrows. Yeosang immediately interferes to cut off Seonghwa's bad advice. “I’ll ask her to stargaze with me. When the time is right, I’ll ask her to dance with me before proposing to her.”

San nods with a thoughtful look. This is the most promising advice, however, he couldn't dance.

While San is lost in his thoughts, Wooyoung and Hongjoong are still arguing and Mingi is yelling at San in the background.

Then Jack suddenly stumbles inside the room. He looks pale and scared. He turns around, trying to open the door, but strangely the door wouldn't open.

“Hey Jack, what will you do if you want to propose to the woman you love?” Yunho playfully asks the lad.

Whirling around, Jack's expression immediately turns dreamy. “I’ll take her to a very beautiful beach and give her something that has memories of us together. Then I’ll propose my love to her.”

“After that?” San asks Jack himself.

“I’ll ask her to play in the water with me.” Jack giggles, still lost in his daydream.

The guys sigh. They peer at San who looks more stressful than before.

 

                                                                       ( ̄ω ̄;)

 

Poor Sannie, he couldn't take any members' advice. 

BTW there'll be another special chapter that will make you go (°ロ°) ! 

̶T̶h̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶I̶'̶l̶l̶ ̶h̶a̶v̶e̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶e̶d̶i̶t̶ ̶i̶t̶,̶ ̶I̶ ̶h̶o̶p̶e̶ ̶i̶t̶ ̶w̶o̶n̶'̶t̶ ̶t̶a̶k̶e̶ ̶l̶o̶n̶g̶ ̶t̶h̶i̶s̶ ̶t̶i̶m̶e̶ .̶ ̶

 

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PhilHarielle
#1
Chapter 91: As a seonghwa biased lad.. This is the ending that I was not aware I badly needed.. Authornim., ypu did it again!!! Congratulations on ending this masterpiece ❤️❤️❤️
predilection
#2
Chapter 92: This is has to be the best Ateez story I read so far (not like I read many anyway XD). Go take a break! Thank you too for such an amazing book! I'll be waiting for your next comeback! Hwaiting!
predilection
#3
Chapter 91: OKAY! I DIDNT KNOW I NEEDED SEONGHWAXSTAR UNTIL NOW! HAHAHAH

I was already feeling proud when she decided not to choose anyone because girl you gotta love yourself first before others nowadays so yeah I'm cool with it until damn that dark guy started to act up! I seriously didn't expect this hahahhahaha but it's a good alternative! We always love a tsundere!

But when she was under his bed? It was at that time when she was hiding from Hongjoong right? I think I need to reread that part I kinda forget half of it's context now.
PhilHarielle
#4
Chapter 90: Thanks so much for this sanstar ending!! This is the cutest and much needed ending but i have to say, my heart will stay with the captain 💚💚
PhilHarielle
#5
Chapter 88: This is worth the wait is all i can say 💚💚
kuronaa #6
Chapter 89: im absolutely in love with this ending, thank you so much for updating ~
predilection
#7
Chapter 88: You know how I say San's ending didn't matter before because I accepted her ending with Hongjoong? That was bull because apparently I'm rooting SanxStar more than anyone else! HAHHAHAHAHHAHAHS IM LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE! Thank you for coming back!!
predilection
#8
Chapter 87: Okayyy I like that you have an alternate ending for each candidates but honestly speaking I accepted her with Hongjoong hahahahahha because it's kinda weird to read she ended with someone else when the whole story has hinted she fell hard for Hongjoong XD but oh well it's for good cause! We're just missing San's ending but it doesn't matter I guess heheh

Anyways as a reader (you should know I'm an avid reader and been here since 10 years ago like wtf that was so long!) I love your story so much! Instead of being a female lead in pirateau of some idol groups your OC is a reader of that story and was transmigrated into it as a side character to watch Y/N and the idol LMAO I found that so creative! I mean that totally scream Extraordinary You but a mix of Scarlet Heart, W:Two Worlds and Romance of Tiger and Rose which! All is my favorite drama so I had a good time reminiscing some scenes XD also your writing style is good! I loveeeeee the humor! I had a good laugh! Though grammar is bit unstable but it's still good! I love Star's character! Keep writing! Thanks for your story!

P.S. I'm sorry for spamming your notifications! T.T
predilection
#9
Chapter 85: Well I'm not really a HongjoongxStar shipper but I'm happy for them! At least a happy ending for all! It's beautiful! And I love the fact that she can escape her ty reality and go to some magical realm with good looking idols as pirates instead of face it head on meh I'm jealous! Should I drop some water on my laptop to get the same effect?? I should right but maybe not on Ateez story I should find some NCT au or Enhypen au yeah I should be happier :')
predilection
#10
Chapter 84: I think she chose Hongjoong! They are clearly a thing back then and she tries her hardest best to keep San as a friend and Yeosang as a companion of some sort HAH but never really resist Hongjoong even though she said they better be friends only! HAH! Hongjoong is your bias right Seakeeper-nim!! Nooo you're not Seakeeper LOL cough SerenitySky-nim!

I might be wrong but a reader can overreact right XD