Until You Stop Breathing

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You are a very sweet and smart girl with a passion for dance. This is a story of you finally taking a stand for yourself and growing into a stronger and better you. Through this journey, you're met with challenges, heart break, new friendships, and even love.

This is my first fanfiction that I'm publishing, so please take care of me *bows*.

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bellejs #1
Chapter 36: i have just read this all in one sitting. i really like it as it has a nice pace to it. i am really looking forward to seeing how you develop the story. well done
yiseul1990 #2
Chapter 31: I really like your story~! It's light, cute, but still has enough substance without being very heavy or overbearing. I like the humor and the light bantering too xD The style sort of reminds me of writers like Whitman who did stream of consciousness styled poetry~
It does make me wonder though if the story will come back to confront the character's issues with the abusive ex. It would be great to see her confront him and stand up/stop him from being such a jerk!
Great job, keep up the good work!
Lani_Definitely #3
Chapter 22: I really like this story so far, it isn't too faced paced, which is good, I'm curious to see what's in store in the future.
Good job and update again soon! <3
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