Hi! Sorry for disturbing you but would you mind read my story to give some advice on how should I improvise my story? Here's the link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1276091
I hope you will enjoy reading it.
Chapter 32: For those who can't find the sequel just wright the name of the story in the SEARCH spot which is "Light" with the authors username which is "smelissa" and than click one of the links you'll sure be able to find it, hope this helps!
Chapter 10: sorry if i say not very nice word....but the plot atvthe beginning seema confusing. can you ellborate why her father is lying about being rich?why his family hate her?
Chapter 30: Nyaaaa so sweet jinhee is pregnant. Yayyy .kuhn with yoonmi. Hahaha I wonder what happened to minjung . Please make a sequel author nim. I hope it's a baby twins. Kekeke
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