Chapter 1

Until You Stop Breathing

Chapter 1

               

              Author’s Point of View

                It’s your first year anniversary with Diego and he surprised you with a surprise dinner at your favorite restaurant on grounds (It’s the same thing as campus. Where I go to school we call it grounds ^.^).

                Your Point of View

*Walking back to your dorm from the restaurant*

“Thanks for dinner baby. I loved it!” I say as I give Diego a kiss on the cheek

“Anything for my beautiful princess! Te amo!” he says and plants pepper kisses along my neck.

“Ah! Stop that tickles” I say while lightly hitting him.

“What? What tickles you??” He continues to tease me by kissing my now exposed neck from putting my hair back to the other side of my neck.

“That! What you’re doing!”

“And what am I doing? Hmm?”

“Kissing my neck you pabo!”

“Hey! Hey! Just because you can speak Korean doesn’t mean you can use it on me!”

“Why not? That’s what makes it fun!”

“Yeah for you. Not for me.”

“Sorry it’s a habit.” I say while trying to give my most innocent smile.

“Such a bad habit to have at that!”

“Bwoh!! Is not!”

“Is too!”

“Is not!!”

“Is too!!”

“Is not!!!” I fire back.

“Is too!! Now, I’m going to the restroom. Do you need to go?”

“Ha!! You so did that on purpose!”

“Did what on purpose?” Diego says trying to look innocent.

“Say you have to use the restroom, so you can avoid losing to me.”

“I didn’t do that on purpose! I really have to go pee. And I wouldn’t lose to you!” Diego rebuts, kisses the crown of my head, and scurries to the restroom.

“Aish!! This boy!!” I mutter while smiling and shaking my head.

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bellejs #1
Chapter 36: i have just read this all in one sitting. i really like it as it has a nice pace to it. i am really looking forward to seeing how you develop the story. well done
yiseul1990 #2
Chapter 31: I really like your story~! It's light, cute, but still has enough substance without being very heavy or overbearing. I like the humor and the light bantering too xD The style sort of reminds me of writers like Whitman who did stream of consciousness styled poetry~
It does make me wonder though if the story will come back to confront the character's issues with the abusive ex. It would be great to see her confront him and stand up/stop him from being such a jerk!
Great job, keep up the good work!
Lani_Definitely
#3
Chapter 22: I really like this story so far, it isn't too faced paced, which is good, I'm curious to see what's in store in the future.
Good job and update again soon! <3