This time, I got a review from Peachy Review Shop

This is their review:

Without You

Story Title: 7/10

Comment: Even though the title sounds like a cliché fanfic,it actually suits the story quite well^^Great work~!(Y)  

Storyline: 24/30

Comment: Oh my gosh,can I tell you,this fic made me cry at some partsTT TT I feel so bad for Junhyung... Let her be with Junhyung goddammit! I'm unsatisfied only because of that,in other words-This fic is amazing.^^  

Grammar/Spelling: 6/10

Comment: As much as I want to give you full marks for the great story,your grammar wasn't perfect>.< There are some weirdly phrased sentences,and some misused vocabulary.  

Originality: 5/10

Comment: Though I loved the fic,it wasn't exactly the most original one.The plot line has been used before,but usually the girl would end up with the guy who she liked back(in this case,Junhyung) than the guy she actually married(Doojoon) so,nice twist!  

Flow: 9/10

Comment: The flow was rather smooth,and quite enjoyable.  

Characters: 15/20

Comment: The guy characters were very well portrayed in this fic,but what about the female protagonist?She seemed too perfect,and unrealistic.I mean,it's not very common having two hot guys fall in love with you,right?  

Want for updates: -N/A-

Comment: -The story's finished-

Total: 66/90= 73% Good job^^  

Suggestions: -None-(since the fic is already over)

Criticism: Just work on your grammar,but since you've already said that English wasn't your first language,I'm not complaining much.

Since this fic was so great(in my opinion) I'm going to add it in the recommended fics section:)

Reviewed by PeachCherryProposal

Haha~ I got in to the recommended fic section. Thank you so much, Peach~ ^^

Review credit to PeachCherryProposal