Chapter 8

Until You Stop Breathing

Chapter 8

“Hyung I’m sooooooooo tired!” complained Hojin.

“Nado! This was our longest audition yet!” responded Jiseok.

“It wasn’t that bad and the dancers are so much better this year” said Minho.

“Exactly!! Which means we’ll be here forever deciding on who will join!!!” whined Hojin.

“I’m hungry!” exclaimed Youngtae.

“Ya! Quit the complaining! Let’s call for delivery and talk about cuts” JB roared.

“I want chicken!” exclaimed Youngtae.

“I want pizza!” shouted Yountae.

“Let’s get both” said Jiseok.

“Call!!” Youngtae and Hojin agreed together.

“What about _____ssi?” questioned Hojin.

“Anni. Cut” said Minho.

“I liked her” Jiseok defended.

“Why didn’t you like her hyung?” questioned Youngtae.

“Her dancing doesn’t fit our image and I don’t think she’ll fit in anyways” said Minho.

“Mwoh?? Doesn’t fit our image? Her dancing style is different but that’s good! She’ll be able to bring diversity to our group” Jiseok said trying to reason.

“We don’t need an outsider coming in and thinking they’re all that” Minho exclaimed.

“Listen. If we want to beat Black List this year we need a secret weapon and that’s _______ssi” Jiseok said trying to keep his anger down.

“I agree with hyung, Minho hyung. _____ssi is a great dancer with experience and seems like she’ll work hard” Youngtae said.

“I think we should give her a chance to prove herself. If once on the team she doesn’t improve or work hard we can always cut her later” Hojin reasoned.

“I agree!”

“Nado hyung!”

“What do you think of this JB? You haven’t said anything about ____ yet” Minho looked at JB sourly.

“Well, I think that……”

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bellejs #1
Chapter 36: i have just read this all in one sitting. i really like it as it has a nice pace to it. i am really looking forward to seeing how you develop the story. well done
yiseul1990 #2
Chapter 31: I really like your story~! It's light, cute, but still has enough substance without being very heavy or overbearing. I like the humor and the light bantering too xD The style sort of reminds me of writers like Whitman who did stream of consciousness styled poetry~
It does make me wonder though if the story will come back to confront the character's issues with the abusive ex. It would be great to see her confront him and stand up/stop him from being such a jerk!
Great job, keep up the good work!
Lani_Definitely
#3
Chapter 22: I really like this story so far, it isn't too faced paced, which is good, I'm curious to see what's in store in the future.
Good job and update again soon! <3